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Izadora

@izzy0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

hey...

nice plot...

its so cute...

love how arnav and khushi are behaving each other..

their friends are so awesome for trying to bring them together..

lol at garimas reaction to the rumour...

wonder if she is doing her own planning regarding her daughters future...

well i hope you continue soon

sent u a buddy request...

please accept

and send me a pm the next time u update

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Sarunish_Sanny
Wow! :-D 😃😳
Luved the update!!! :-D :-D
Arnav, besharam! :-P 😳 He kept staring at Khushi and didn't even feel uneasy to accept that!! :-D 😆
I love Khushi's friends; seems that they want both Arshi to become close to each other! :-D If I am not mistaken!!! :-P :-P
Update next one soon!!!!!!!! :-D :-D 😃😳
And also Merry Christmas!! :-P Hope you had a wonderful Christmas Chaitalee di!!! :-D :-D
And was Santa Claus generous on you???? :-P :-P

Our Arnav is besharam dear 😳

Yeah Khushi's friends do want them to be together...you weren't mistaken.

Merry christmas to you too...I have lost count of the no. of times we have wished each other 😆

Aur haan, Santa Claus ko mere ghar ka address nahi pata tha...so no gifts 😔

Will update the next chapter on Friday

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: kamtokdin
I like your story. The dialogue though sounds a bit too mature for 9th and 8th grader.

Do you find the dialogue mature? Ok thanks for letting me know...😊but I think it is just this part's dialogues that you found to be mature...correct me if I'm wrong.

And since you have taken up this point. I would like to clarify.

Arnav's admission to staring at her was more out of his mulish behaviour than any other thing. Besides, he can't help himself but stare at her!😉

I like to get feedback from my readers...feel free to post any more of such point of views 😊

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: izzy0502
hey...

nice plot...

its so cute...

love how arnav and khushi are behaving each other..

their friends are so awesome for trying to bring them together..

lol at garimas reaction to the rumour...

wonder if she is doing her own planning regarding her daughters future...

well i hope you continue soon

sent u a buddy request...

please accept

and send me a pm the next time u update

tc

I'm glad that you like this FF...yeah their friends are awesome 😃

Garima's reaction is merely a demonstration of a mother's protective nature.😊

Have accepted your request...will send you pm on my subsequent updates

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Rhea

@BarmeenForever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

Our Arnav is besharam dear 😳
Yeah Khushi's friends do want them to be together...you weren't mistaken.

Merry christmas to you too...I have lost count of the no. of times we have wished each other 😆
Aur haan, Santa Claus ko mere ghar ka address nahi pata tha...so no gifts 😔
Will update the next chapter on Friday

Hayeee Besharam kahinka! :-P :-D LOL 😆😳
Hawww! Santa ko mere ghar ka address bhi pata nahin hai! I think Ghajni has visited Santa! :-D LOL 😆
And yeah! Don't forget! My birthday is tomorrow! :-P 😆😳

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Nice update !!

Trust Arnav not to feel embarrassed about staring even after the confrontation. Good going !!

What's next after the staring sessions?

Thanks for the email.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Sarunish_Sanny

Hayeee Besharam kahinka! :-P :-D LOL 😆😳
Hawww! Santa ko mere ghar ka address bhi pata nahin hai! I think Ghajni has visited Santa! :-D LOL 😆
And yeah! Don't forget! My birthday is tomorrow! :-P 😆😳

Of course I haven't forgotten !😉

yes...Santa Ghajini ban gaya hai...🤣

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

lol dear khushi ...u have a bunch of cupid as friends!!!

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

SIMPLY THE BEST... That's my first impression Chaitu...😳

I was speechless when I found that you wrote "He had long before admit himself that he liked her and that was it..."... This is the first time I read this line in an FF on IF...

First of all Chaitu, I want to say that I love your writing style... The words you used and the way you used them are just amazing...👏.. Reader's eyes 'll catch it up easily...

The way you said about A and K was excellent...

Khushi's dream about Arnav was fabulous...It's only few words... But you did it in a different way and I loved it...

Father/daughter bond , you mentioned , reminded me of my father... That was a perfect move Chaitu...

This FF is really a beautiful one... Keep writing Chaitu...

ACHU 😳

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago