ARIYA FF: Yeh pyar maine kyun jaana? Pg139 - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi,first time comment kari rahi hoon...isliye chotu and sweet rakhne ki koshis karti hooon...
firstly love all ur stories...
i liked this update bahut cute laga mujhe...arjun coming and picking up riya...calling her meri riya...
he waiting for that old riya to come back...!
nice...!
hate this Suraj guy..yakkk!😡🤢
waiting for next update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww..Arjun was so sweet

Loved the update...

That Surat bloody hell...he will face Arjun...pata chaldea usse..


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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so awsome...
First Step of LoVe that is FrieNdship...
So sweet it is...there is concern...there is care...
There is love too just have to Realize...
That "Meri Bubbly Riya" so cute dialouge it was a sense of Belonging...
Awsome diii👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
jjuussttt suppeeerrrbb!!!!👏👏👏 tht duffer...ltz c...bt actually we all knw!! love alwz wins...so arjun has 2 win...4 his sakke...4 riya's sake@@!!!!!! plzzz update soonn...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update... that bloody Suraj he wnt let Riya live peacefuly... i wnt angry Arjun to gv him wat he deserve once divorce s finalised..😈
Hope Riya wnt stop him then... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional update but love Arjun cares fro riya...Arjun nods to her for her sake but thinks to himself "nahi RIya…jab baat tumaari ho, tab main peeche nahi hatt saktha….kabhi nahi…tumaare kehne pe bhi nahi hatt saktha……..main usske iraadhe ko acche se pehchaan raha hoom….tumaari khushi usse bardaash nahi hoti na? agar ussne aisa kuch bhi kiya, toh main usske saat kya karunga, usska andaaza bhi nahi hoga ussko! Jung toh ussne chedi hai na? aur woh kehthe hai na pyar aur jung mein sab jaayaz hai….ab dekhthe hai usske nafrat jeettha hai ya meri pyar!"the lines took my heart i can imagine everything in front of my eyes...loved it continue soon...ARSHI
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Posted: 12 years ago
vidya :


great, now suraj doesnt want a mutual divorce coz that would mean letting off riya easily😡 ! iss suraj ki toh main ...😡! anywayz, i'm happy that riya shared her burden with arjun ..better toh feel hona hi hai na😃 ! update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update di...

aww...Arjun called her up just to say that he reached safely...that was really so nice of him...
and he also gave her lift...
that was really cute...
usne mast reason diya!

Oh...that Suraj...
why doesnt he let Riya go????
I hope Arjun does something and us Suraj ka muh band ho jaye!
I liked arjun's mind voice...his intentions were really nice...
and his expressions!
I hope Riya ka us Suraj se picha choot jaye!

update soon!!
plzzz...jaldi...me really waiting to read the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Ariyans...back with a new part...hope u ppl like it...

pls read and reply...pls excuse errors...

Thanks for all the prev comments and likes

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Chapter 9A: saat nibaana saathiya….

Riya wasn't missing those fumes in his eyes and she could read that something deep was happening in his mind……something which she knew was for her…..but again, she wasn't worried about her own life…she feared the dangers and risks that could come his way because the Suraj she knew was indeed dangerous and he could go to any extent to win!

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She knew that Arjun wouldn't stop doing what he intended to do…She knew him so well……She just hoped that nothing would go wrong this time!

She speaks to the advocate and finds that the 1st hearing is coming up towards the month end…She had to be prepared…well prepared to face him…..She had to win this case at any cost…never could she go back to him…Death was better than a life with him, she said to herself…..Yes she would die if she lost it to him!

Arjun looked towards her as if he had heard her mind voice….He gave her a reassuring smile and gently patted her hand

"Riya, tum akeli nahi ho….jo bhi ho, main humesha tumaare saat dhoonga…

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ETF office….A fresh case was already awaiting the team…..

As they were settling down, Rathod stepped out announcing the case…."team ek case hai…highway se kuch dhoori par dho laash mili hai…...lets go…."

