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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww sad deepu...wanna cry...plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Aww...poor rey!:(...bt he got what he deserved!!
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
hi nic update yaar
pm to me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Love it. Swayam is so supportive bro. He cant see his sis cry. Swayam take taani jodhpor intresting. Update soon. Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Guys next part is here...

Present...

Swayam is sitting near icu and doctor come and said:mr.shekhawat...your siater is out of danger now...u can take her home after two days and plz care that unhe koi tension na ho...

Sw:thanks doctor thank u so much...

Do:its ok...abhi hum unhe dusre ward me shift kar rahe hai phir aap unhe dekh sakte hai...

Sw:ok doctor thanks...

Swayam call all gang members about this...and all members come...they never saw swayam like this.all consol swayam...vicky notice that rey is not here so he call rey and ask...rey told him everything and ask about taani...

Vi:rey taani ab thik hai...

Rey:thank god...plz tum kuch bhi karo...mujhe taani se milna hai...

Vi:me kuch karta hu dude...u dont worry...

Rey:thanks yar...

Vi:no need to say thanks rey...jab me phone karu tab tum yaha aa jana...

Rey:ok...

Vicky told to swayam...swayam u go home and fresh up...hum log hai yaha...

All:ya swayam u go...hum hai yaha...

Sw:ok guys...

Swayam goes and vicky call rey...

Rey comes and ask him where is taani...

Vicky told him that she is in ward no.2...

Rey goes in but no one see him...only vicky knows that he is in...

In the room:

Rey come and see taani unconsious and tear roll down from his eyes...

He sit near taani and slowly said:taani...

He take her hand in his hands and put his head on it...

With his magical touch taani comes in her sense...but rey doesnt know about it and saying something in the same position...

Rey:taani I m really sorry for everytime hurting u...m sorry for every time be angry on u...firgot all things taani just remember one thing...i love u...i love u so much...i love u more than anyone I love in my life...plz taani jaldi se thik ho jao so me tumhe ye baat keh saku...but rey ko to pata hi nahi ki taani sun rahi hai...

As he finish his sentense he feel that taani hold his hand and he see at taani...who is looking at him...with tears in her eyes...as rey is about to apeak anything...vicky come and said...rey jaldi kar swayam aa raha hai...

Rey:ha...1 min...

Vicky hold his hand and said no 1 min wo yaha aata hi hoga...and he drag him with him...taarey couldnt help just looking at eachother...

After rey go...swayam come and sit near taani...

Sw:taani how r u feeling now...

Ta:feeling better bhai...

Sw:ok...kal tumhe yaha se leave mil jayegi...

Ta:no bhai...i want to go home now...plz bhai mujhe yaha bilkul achha nahi lag raha hai ...

Sw:ok...me doctor se baat karta hu...

Swayam goes and taani thinks about rey...

Ta in her mind...(rey kaha hai aap ...i need u and bhai both...plz bhai ko jaldi se mana lo...)

Rey at his home...

Rey thinks(jese ki usne taani ki baat sun li)(ya taani me swayam ko jaldi hi mana lunga...)

Swayam ask doctor and doctor give permission to take taani home...

Taayam goes home...

Taani is in her room...resting on her bed ...

Swayam come and ask her...kuch chahiye tumhe??

Ta:nahi bhai...aur aap ne kuch khaya...

Sw:ha...mene khs liya...aur tum fresh up ho jao...me tumhare liye dress nikal deta hu...and,swayam open her cupboard and see rey's photoes in it ...

Seeing this swayam get angry and said...ye sab kya hai taani...me us insan ki tasveer bhi nahi dekhna chahta jo tumhe hurt kare...

Ta:but bhai...

Sw:no buts taani...and swayam call to someone ...

Ta:bhai aap rey ko call kar rahe hai...

Sw:nahi...

Other person pick up the call...

Sw:hello...ma...me aur taani aa rahe hai...

Ma:per beta ese achanak...

Sw:me vaha aake sab batata hu...and he cuts the call...

Ta:bhai plz...aap kehte ho to me rey se baat nahi karungi par aap mujhe unse dur kyu kar rahe hai??

Sw:raki wo tumhe hurt na kar sake ...

Ta:par bhai...

Se:taani give me your phone...

Taani gives and swayam switched off it...he switched off his phone also and both gows for jodhpur...

Here rey try to call swayam and taani but cant...
Rey is so worried about taani and call his friends and ask about swayam but un sabko bhi kuch pata nahi tha...

