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Originally posted by: arshy4ever

SIMPLY THE BEST... That's my first impression Chaitu...😳

I was speechless when I found that you wrote "He had long before admit himself that he liked her and that was it..."... This is the first time I read this line in an FF on IF...

First of all Chaitu, I want to say that I love your writing style... The words you used and the way you used them are just amazing...👏.. Reader's eyes 'll catch it up easily...

The way you said about A and K was excellent...

Khushi's dream about Arnav was fabulous...It's only few words... But you did it in a different way and I loved it...

Father/daughter bond , you mentioned , reminded me of my father... That was a perfect move Chaitu...

This FF is really a beautiful one... Keep writing Chaitu...

ACHU 😳

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Very entertaining..they are so young it all the more seems too cute..
And hey your ff is now in the fanfiction forum. :)
update the title to arhi ff alongwith the chapter number whenever you update so that more people know of it..just a suggestion.

Originally posted by: godhuli_4_Sarun

nice update with the raizada's ... so ayushman is new.. :)

u killed anjali .. 😃
so there is no Didi in your story .. :)

im not also teenager so dont know about that but loved the dance wala scene a lot .. :)

Originally posted by: _disha_

Hi there,

Nice update... so no anjali di 😕

About the too mature for 8th 9th graders bit ... well in my opinion i'd say no.

Of course i am also miles away from being a teen 😆 but all your updates make me feel like a teen 😳.

Frankly aajkal ke teens are anyways way ahead yaar 😉 no offence to anyone !!!!