Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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Addie07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

i read all the chapters and first let me thank you for being such a frequent updater.. (sadly i used to be one when i had started writing till the time i lost the will to write-- and i know its a habit i need to rectify) anywho loved the story totally.

loved how arnav has fallen for khushi and it is shown in his possessiveness and temper- hoping to see more of it.. you have written about the characters beautifully. whether its khushi or arnav or nani

continue soon

will be waiting

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natzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

love Arnav's attitude, in ASR mode😉

Khushi being Khushi does not understand why Arnav is doing this😆

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naina50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Thanks for the update .. Arnav wanting to bang his head was funny .. I was glad he did not lose his temper while dealing with Khushi and she as usual was obtuse to his way of thinking .. thanks again..

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sansu

@sansu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

hi!!!

i find ur writing descriptive n i also liked the conversation btw the leads.

nice story..

😃 waiting 2 read more..

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

good chapter. liked the interplay about the drivers
possessive raizada indeed!

cliffhanger. waiting for the next one

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farha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

wow nice,arnav is totally in love with her,but does not want to name it out,it was a very good x mas gift,u know like there were butterfly in my stomach.loved it,but why is kushi so pale,did anything happen to daadi or the children?continue soon.loved it.

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Mouli

@ArShi_Lover_1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

such a nice chapter..it ws so gud to c hs possessiveness fr khushi

although i ws a lil disappointd cz i wntd to witness mre of hs new side

hs aaccptnce of hs new feelings ws described so nicely by u👏👏

i hope v gt to c mre of ds side of hm in much mre detail n intensity in d coming updates

hope to read ur updates soon😊

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rush007

@rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Superb story, loved arshi relation changed from hate to trust. How they are understanding each other and have become a major part in the twins life. I hope arnav tells her very soon to marry him.