In jodhpur:

Taayam reach home and swayam tell all that taani ka accident hua tha...(rey ke baare me thodi batayega)

Taani is in her room...thinking about rey...

In the hall:

Swayam thinks...(kya mene taani ko yaha lakar thik kiya...yaha aakar wo aur chup ho gai hai...shayad mene thik nahi kiya...i know wo rey se pyar karti hai...aur ab rey bhi...par agar usne phir se taani ko hurt kiya to...nahi me risk nahi le sakta...vaise bhi abhi vo thik nahi hai...uske thik hote hi me kuch sochunga...)

Taani in her room...remember all her moments with rey and one word come on her lips..."rey"...and a tear roll down on her cheek...

Here rey is sitting in his home and thinks kaha hogi taani and he feels that jaise ki taani ne use pukara...he stands up and said...taani...he find her in his house but its inly imagination...

He fell on his knees and said...kaha ho tum taani...

After 2 days...

Taani is alright now...swayam notice taani's behaviour and decide to give rey a chance...

He call rey from his another number...

Rey:hello...kaun?

Sw:rey...me swayam...

Rey:swayam...tum kaha chale gaye??me sach keh raha hu...i love taani...plz understand rey...

Sw:rey...meri baat sun...m sorry yar me gusse me kuch jyada hi bol gaya tha...

Rey:its ok...i know tu taani ko leke kuch jyada hi possessive hai...

Sw:ha...vo to hu...ab sun tumhe yaha aana hai...jodhpur...me tujhe ek address sms karta hu...tum vaha aao...aur taani ko apne dil ki baat batao...kyu ki me taani ko aur udas nahi dekh sakta hu...aur phir mujhe tumse mafi bhi to mangni hai...

Reu:swayam jaldi msg kar...me abhi niklta hu...sham tak aa jaunga...

Sw:ok...

Rey got the msg and vo niklta hai... .

Here swayam take taani to somewhere ...its a hall...hall is decorated with red roses...and heart shape balloons ...

Sw:taani yaha hamare ek purane frnd ki b'day party hai...tumhe yad he ...rohan...

Ta:ha bhai ...par koi dikh kyu nahi raha hai...

Sw:ha bas sab aate hi hoge...and his phone rang...its rey...

Sw:taani me abhi aata,hu...

Ta:ok...

Swayam goes...rey is outside... . As swayam saw him and hug him and aay ...sorry yar...

Rey:its ok...

Sw:ab andar jao...me taani ke face par smile dekhna chahta hu...

Rey:ok...

And rey goes in...

Taani is standing there and suddenly light goes off...taani is scared and said...bhai...aap kaha hai??

As taabi said this a spotlight flash on someone...

He is far so taani cant saw his face but as he comes closer she can see him...after seeing him her eyes filled with tears...she ran toward him...he is rey...her rey...her prince charming...

She ran and goes in rey's arm...she hug him tight ...tears are constantly flowing from her eyes...

Rey also hug her back tight...just dobt want to leave her ...his eyes also filled with tears ...

Ta:rey...us din aap aaye the hispital me par me keh nahi payi ki me aap se ab bhi utna hi oyar karti hu jitna hamesha se karti aayi hu...i love u too rey...

As taani said this...rey cup her face and said I love u taani and shower kisses on her eyes , forehead,cheek...he cinstantly kiss her ...

After some time taani stop him and see tears in his eyes and wipe it...and she kiss his forehead and hug him...rey also hug her back...

And then swayam come...

as taani saw swayam...she broke the hug...

Ta:bhai me...vo...

But swayam take her hand and put it in rey's hand...

Seeing this taani understand that swayam is no more angry with rey...

Taani hug swayam and,said ...thanks bhai...

Sw:taani...thanks mat bolo...ye to meri respibcibility thi ki me tumhe tumhari khushi du...

They broke the hug...

Sw:rey...ab taani ko khush rakhna...use hurt mat karna...varna...

Rey:janta hu varna tu mujhe sat sat ke marega he na...

Sw:ha...

Three of them laugh and share a hug...


The end...

Guys plz like and comment how it is...your commentts means a lot to me ...

And this is the last update... I can update anything after my exams...so my ff update after my exams...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dips...it was so intense lovely update..Rey and Tanni together finally!!!! loved the last TaaRey scen aww:)
Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
👏 wow , very very nice 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
loved it diii😊
thanx 4 d pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
wow taayam d mst adorable bro=sis nd cute swayam oww😳 gr8 os dips aur taarey ke baare mein toh kya bolu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
oh man its too good...taareyam...really sweet bt taani's accident oh gosh...waiting plzz update soon

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