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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

Omg...that was one of the best update of the story!
I just loved the scene where khushi heard arnav's breakdown infront of his sister...so the apple helped anjali...but wat now...poor arnav..i've come to fall in love with him in this story!
A little more by each update!
Lavanya is so selfless...so nice...it touches the heart...i hope she gives akash a chance...
Loved the update!
Ps-fairytales have happy endings (just reminding) 😉

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

Amazing update wow cant believe khushi sacrificed herself. Hope arnav is able to bring her back and is anjali really alive

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

U can't d next update d last. I luvd dis story a lot n its cool. Superb update. Atlast anji is back 2 life. Do contd. Kay is really horrible as mom. Hope khushi wake up soon

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

hey dear

awesome part👏

loved it

everything was beautifully described ⭐️... i think this is my fav part so far 😃

i enjoyed reading arnav's thoughts and khushi-La were lovely as usually 👍🏼

arnav speaking to anjie was heartbreaking though 🥺

the ball was lovely. i could perfectly imagine sarun

ofcourse the end was devastating n really awesome at the same time. i love how you entwined cinderella, snow white n even sleeping beauty 👍🏼. i know khushi is gonna be ok, it is a fairytale after all 😛. arnav-khushi must have their happy ending 😳.

im sad you're ending it with 1 more part 😭. u should have 2 more... like let the story end with 15 parts 😆😉.. anyways 😆

eagerly waiting for the next part

take care

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#815

I jst loved it :-Dit was perfect loved it

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

She hate the apple...what will happen

I am sad the next update will be the last

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

OMG!!!! what???😲
she ate the apple while holding anjali??? there might be something significant in that me thinks😳
arnav is really besotted with khushi isnt he?
i really can imagine how lovely they would look together :)
loved the update!!
cant wait for the 20 pd long update for next time lol!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Awesome updates, just read both chapter 12 and 13 and both were fantastic and brilliantly written. Poor anjali, i felt so sorry for her and poor arnav he is so helpless he does not want to give up on khushi, because if he loses her he wont be able to breath, breathtaking. I cant believe poor khushi has ate the apple, pls dont say she has died. As far as i know, fairy tales always end with a "they lived happily ever after" so pls dont change this tradition, lol. Cant believe this fabulous story is ending soon, 😭 thanks for the PM xxx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago