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Posted: 12 years ago
came across this FF today wow so cute ..pls pls add me n PM list have sent u a buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ..plz con't soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry all i know my small updates r very annoying but i promise a long one soon!!!😉



Riya: ha exactly chal lets go n sleep '

Sia's mom: pehle ye toh finish karo'(handing sia the milk)'

Sia: ha karti hu aap jao main glass rakh dungi'(she starts sipping & hands over the glass to ree after her mom leaves) ye finish kar jaldi'

Arjun: maa'

Riya: pls mat batana dono ko daant padegi pls pls (making a puppy face)

Sia's mom(from her room): ha beta bolo'

Arjun: good night maa'

Riya & sia breath a sigh of relief'

Next morning in the office

Arjun is busy with a file'

Riya is sorting the case stick on's

Chotu is busy dreaming about his dinner with kavya'

Shree is updating his software's & rathore has gone to seek special powers for this case from DIG sir'

Sia(entering the room speaking on her phone): ha rav I knw the risks tumse jitna kaha hai karo wrna tumhe pata hai main tumhara kya haal krungi mujhe pakki n puri info chahiye in an hour aur ha if he's there m in mujhe hamseha wala name se hi register karvana aur ha sham tak uss mechanic ka address chahiye mujhe at any cost' get to work now'.(disconnects the call) morning everyone'

Riya: morning sia ab chal lab mein lag ja'

Sia: arrey ha wo gun aayi hai an abhi jaake usse kuch ugalwati hu bechari kab tak chup rahegi'

Rathore: itni bhi kya jaldi hai sia' wait mujhe ek announcement karni hai' team aaj se humara office shift ho raha hai hai n ab shre tumhe ms.neha assist karengi n sia tumhe rajbeer...

Sia: sir mujhe assistant ki kya zarurat hai I mean lab mein waise hi hardly koi kaam hota hai I can manage'

Rathore: I knw isiliye tumhara assistant temporary hai he's going to be trained by you toh pls ek accha example set krna uske liye'

Shree: sir kya meri bhi assistant temporary hai?

Rathore: yes tum bhi apna har step phuk phuk k lena pls main ETF ki image pe koi ungliyan uthte hue nahi dekhna chahta hu' do u get me?

Shriya: yes sir'

Sia(in whisper's to shree): shree taiyar ho jao tumhari wali tumhari bahut badi fan hai she worship's you bachke rehna'

Shree(winking): aur tumhara wala riya ka usse arjun sir se bachake rakhna'

Sia: waise robot tumhari Ms. Robo toh aa gayi hai ab mera ek aur task accomplished sabki pairing kar di maine see m so lucky aate hi team ka curse tod diya'

Shree: sabki? (getting her idea) sochna bhi mat wrna '

Sia: wrna kya karoge robot? Kuch nhi kr sakte unfortunately kyunki KC tumhe kha jayegi (wink)

Shree: accha dekh lo dnt challenge me kahin tumhe mehnga na pad jaye'

Sia: mehnga aur mujhe challenge accepted shree !!!

Ariya bang their heads'

Riya: inka kuch nahi ho sakta'

Arjun: ho sakta hai riyu'. dono ka murder'.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part loveit thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
heheheheee... Lolzzz sach main murder ke alava kuch nhi ho skta
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
awww sia gave her milk to riya
chotu dreaming about his dinner with kavya 😆
wow they are getting an new office
and shree and sia are going to have assistants
omg shree's assistant is his fan and sia's assistant is riya's fan 😆
sia and shree's part was lovely
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome uppdate.
Please ariya ka alag se kuch romance dikhao.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha ha!!! Murder line cracked me up!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you all for the lovely comments mastmegha di m workin on your suggestion hope i'll b able 2 deliver it in a while thank you all 4 likin n jheloyin my bakwass love u all 😳





Rathore: Jun kyun bola murder?!?!

Arjun: sam maine kya kiya'

Rathore: tumne kuch nahi kiya but hume highway pe ek laash mili hai team move in fast'

Arjun: but ye case?!?!

Rathore: hume aane wala sab cases iske saath solve krne padenge kyunki sirf is case pe concentrate karke humne jaldi kuch nahi milega n DIG sir ko lagta hai aisa krke hum sikander ko warn kr denge'.

Sia: toh sabse pehle main hi jaati hu afterall dead body se baatien jo karni hai'chalo rajbeer'

All the others leave & reach b4 sia n rajbeer'

Rathore: dammit ye sia kahan reh gayi'

Sia: sir m here is rajbeer ki wajah se m late ye mujhe 60 k upar chalane hi nahi de raha tha insult kr di meri beast (Kawasaki Ninja ZX-14 )

(sia's bike n personally my fav 2!! 0-60 in 2.5 secs awesome bike!!! <3)

ki ' darpok kahin ka jab speed se darte ho toh pata nahi body ko dekh k toh behosh hi ho jaoge'

Rajbeer: sir meri koi galti nahi hai sia ma'am hi service lane mein atrangi style se gaadi chala rahi thi'

Sia: sir he's lying..tumhe toh main aaj zinda nahi chodungi'(holding him by the collar)

Rathore: dammit ye crime scene hai ko wrestling ring nahi sia collar chodo uski'

Sia(angrily leaves rajbeer & starts examining the body): sir internal bleeding kaafi hui hai shayad waar kisi heavy blunt object se kiya gaya hai'body pe kaafi maar-pit k nishani hai saath hi burn marks n traces of mild slow poison'baaki ki info toh iski autopsy ke baad hi de paungi main'

Rathore: theek hai rajbeer tum body ko lab le jao n sia ye ladki uss side se bhagte hue ya ghasit k layi gayi hai scan tht area'

Rajbeer n sia shot each other glares n move in opposite directions'

Shree(examining the cellphone obtained): sir last call record kisi rudra ka hai' damn sir network hi nahi mil raha yahan how can I trace this no.?