As they drove, Shree started giving out the details…..marrne waalon ka naam hai Anitha Sharma aur Shravan Sinha…..dono ek hi office mein kaam karthe hai…..Anitha Sharma ka husband Mr Vivek Sharma ek IT firm mein kaam karthe hai….Shravan yahaan akela rehtha tha…usska parents Surat mein hai!

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They stop at the point from where they have to walk through the rough terrain to reach the crime spot……

They start walking…..Arjun, at each step turns back to see if Riya needed his help to step down but she never needed his help….even at the toughest parts, she easily strolls down…..

Rathod, Shree and Chotu weren't missing Arjun's new attitude to their female team member….Never before had he shown such a concerned attitude….They look alternatively nodding meaningfully and are happy at the new development also….

At a place where Riya almost lost balance, Arjun tries to pitch in but she steadies herself never once clutching his held out hands…

She thanked him silently and moved on leaving behind Arjun thinking to himself

"Riya, lagtha hai zindagi ke khatin raaste tumhe bohat kuch sikhaa diya hai…."

Riya's mind voice: ek baar aapke haat pakadh li tho phir chod nahi paavungi…I cant afford to do that Sir…..main apne problems khud handle karna chahthi hoom……agar ghiri toh bhi khud uttna khud sambhalna chahthi hoom….

At the crime spot……

The bodies are found lying near a over grown bush……They have been killed by a cut on their throats in the most cruel way……

Riya was stronger now and she didn't hesitate one bit to examine the bodies…..Arjun was a bit stunned at her change…..He was realizing the indifference that had grown in her…..She didn't get apprehensive or tense when she saw the blood pool around the bodies….

At a distance stood Anitha's husband crying aloud at the loss of his wife…..Arjun turned around and looked at him with a sort of empathy…..he had undergone that pain years back…..A quick flash of Roshni's brutal murder blurs his vision….

But he quickly snaps out and returns to the case……He and Rathod start searching for clues around while Shree clicks the photos of the bodies and the surrounding areas

Chotu comes back with some more info "sir, Shravan ki car mili hai kuch dhoori par….usski friend ne confirm kiya hai ke woh Shravan ka hi car hai…"

Riya speaks up "sir, body pe koyi aur badi chot ka nishaan nahi hai…yahi lagtha hai ke ghale khaatne se mauth hui hai…[after a pause]..waise kuch scratches hai body pe…shaayad haatha paayi ke waqt hua hoga….ya shaayad…"

She stops and continues after a pause when Rathod urges "sir aur kuch kehne se pehle humein autopsy karni hogi….."

Rathod: teek hai….bodies ko forensic lab bhejo…

Riya: main bhi saath chalungi….i want to do it myself!

Arjun heard that and looked at her wondering why she insisted on doing it herself…She looked a bit upset too..…He could see that Riya wanted to do the autopsy at the earliest and confirm something which was disturbing her…while Rathod nodded "okay."

Riya and Chotu go back with the bodies to the lab…..

Shree goes to Shravan's car to check for any clues….

Rathod, Arjun start questioning the person who first saw the bodies and then also question Anitha's husband Vivek….He says that she had left for office the previous morning…..He had dropped her before her office in the IT park tower…..His work place is a bit away from her office….So usually, in the evenings, she used to take a bus or a cab back….. And he says that she usually returns before 8…but yesterday, when she didn't turn up, he tried calling her but the phone was unreachable and then it got switched off……From then, he had been frantically searching for her….

In the morning, a person from the nearby rural area had seen the bodies while walking to the highway and informed the police….From the ID cards, they had identified the people and called up Vivek and their colleague….

Arjun enquires "kya Shravan ke saat khaafi close thi aap ki wife..?"

Vivek is a bit flared up and voices in between his tears "kya matlab? Aisi koyi baat nahi thi…."

Rathod pitches in sensing a brewing tension "kya tum iss Shravan ko jaanthe teh??"

Vivek shruggs off "No"

Arjun doesn't ask anything more as Rathod takes over….

The place is sealed, their possessions like the ID cards, bags are collected and taken to ETF office…Both their purses, mobiles and Anitha's jewels are missing pointing the case to a highway robbery and murder

They interrogate the others related to the case…There are few contradicting statements too...Anitha's colleague and friend at office tell them that Anitha and Shravan were team mates and were close friends too….

