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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

AMAZING!!!

trust me dear out of all your works this is my favorite!!!

what an update!

but why did kay give her that apple???

i thought kay wanted her alive so that she can surrender her to the devil!

waiting for the last chapter...with a beautiful fairy tale ending!!!

but why do you want to end it so soon??

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

I have just read all the chapters now and its awesome...loved the story...characters...plot..writing...everything...w8ng for next update.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

god, why would she do that? he asked her not ti, told her not too. this is too painful but its literally like reliving my childhood, with Cinderella and fairy tales

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

I just loved it too the core❤️ ❤️

Oh no Khushi eat the apple, why??? Arnav told to her that he would found another way, but has Khushi is too selfless, and too good she did it for him, for her love.

Anjali is alive, and Khushi is dead, no maybe not dead just asleep, just like snow white, hope they find a solutions to make Khushi alive once again.

thanks for the update, eagerly waiting for the next part

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Very well written update! :)

Really loved Lavanya in this. Khushi is right. She's really selfless!

Aww Akash finally asked her for a dance!

Lovely update!!

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Every time I read this story I was in a hurry!

So couldn't comment much!

I want to tell you, even though I comment on this story in just a few lines it has found a soft spot to reside in my heart!

It is one heck of an interesting story!

It reminds me of Ordinary Princess by M.M.Kaye, a classic fairy tale written with modern outlook! If you have not read it please do! I'm sure you'll be thrilled to read it!

Coming to the story, you have shown how Arnav chose Khushi over Anjali.

Khushi being a Princess herself knows his decision is unacceptable!

A good Regent has to put the welfare of his subjects before his personal wants and needs.

Even though Anjali was his twin she still was his subject. He could never ignore it in the long run. His decision taken emotionally will not stand the cold scrutiny of duty. Then he will fall in his own esteem!

This Khushi will not be able to witness. She who loves him whole heart with complete faith and trust, would not let him take such a step that would have him regret all his life! Even if were to be able to bring Anjali back into life he will be forever burdened in his conscience of failing in his duty, of putting his subjects before self!

Basically both love one another unreservedly and unconditionally and want only the best for the other.

Loved how La has changed after coming in contact with the bubbly nature of Khushi! She wants to protect her at any cost as she knows Khushi is the key to happiness in Arnav's life!

She has sensed black magic around! I think she is to play an important role here. So Akash has fallen for La! Its good. I would have felt bad that if she was left be alone in the end!

Loved this update! Waiting for the next!

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Oh god...wat an update that was!!!!!!
so khushi is lying lifeless...wats gonna happen nw...
Loved the convo between lavanya and khushi...superb...
And akash and lav convo was also very good...
waiting for the next part very eagerly...

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Swagata

@addicted16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Another story of yours...and i will again say thankyou for this beautiful story🤗👏...love fairy tales and Arhi fairy tale is so special anyday.

I am dying to know what happens next...arnav lost his parents first then had to endure the torture of seeing a lifeless sister and now Khushi whom he loves and after a long time was dreaming of happiness, is gone. 😭 Eagerly waiting for ur next update. Thanks once again. Tc.😊❤️

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#919

update please, the suspense is killing me!!

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#920

I cant believe it that this is coming to an end !!!! This one is like a cocktail of most of the fairytales I have read and heard in my life and kudos to you for churning up something so spectacular 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