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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

wow what an update

honestly it was amazing

khushi feeling guilty for her life when anjali is a statue, even though she hadnt done anything to put anjali into such a position

arnav feeling lost and upset that khushi is losing herself and his breakdown moment infront of anjali was fab

khushi following her instincts, the apple given by her evil mum has knocked her out cold, and anjali opened her eyes meaning shes back to normal? i wonder

feel sorry for all the characters here

this story being a fairytale is beautifully written, not many people could have done such a thing, you are extremely talented

and im glad that you were forced to bring your stories to the forum, even if at the beginning it was via your sister xoxo

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ag0502

@ag0502

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

OMG!!!!

I LOVE IT...

SO MUCH ALIVE...FEELING THE PAIN

WAITING AGAIN

THANK YOU

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

I always read FT first.

Always!

I love it!

And this update was so gripping!

So khushi has finally taken the step... Whatever it is.

And Anjali is back.

Let's see what happens now.

Brilliantly done Rasgulla!

Thank you!

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

wonderfull update...thanku fr d pm

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

ohh..she sacrified herself...
hope u are not ending it with sepration...
and yes. ..why...ending this so soon..
thanks fr pm

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Omg what happen to khushi?

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

when the update started with the one week leap.. i was wondering what happened to the apple.. but as the story progressed i got to know..

i am glad Akash atleast spoke his heart.. not sure how Lavanya would take it.. but deserves to be loved..

i can't believe I have to wait for a week to know what actually happened.. touching Anjali was understandable.. but eating her step-mum magical apple.. how did that bring anji back?

i was in assumption that Khushi had to deal with the devil to remove the curse and get Anji back.. and i thought the apple was a portal to send khushi to devil directly..

wow.. i am so excited to know the next bit..

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Saiyyu,
Sorry to know that you get more likes for FS than FT.
For FT, first 2-3 updates were really like a simple fairy tale story. But after that it has turned out pretty deep and I really enjoyed it esp the way you penned the nuances, your attention to detail. The way you penned Arnav and Khushi's development of feelings, their dilemma and everything beautifully mixing it with some references to the show like ASR, La etc.
There is no doubt at least for me that I like this more than FS.

After reading your note I am really sad that you would be ending it in next update. but then all good things come to an end eventually right?
I hope you will heed to my request of starting on "HAHK".

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Amazing... this update was perfect..😊

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sowmiya128

@sowmiya128

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

OMG!!! She ate the apple!!!! :-O
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But I wonder if Khushi had told anything to Anjali during their nightly "conversations!" In that case, I hope Anjali can help them out! Hope Lavanya can trace the source of the "bad apple!"
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Oh this has seriously become one of my favorite fairy tales!!!!!! :-) :-) :-)

Edited by sowmiya128 - 12 years ago