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Originally posted by: Parun_Arshi

I really love your style of writing; the way you express yours thoughts; vivid but precise! Really loved the update on the guptas and raizadas; keep them coming.👏

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

This Chapter was amazing especially how you fathom Abhimanyu Raizada's feelings .. That was superb . I really liked all the descriptions but this line caught my attention :' 'Infact he was so immersed in work that he forgot he had a son who was alive.. ' Arnav more or less is becoming like his dad in a way .. By not expressing himself . Aradhna is an amazing charachter. On the whole I simply love this chapter . You are a fabulous writer, you have this style of writing which glues me to this story . Kudos !! :D Can't wait for the next update :D

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ

Nice update
The raizada's seem interesting
Now there is a new entry of arnav's step younger brother I was wondering if he has a very important role in the story well I know I will have to wait
Well the raizada's have suffered a lot after anjali's and dadi's death
It's really sad that Arnav has a bad relation with his father and brother
Continue soon :-)

Originally posted by: hashey

Hey, just came across thus FF. I am not much into the teeny stories, but I liked this one. Looks interesting.