Rathore: neha ko call karke bolo n u also examine the nearby area tab tak hum iss ladki ke ghar jaake puchtach karte hai'

Arjun: sam main aur riya uss mall mein jaate hai jahan se ye shayad aayi hai (showing him the shopping bags) wahan se iss rudra k bare mein bhi kuch mil jaaye'

Riya(in her mind): wow wahan toh sweet Bengal ki outlet hai yes finally rasogulla sandesh kheer kadam n rasmalai khane milega'akele nhi kaungi chotu shree & sia k liye bhi leke aaungi n hw cn I forget kakimaa maa bhaiya n bhabhi' ye toh mitha khane se rahe baaki sab toh khayenge'. Yippie'

Meanwhile in d forest sia n shree r scanning the area'

Sia(to herself): yaar iss ladki ko bhi jungle hi mila tha ghumne k liye ab yahan barish k baad kya milega mujhe upar se bhai bhi na ek duffer assistant de diya mujhe uss pe se is ravs ka bhi koi call nahi hai '(looking at the sky) didu dekh rahe ho na upar se majje mein sab aap ek help toh kar nahi rahe ho aur kuch nahi toh ek clue toh dikha do pls'

Shree: sia ye dekho yahan shayad blood stains hai'

Sia: kahan kahan??

Shree(pointing to a leaf): yahan'aur wo dekho ek memory card jaisi cheez'

Sia: ruko ruko wahan pe footprints bhi hai main pehle unhe cast kar lu fir jana wahan'

Sia n shree collect all the evidences'

Sia(looking at the sky n winking): didu sab toh kar diya ab ravs ka ek call bhi dedo mujhe plsss'

Shree(smiling): sab didu se hi mangne ka plan hai lagta hai tumhara apne liye thoda protection bhi maang lo mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki tum kya karne wali ho'

Sia: uski zarurat nahi padegi shh.. didu k samne mention bhi mat karo wahan se yahan aake maaregi mujhe (her cell rings) yes ravs ka call'

Ha ravs bolo.. toh wo aa raha hai great aur mechanic ' wo bhi mil gaya ravs u rock love u' accha ha msg me his address n ha apna muhh band hi rakhna agar maa ko pata chala toh tumhari khair nahi'.

She keeps this call n sees a miss call from kavya'

Sia(Calling kavya): ha bol ammu ' kya abhi? But sham ko plan than a accha theek hai hum aate hai' nahi tum chill kar main handle karti hu situation'ha theek hai aaram se dress ho take half n hour hum tab tak pahuchte hai'.

(to shree)shree wo banda abhi aa raha hai chalo '

Shree: pagal ho gayi ho kya sir ko kya kahenge bhulo mat we r on duty madam'

Sia(receives a msg on her phone from ravs): problem solved shree dekho mujhe jis mechanic k pass jana hai uski shop jis coffee shop mein tumhe jaana hai uske opposite hai'toh main arjun sir ko mechanic wali baat bolke break le leti hu n keh dungi ki main tumhe saath le ja rahi hut um apna kaam kar lena n main apna'simple'

Meanwhile ariya in the SUV

Riya: sir kitni der lagegi ye traffic hai ya kya hai mujhe neend aa rahi hai pichle 1 ghante se hum yahin fase hue hai'.

Arjun: riya main koi superhero nahi hu ki car ko ek haath se utha kar traffic se bahar nikal du aur pehle toh tumhe mere saath hi jaana pasand tha ab kya hua?

Riya: sir wo baat nahi hai aap toh kuch bolte hi nahi ho aur mujhe mall jaana hai bas wahan jaake mujhe sweets lene hai wahan ki sweet Bengal outlet famous hai'

Arjun: ms.riya mukherjee main aapko yaad dila du ki hum wahan investigation k liye jaa rahe hai shopping k liye nahi'

Riya: hey durga maa ekhon ki korbo lagta hai ye mera mithai khana bhi band karwa denge'sorry rasogulla kheer kadam sandesh rasmalai aaj main duty pe hu'

Arjun: ha theek hai dramabaazi mat karo hum sweets le lenge but abhi nahi ghar jaate waqt kyunki tumhare rathore sir bhadak jayenge'

Riya(peckin him on the cheek ): thank you waise mere saath rehke aap bhi sweets khana seekh jayengi'

Their cute eyelock moment is disturbed by sia's call'

Riya: ha bol baby doll'

Sia: phone speaker pe rakh pls jaldi'

She does that'

Sia: sir mujhe al ke mechanic ka address mil gaya hai toh kya main shree ko leke wahan chali jau?

Arjun: ha theek hai you can go sam ko main bol dunga ki maine tumhe wahan bhej tha '

Sia: thank you sir' riya sun na'

Riya( turning the phone on normal mode): hmm bol'

Sia: hum jaa rahe hai luck wish kar de pls hope ki ye robot wahan koi gadbad na kar de yaar'

Riya: hmm sab accha hi hoga chalo nw go'
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi actually am new reader of this story .
so abhi time lagega sare parts read karne mein .
1 havee read 10 parts and i must say it's an awesome story !
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago

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