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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update 😊

Thanks for the PM

Loved all the lines quoted below


  • His thoughts, which were prominently ruled by certain Miss Khushi Jha these days. And he was still trying to figure out his feelings for her.

It's great to know that Khushi has captured his thoughts & mind these days. Hope Arnav figures out the the feeling he has for Khushi is love.

  • Whole world knew him as a detached cold man. That was because he did not make a public display of his possessive side. A fiercely possessive side. This particular emotion was reserved for people VERY close to his heart. Passion yes, but not an iota of intent to make a place for them in his life.
In order to bond with someone you have to relate with them, which he never could. Then WHY Khushi? Why he feels at home in her presence? She feels known, like a part of himself.

Good to know that Khushi has become a part of his existence & Arnav has started to become possessive about her... hmmm ... so Khushi has fallen into the special group, that is, a place reserved for people VERY close to his heart. 😉


  • But when he came to know about her background and her equation with Shyam jiju, the Raizada in him, the son and the brother who had suffered all his life, came to fore. And in anger he never saw anything but faults in her. He had missed looking at the actual her for past 4 years because of his bitter anger towards life, towards Arvind Mallik. How could have he not noticed such a beautiful person?

"An angry man opens his mouth and shuts up his eyes"
- Thomas Fuller


The above words of Thomas Fuller is apt for Arnav. In his anger he failed to see the real Khushi & jumped into conclusions in initially judging her & hurt her. But nice to know that he has changed himself after coming to know of Khushi's nature.


  • And it was not the feeling, but the intensity of it that made him stop and think. This is certainly a record time in Arnav Singh Raizada's universe, in which he has developed feelings of this magnitude for someone. He did not know how it started but these days he notices everything about Khushi. From the color of her dresses to her different hair styles. From her non stop chatter to her heart warming smiles. The way she becomes a kid while playing with the twins to the way she becomes a matron when dealing with nani. The way she is still scared of his temper bouts to the way her huge expressive eyes twinkle when he praises her cooking.

It was getting dark outside, and his heart could not wait to go home.

So the Mighty Mr.ASR has started falling for a girl 😃 ... a girl has started ruling his thoughts 😃 ... hmmm ... ASR noticing about a girls dresses color, hair style, non stop chatter, heart warming smiles, ... admiring her childish side, her fear for his temper,... but still the GREAT ASR failed to figure out one thing , that he is in LOVE ☺️☺️☺️ Hope he realises it before nani plans for Khushi's marriage with someone else 😉


  • But with Arnav Singh Raizada breathing down her neck to appear for exams...Trust Arnav Sigh Raizada to give her a 'salary' to do something and then expect her to not do it' she chuckled.
But in her heart she knew that Arnavji was doing all this for her own good. He knows the value of a professional degree and just wants to help shape her career. Instead of making excuses, she should learn a thing or two from him about dedication and hardwork.

These lines were nice ❤️ ❤️ Khushi registering for the exams due to Arnav's pressure was well written. Her POV about Arnav was awesome


  • And when Arnav saw a wet and shivering Khushi walking towards him, he could not decide whether to scold her for not taking a car with her, or to keep staring at the bewitching sight that she was making.

Then it suddenly struck him 'Did she travel in a public transport LOOKING LIKE THIS?????'. And the very thought was enough to make Arnav Singh Raizada's blood boil.

'Do you want me to fire both the drivers?' he asked instead.

'Because nani does not go out these days, Adit and Adya can not go out at this age and I prefer to drive myself. So who's left to use cars and drivers?' he questioned.

Arnav wanted to bang his head into something. Did he think she is intelligent just this afternoon? Point to rethink on, but later.

'Khushi think, WHO will use these drivers?' he tried one more time.

'How do I know?' and now Khushi could not contain the information inside any more

'FUN????? FOR WHOM??? PUBLIC OUT THERE???' he yelled in his mind.

'From now on you'll go out with a car and a driver. Is that clear?' Arnav said authoritatively.

'See Arnavji, I don't want to spoil my habits. I know right now I am living here and you feel responsible for me. But I am not going to live here forever. And I will have to travel in public transport then.

'You both are fired'.

'Oh, and I'll take him or Rakeshji whenever I go out from now on' added Khushi in order to make peace and save jobs.

Arnav admiring her a minute but the next minute the thought of her traveling by public transport like this & he deciding to fire the drivers & he making his point clear to her clearly brings out his possessiveness & his caring nature... ASR firing the drivers in his house for Khushi , all the lines relating to these were beautifully written. I loved it ❤️



  • 'How dare she think that she'll not stay here? If she thinks she can leave from here, she can dream on. Who else does she know in the whole wide world now? She needs to be explained that SHE IS NOT GOING ANYWHERE. She'll stay with me, with us in this house. ALWAYS' he thought while angrily pacing in his room.

These lines were fabulous. Arnav's heart wanting to do things to retain her forever with him without knowing that the feeling is love was well portrayed 👏

  • Waiting eagerly to see the love struck-en ASR. How love melts his heart , how he will propose his love to Khushi, her reaction to this & the things he does to retain Khushi with him












Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahaha
i love this arnav
lol...he is too 'ASR'
i love the way you describe arnav , his thoughts ,his feelings...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow very nice
continue soon
plz pm me when you update

my arshi ss:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3329241/arshi-ss-search-of-my-heartbeat

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Posted: 12 years ago
res.


*EDIT*

O MY GOG O MY GOD O MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O this was the only thing that was going on in my mind when i read the last two paragraphs! O.O kamaal karteen hain aap bhi anonymous -ji!😆 i was rofl'ing reading the part where he fired the drivers just so he could make it clear to her that she is not allowed to travel alone, as in EVER! not until he is there to make sure he doesn't leaves their lives haaayyyeee!!!!! ASR at his possessive best is a treat dudeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉


dekho yaaraz jaldi se update karna, i am soOO soOo soOO looking forward for the updates regarding this story *rubs hands*😉

and KHUSHI ki side bhi development ho rahi hai, but BUHAT slowly! -.- hope usski bhi dhak-dhaks jaldi start hon😉

take care and update soOn😃
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Asr really knows how to get the things done he want, how he forced her to take the car henceforth by threatening to fire the drivers who were at no fault, kahin pe nigahen kahin pe nishana? was apt for ASR.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww cute possessive arnav...loved it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
its always interesting to see a possesive arnav...loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update...I liked the away you have described arnav's possessiveness...merry Christmas
Edited by tashi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohhh I love Mr. Possesive Singh Raizada...
"Fun..for who..The Public?" 😆😆😆
Adored the update... ASR is one dufuos to not realize his love for her.
Cant wait to know what happens now...Has Khushi seen a ghost? From the Past?😕
Merry Christmas... please do update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...
amaxng writing dear...
oh i just lvd this possessive arnav
n also lovd the update tooo...😊

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