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thanks pari 4 such a sweet os
loved it
its vry sweett
n best part when he said i love u to her
prithvi or nandni ki yaad aa gyi by god
keep writing more
love u

ya nice and interesting please continue😊

Hey New Os.pari

A cutie pie cutie pie story…

A worthy for a calm read…as it can bring a sweet smile to your face…

N if you are a rajat mugdha fan, den a blush too…

Bst prt described was the way she moved towards him…her 3 yrs old buried legs..shoving them up…

Line which strikes your head through ws- I have lifetime to answer them all..(the q's)..

Mermaid…nice imagination indeed…

Lovly wrk.

lovely work pari too good...
what to say about the story n u...u r such an awesum writer...really amazing piece of writing...very well written...
do write more sweety...
luv u...
by the way i m hoping to get my lappy back before x-mas,then again i m able to ud my ff...like nandu i m also on 9th cloud... :-))

Originally posted by: ridzzi

lovely work pari too good...
what to say about the story n u...u r such an awesum writer...really amazing piece of writing...very well written...
do write more sweety...
luv u...
by the way i m hoping to get my lappy back before x-mas,then again i m able to ud my ff...like nandu i m also on 9th cloud... :-))

lappy ni aya but don't worry os toh tab bhi ayega n x-mas se pehle...n yup rashmi pehle os hi ayega n i m sure u guys r going to luv it...pucho kiu
mat pucho main bataungi bhi ni...when u will read it u urself will got to know why i m so sure about it n about once upon well uske liye toh wait karo couz abhi toh os hi ayenge... :-)

Thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
beautiful os but too short!!
liked their imagination mermaid!!
so they started!!

beautiful awesome amazing 👍🏼