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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys here is the next part.hope u all like it.

flashback continues...

Taani hug swayam and said:bhai me aap se kuch kehna chahti hu...but aap promice kijiye ki aap ye baat kisiko nahi batayenge. . . .

Sw-i promice taani but batao baat kya hai?tum ro kyu rahi ho?

Taani broke the hup and take swayam on her bed.

Both sit there and taani hold swayam's hand and start. . . . .

Ta-bhai me kisi se pyar karti hu.

Sw- what?taani ye tum kya bol rahi ho?aur isme rone ki kya baat hai?ye to khushi ki bat hai. . .

Ta-bhai aap meri puri baat to suniye...

Sw-ha bolo. . . . .

Ta-par me jis se pyar karti hu wo mujhse pyar nahi karte hai. . . .and she told him the whole rejection matter to swayam.

Sw-kya?kon hai wo. . . Jisne meri sweet si sis ko reject kiya?

Ta-bhai vo . . . Rey hai. . . .

Sw-kya?rey?taani tum ye kya kah rahi ho?

Ta-me sach keh rahi hu bhai. . . .

Sw-me abhi us se baat karta hu.and swayam try to go but taani ne uska hath pakad rakha tha and taani said-nahi bhai me unhe hurt nahi karna chahti.

Sw-hurt?tum use hurt nahi karna chahti aur vo tumhe jab chahe tab hurt kar sakta hai.

Ta-nahi bhai esa nahi hai.me samaj sakti hu ki vo kriya se pyar karte the .mera man na hai ki vo abhi bhi kriya se pyar karte hai.

Sw-i understand taani but iska ye matlab nahi ki vo tumhe hurt kare.vo tumhe pyar bhi to samja sakta tha ki vo tumse pyar nahi karta.pehle us shivam ne tumhe hurt kiya aur ab rey ne. . . . .

Ta-shivam?

Sw-ha pehle vo tumhara bf tha na.

Ta-nahi bhai vo mera bf kabhi nahi tha.hum sirf pretend kar rahe the.

Sw-what?taani tum janti bhi ho vo kya kar sakta tha tumhare sath?

Ta-janti hu bhai.

Sw-par taani tum ne esa kyu kiya?

Ta-rey ke liye bhai.me nahi chahti thi ki meri vajah se rey ki reputation par effect ho.isi liye mene juth bola tha. .par. . . .

Sw-par kya taani?

Ta-mujhe nahi pata tha bhai vo aap se aur rey se revenge lene ke liye mera use kar raha hai.mujhe to us rat dance camp me pata chala. . . .and she told him about that night.then taani told that usne gs ki position bhi rey ke liye li taaki unko kyada moniter na kiya jaye.

Now swayam just cant control his anger and said -tumne rey ke liye itna kuch kiya and vo. . . . .me abhi us se baat karta hu. . . . . And he goes to rey's houseswayam take his car.taani went after him. . . But its night so she cant get any rikshaw. . . . So she went by walking.

Rey in his house:

Rey thinking about taani.

Kya ho raha hai mujhe ?taani mujhe itna affect kyu kar rahi hai?kyu me uski aankho me aansu nahi dekh sakta?kxu mujhe achha lagta hai jab vo hasti hai.kyu use kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakta me. . . . .kyu?kya mujhe taani se. . . . Nahi nahi rey. . . Ye kya soch raha hai. . . .

Suddenly door bell rang and rey thinks itni rat ko kon ho sakta hai?

Rey open the door and saw swayam. . . . .

As rey about tn say hi swayam grab his collar and said how dare u rey?how dare u hurt my sis?

Rey-mene ?mene taani ko kab hurt kiya swayam?

Rw-achha. . . . Tn tumne use reject nahi kiya tha. . . .

Rey-ha . . . .to usne tumhe ata diya. . .

Sw-ha aur bhi bahot kuch bataya jise sun kar shayad tum ye jan jaoge ki taani tumse kitna jyada pyar karti hai.

Rey-pyar. . . . . Agar vn mujhse pyar karti to mera sath deti na ki gs banti aur hamare kam me rukgvat banti.