The security guard of their office say that Anitha and Shravan left office together around 7PM…The out time is also registered as 7 leaving no doubt about that….

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ETF conference table…..Rathod starts the briefing…."Anitha aur Shravan, ek hi office ke dho log, khaafi acchi dosti bhi hai, kal saat baje ek saath office se nikhalthe hai aur kisi reason se itne dhoor Shravan ke car mein jaathe hai…..wahaan unne kuch log loot lethe hai aur ghala khaatke maar dhaalthe hai…"

Arjun sat there as usual twirling his and pen deep in thoughts….Something was amiss amongst all this…..

Shree pitches in "sawaal yeh hai ke woh dono wahaan kyun gaye??? Dono ka ghar toh dhoosre direction pe hai….."

Rathod: shaayad dono ka affair chal raha ho aur akele waqt bithaane keliye long drive pe gaye ho….

Arjun: baat ithni simple nahi hai Rathod….….kuch toh choot raha hai!

Rathod looks at him raising his eyebrows…

Arjun tells his point "Shravan akele rehtha tha…agar dono ka affair tha aur saat waqt bithaana hota toh wahaan jaathe….itni raat ko aisi sun saan jagah kyun jaayenge??"

Before Rathod could respond, Riya storms in with her findings….the preliminary autopsy report in her hands….She speaks out as she takes her seat "Anitha 3 months pregnant thi Sir…."

All are shocked and look at her as she continues "aur usske haathon mein aur body ke bohat saare places mein kuch ghehre scratches hai….unne dekh kar laghta hai ke kisine jaan boochke kisi pointed cheez se..[she stops and looks around at the men who were listening to her]

Rathod: matlab kisi ne usse torture kiya hai?? par kaun?? Agar lootna hi tha phir torture?

Riya adds "sir woh scratches puraane hai…kal ka nahi"

All are shocked and rise up hearing that……"WHAT?" Rathod voices his shock out loudly!

The discussions continue….they also go to the IT park to question people there and they also search Anitha's desk…they take her belongings from her draws there too….One of her close friend, Nisha who sits next to her is on leave…they decide to question her the next day and leave from her…..

Later that night…..Arjun offers to drop back Riya….Their drive is silent as always but Arjun opts to break the silence as he wanted to know why she wanted to do the autopsy herself…

"Riyaa"

She turned to him "yes sir"

Arjun: main kuch poochoom?

As she nods, he continues "iss case ka autopsy khud kyun kiya tumne?"

Riya gave a faint smile seeing the ACP so curious….He always posed an "I don't care attitude" and preferred to find replies all by himself….."Its also part of my work, right?"

Arjun: come on Riya….baat itni simple nahi hai….itna toh main samajh hi gaya hooom!

Riya: [giving a genuine smile this time] zaroor jaan na hai?

Arjun: haan agar tum bathaana chaaho tho? force nahi karunga…

Riya had to give up now….Saying no to Arjun wasn't her forte any day…yes she said it once but that had a reason to it…but this didnt need such a stubborn attitude..she could tell him her thoughts about the case..."mujhe Anitha mein meri hi ek jhalak dikhi…."

Arjun was a bit taken aback by that but he waited for her to explain and she did speak up "Vivek jithna seedha dikhta hai utna hai nahi!"

Arjun knew it too but he probed her "tumhe aisa kyun laga?"

Riya: ek simple si intuition…shaayad aapki training kaam aa rahi hai….lag raha hai ke jo humein dikh raha hai woh sach nahi hai……baat kuch aur hai…..

Arjun nodded "hmm….."

Riya: logon ko aur acche se pehchaane bhi lagi hoom shaayad!

[To be continued]

so how was it?? reply to me in ur comments

haan case shuru karna pada...might help in their bonding as well...lets hope so!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice one

even i cud see a jhalak of Ria's life in d case

liked arjun's concern for her

the dialog's were well written

dis Ria reminded me of Actual arjun from show today

continue soon
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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