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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys...taarey par to hum sab ss ff os likhte hai...as time is running too slow for us I thought why not write an os on taareyam...so here is this...hope u all like it...

In this rey is angry on taani but he is still confuse about his feelings for taani...he become sure about his feelings through swayam...taani is upset because of rey's behaviour...swayam is also upset becoz taani is upset...

Present:

Taani is in I.C.u...

Swayam and rey are outside I.c.U...

Dr:mr.shekhavat your sister is in critical condition...now just pray to god that use kal tak hosh aa jaye...

Dr goes from there...tears are flowing from reyam's eyes...

After some time rey come to swayam...

Rey:swayam I m so sorry...i dont want to hurt taani ...but us waqt me esi situation me nahi tha ki kuch bhi samaj saku...plz try to understand me...

Sw:understand??u hurt taani rey...taani jisko me hameaha khush dekhna chahta tha...aur tumhari vajah se wo sad rehti thi...pehle to mujhe laga tha ki taani koi reason ki vajah se upset hogi but kal jab usne bataya ki tum ne use reject kiya tha...me sari baat samaj gaya wo kyu upset thi...why rey...why?why did u do this to taani?

Rey:mene kuch bhi jaan bujh kar nahi kiya swayam...us waqt me kuch bhi sochne samjne ki halat me nahi tha...meri situation ko bhi to samjo swayam...

Sw:kya samju me rey...kya samju...taani ki halat dekho...agar use kuch bhi hua na to...

Rey:kuch nahi hoga swayam plz esa mat bolo...

Sw:to kya bolu rey...(swayam is crying)

Rey:kuch nahi hoga taani ko swayam...hum dono ka pyar use kuch nahi hone dega...(rey is also crying)

Sw:hum dono ka ...no rey...tum taani se ab nahi miloge...pehle kyya tumne use kam dukh diye hai...

Rey:no swayam plz esa mat karo...

Sw:rey plz leave me and taani alone...

Rey:but...

Sw:pplz rey leave now...

Rey leave from there...he thinks...i know swayam tu abhi mujhse gussa hai...but I know jese hi taani thik hogi tum mujhe samaj jaoge...

Rey went home but not able to eat and drink as he was so worried about taani...

Swayam's situation is same...

Sw thinks(sharon kash tum yaha hoti...)

Swayam ne bhi kuch bhi nahi khaya tha...he is sitting outside I.c.u as body with out soul and thinking about what just happen...

Flash back: .

Swayam is just came from college...taani was already at home...

Sw:taani...

Taani is in her room...sitting on couch near window and thinking about rey's behaviour and tear flow from her eyes...now sge cant take rey's anger more...

Here swayam is searching for taani and goes in her room...he saw taani there and said...taani tum yaha ho...

He went near her and call her for two times but taani is lost in her thoughts...

Swayam touch her and shake her...

Taani came to her sense and look at swayam...

Swayam saw tears in her eyes and worried...

Sw:taani kya hua??tum ro kyu rahi ho??plz taani batao kya hua??

As swayam ask her she ug swayam and cried like a baby...

Swayam's eyes also teary seeing taani crying...

Sw:raani kya hua...

Taani:bhai me kuch bata na chahti hu...par aap promise kijiye aap kisi ko ye baat nahi batayege... .

So guys hows it??should I continue?plz like and comment...

Index
Part 1:above
Part 2:page 6
Part 3:page 9

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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Riddhima

@...Rhythsy...

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Posted: 12 years ago

yipeee!!! i m d 1st one 2 comment

di it was oswome 👏

i just loved it❤️

wondering aage kya hoga😕

plz plz plz continue di😊

n update soon😃

n thanx 4 d pm😳

Edited by tarey_forever - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dipu omg Taani in ICU 😭 what happen to her that she is in there am too impatient to wait. This is wonderful and different dipu am loving it so far. I feel so sad for Reyam especially swayam no one is with him. Plzxxx continue soon am dying to know what happen

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

YES!!!! a TaaReYam OS!!! love u for this!!!

n u HAVE to cont di!!! aise suspence mein OS khatam nhi kar sakti aap!!! cont ASAP!!!!

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

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Posted: 12 years ago

dips its gud :) taani icu me hope she gets well soon...update soon

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salta

@salta

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Posted: 12 years ago

res
unres...
wow...but so much suspense...
what happened to her that she's in ICU...
plz plz plz update fast..

Edited by meghasingh - 12 years ago

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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dipu , this is really good ! taani in ICU OMG kya hua usse :/ And i love the protective Swayam and how he told rey to go away just cz he hurt Taani ! Do continue (=