Sw-tumhe ye to nazar aaya ki vo gs bani par ye nahi socha ki vo gs kyu bani?

Rey-kyu bani gs. . . .

Sw-tumhare liye. . . . .taki tum par jyada nazar na rakhi jaaye. . . . Tumko moniter na kiya jaaye aur tum dance ban ke against jo bhi kar rahe ho vo kar sako. . . . .

Hearing this rey ant believe. . . . .he felt giulty. . . .

Sw-aur pata he tumhe vo shivam ke sath kyu thi?

Rey-kyu?

Sw-isi liye ki tumhari reputation uski vajah se effect na ho. . . . Isi liye vo shivam ko jelti rahi.vo sirf pretend kar rahi thi. . . . . Tumne ye socha ki taani par kya biti hogi us rat jab shivam ne us rat uske sath misbehave kiya. . . . Vo kitna hurt hui hogi shivam ki sachai jan kar. . . . .

Rey is crying now. . . . He realize now that use sach me taani se pyar ho gaya hai. . . . He feeling guilty why he hurt taani every time.


Rey-m sorry swayam. . . .me us waqt nahi samaj paya tha ki me us se pyar karta hu par ab samaj gaya hu.ab me jaan gaya hu ki me sirf taani se pyar karta hu.

Sw-no rey. . . . . .dnt say this agaio.me ab use aur hurt hota hua nahi dekhta.tum ab taani se nahi miloge. . . .

Rey-but swayam. . . .

And suddenly swayam's phone rang. . . . .

Swayam pick up the phone. . . .

Sw-hello. . .

Someone-hello. . . .kya aap usko jante he jiska ye phone hai?

Sw-ha vo meri behen hai.aap kon hai?aur uska phone aapke paar kaise?

S-m sorry to say but unkg accident ho gaya hai.vo abhi i.c.u me hai. . . .

Sw-accident?kis hospital ne hai taani?

S-city hospital. . . .

Swayam cut the call .tears are constantly flowing from his eyes...

Rey-swayam kya hua taani ko?city hospital?vo thik to hai na. . . .

Sw!tujhe tension lene ki jarurat nahi hai rey.me hu na uske sath. . . Vese bhi ab tu us se nahi milega. . . . And swayam go from there.

Rey-swayam sun. . . . Plz esa mat kar . . . .plz meri baat suno. . . But swayam ja chuka tha.

Flashback end. . . .

Precap-swayam take taani jodhpur without telling to rey about it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
haa first one to comment on your update 😃😃

love the update pari its awesome 👏👏

and swayam ka anger for his baby sis was awesome and necessary chalo rey ko apni mistake ka ehsas toh hua and precap was int'👏👏

update soon 😊😊
Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
dips😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
very sad os 😭.

hope so next part happy happy ho.
but loved it a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: taareylove

haa first one to comment on your update😃😃


love the update pari its awesome👏👏

and swayam ka anger for his baby sis was awesome and necessary chalo rey ko apni mistake ka ehsas toh hua and precap was int'👏👏

update soon😊😊



thanku so much jaan. . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Dipu it was so emotional, it was well written I love it all. Swayam is a sweetheart am glad that he love Taani so much. And Rey deserve whatever he said to him, now he will feel exactly what Taani been feeling all this time hope she get well soon. And as for the recap omg more drama eagerly waiting to see how Rey will react when he found out about it. Dipu u truly are doing a brilliant job, plz continue asap
Edited by Natasha. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Zuna4Taarey

dips😭


update soon...



itna jayada mat ro zuno. . . . . varna me bhi ro dungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
taani😭😭😭
its really nice👏
plz update soon 🥱
n thanx 4 d pm😳
Edited by tarey_forever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
OMG!!! Rula diya aapne mujhe dii.. But this update was awesome.. I simply have no words to explain how much I loved it.. Update ASAP!! Loving Taayaam.. Precap is sooo interesting.. please update ASAP!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Awww dipu tune mujhe rula diya yar
hope tani thik ho jaldi se

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