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Posted: 12 years ago

A fiercely possessive side.
yup thats what you have dude
and for ppl you love as you said who are very close to your heart and it looks as if a certain miss jha has made it possible for the world to see your possessive side
am glad she is able to provoke such powerful possessive emotions from you for her
well she aint like any other woman you have come across mate and she wont be either
after all she is unique in her own way

Somewhere between avoiding him while staying in Raizada mansion and being friends with him, she evoked that possessiveness in him for herself.
now that was bound to happen dude
after all she is khushi and hse was bound to awaken this side of yours when you got to know her properly
and the fact you have started to notice her more and more is making us all very happy well except the girl in question who is still unaware of all this going through your mind
so you did find her beautiful when you first met her but do to your misconceptions about her you were unable to act on that much
but now that yuo know her more and more you just cant help but be bowled over right

His lips curved into a smile at these thoughts and he started putting on his coat. It was getting dark outside, and his heart could not wait to go home.
haiyye this line made me wanna just start dancing
home is where khushi is huh
chalo about time he realises what he feels for her

and there our khushi unaware of the change of feeling that the man she was thinking about carried on with what ever she had set out to do
in this case getting herself registered for the course as arnie has been after her life to enrol in it
and not for the reasons that you think he wanted you to enrol in this course but then lets not burst her bubble shall we

so she got drenched to the core looking simply enchanting to arnie till he realised something

Then it suddenly struck him 'Did she travel in a public transport LOOKING LIKE THIS?????'. And the very thought was enough to make Arnav Singh Raizada's blood boil.

why am i not surprised ki aap ka khoon khaul utha yeh soch karr ki baaki logon ne inke iss halat main dekha
wow he sure was furious wasnt he and can ya blame him after all she has started to becoming his fascination and possibly love too

'Do you want me to fire both the drivers?' he asked instead.
i just loved it when he said that
and the poor thing couldnt understand what he was on about
and he gave her more reason to be confused right
hello how is she supposed to know what brought this on
and she gave the right answer didnt she now how is she to know that you wont let her go away from this house again
hello you were the one who had stated that this was just a temporary thing
you might have forgotten but dont think she has
she had him burning in fire thinking other men saw her in that drenched state

'How dare she think that she'll not stay here? If she thinks she can leave from here, she can dream on. Who else does she know in the whole wide world now? She needs to be explained that SHE IS NOT GOING ANYWHERE. She'll stay with me, with us in this house. ALWAYS' he thought while angrily pacing in his room.
sweetie why would she stay here with ya
do we even realise what direction our thoguhts are going
first you were dead against her marriage and now when she said she will leave this house one day boy you arent a happy bunny right
man i love this possessive side of his for khushi
and this is just the beginning right
chers for pm am loving this more and more with each passing chapter you my dear are a genius for sure

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

A fiercely possessive side.
yup thats what you have dude
and for ppl you love as you said who are very close to your heart and it looks as if a certain miss jha has made it possible for the world to see ...

... this possessive side of his for khush and this is just the beginning right

chers for pm am loving this more and more with each passing chapter you my dear are a genius for sure



Thanks Chavvi16 for a detailed review :)
Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. The fact that Arnav has started to care for Khushi is evident. Let us see how Khushi feels for him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Arnav's anger :$ he is sooo confused wiv his feelings xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved todays chapter, love all the chapters but todays made me laugh.
Arnav Singh Raizada and his temper tantrums lol.
I wonder what happened and why Khushi looked so worried...
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Arnav is so possessive
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind blowing update! Loved the possessive arnav.. Waiting fr ur update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awhhh lol arnavs so clever gets khushi to do whatever he wants lol firing in the so drivers becaus khushi wants to catch the bus was hilarious : lovely Uodate thanks for the pm can't wait for the next Uodate :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
i always wanted to post a long comment on this story...but every time i write one it gets lost in the mid way and my message is always not posted... however i'll again try..

you write amazingly and it is one of the best that i've read recently...the descriptions are not too elaborate or low..every dialogue,every emotion,and every line is more than perfect..and every time i read that you consider our comments to alter the plot,i recoil and i wonder how wonderful it would have been to read it the original way you would have planned...and then i make up my mind thinking that the story yet far is fantastic,so what is there to worry...too much thinking is not good right?...😊

your writing style reminds me of farah53 s style who writes something about you..i love her writing and its one of my favourite these days and your story is also one of them..i really like the fact that you are a regular updater because i cant wait to read more of the story...keep up the good work... and oh i really love this kushi who keeps her head high and stays down to earth even with luxuries that surround her and a yummy man to spoil her...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SansShyam

i always wanted to post a long comment on this story...but every time i write one it gets lost in the mid way and my message is always not posted... however i'll again try..


you write amazingly and it is one of the best that i've read recently...the descriptions are not too elaborate or low..every dialogue,every emotion,and every line is more than perfect..and every time i read that you consider our comments to alter the plot,i recoil and i wonder how wonderful it would have been to read it the original way you would have planned...and then i make up my mind thinking that the story yet far is fantastic,so what is there to worry...too much thinking is not good right?...😊

your writing style reminds me of farah53 s style who writes something about you..i love her writing and its one of my favourite these days and your story is also one of them..i really like the fact that you are a regular updater because i cant wait to read more of the story...keep up the good work... and oh i really love this kushi who keeps her head high and stays down to earth even with luxuries that surround her and a yummy man to spoil her...😃





Thank you SansShyam for such a wonderful comment :)

Don't worry I don't change the plot line due to comments. You can check the introduction to plot line on first page, and you'll find that I've stayed true to it. When I read the comments I try to figure out if the sense and message I wanted to send out has been conveyed or not. It also tells me what did my readers like the most about the update and I try to keep that quality intact in my future updates. I get ideas to introduce situations and emotions based on your comments.

Please keep writing them. I, for one, really appreciate them 😊






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