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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Sia is such a nice girl.
Love the way riya understanding arjun.
Ariya last part was my favourate.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nivi, chutki ko bohot pasand aaya...👍🏼

as usual...awesome update...

love all your characters...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...loved Ariya's conversation😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Bada wala sholi kaan pakd k running running for colleges mumbai universitry i hate you!! nyways lots of my chapar chapar next part under construction hai tab tak enjoy this part...

dedicated to my chutki 😳 n evry1 who has liked, commented n read the story love u all😳😳😳



At sia's home'

Sia is looking at aashi sleeping peacefully in her room'unable to control herself she goes & sits on her bed covering aashi n her inaashi's fav.blanket'

Sia(to roshni in her mind): m sorry didu kaash maine aapki baat maani hoti atleast jiju ko bataya hota' aapke who na mujhse bahut chidhte hai jab dekho tab meri band bajane pe tule rehte haino more seriously main hi unhe chance pe chance deti hu yeh karne ka' didu mujhe apne liye koi darr aur dukh nahi hai main aashi ki fikr kar rahi hu usne bahut kuch saha hai aapse dur hona mujhse dur hona par kuch bola nahi ab pata nahi apne life ka sach sunke wo kaise react karegi main usse kaise batau? Kya batau?(saying all this she starts sobbing)

Sia's mom (entering with a bowl of hot water to clean her wounds): bahar chalo wo so rahi hai sone do usse'.(after coming out of aashi's room) haath do apna kya halat bana rakhi hai iski '.kanch nikalne do'

Sia: maa nahi bahut dukhta hai aap kaanch pull krte ho tab aise hi rehne do na'

Sia's mom: chup ekdum chup 4 sall ki bacchi nahi ho samjhi na forensic expert hooke aise behave kar rahi ho

Sia: ahh! Mumma' nahi na dukh raha hai ouch aaram se karo na mera gussa bechare kaanch k tukde pe kyun nikal rahe ho'

Arjun: ha maa iska gussa isipe utaro'(hitting her playfully)'

SiaL: jiju lagta hai na'.

Riya: jab todfod ki tab nahi laga aur arjun ne itne halke se maara toh lag gaya'

Sia: ha ha ree tum toh ab jiju ki hi side logi afterall dost dost na raha'

Riya: chup kar warna maar khayegi'

Sia: mumma aaram se na lag rahi hai'

Sia's mom: chup ekdum chup last pieces bacche hai ek awaz nahi warna mujhse maar khayegi tu'

Sia: ha sab mujh bechari bholi-bhali bacchi ko hi chup krwao'

Arjun get's a call so he leaves d room to attend it'

Arjun(on his phone): ha shree ' accha caller ka pata chal gaya' kaun ' al? u mean wo sikander ki gang ka al' accha theek hai kal iske bare mein sochte hai'

Riya(seeing him fidget in tension with his phone): sia ruk aati hu main'

Sia: ha ha go ahead ab tere wo aa gaye hai toh hum kis khet ki muli hai'

Riya: chup kar' dekh na wo kisi baat se pareshaan lag rahe hai'

Sia's mom: no nakhra tumhe haldi wala doodh peena padega'

Sia: haldi wala doodh pls nahi ma kuch bhi chalega but no haldi wala doodh pls'

Riya(winking at her): pee le na half baaki ka I'll finish'

Sia:ha gud idea'(aloud to mom) ha de do mumma '

Riya goes near arjun'

Riya: arjun kya hua kiska phone tha aur usne kya kaha aur aap itne tensed kyun ho?

Arjun: shree ka phone thaw o sia ko call karne wala sikendar ki gang ka al hai' wo log bahut dangerous hai aur unke member's ko trace karna bahut mushkil hai'

Sia(entering): sabko except al jiju'

Arjun: wo kaise?

Sia: wo race of death ka fan hai'

Arjun: aur kal ek race hai' n if I m rite wo wahan pakka jayega'but kis naam se ye pata karna mushkil hai'

Sia: nope nahi hai aapko yaad hai ek baar maine bhi iss race mein part liya tha'

Arjun: ha yaad hai tumhare hisse ki daant maine khai thi roshni se'

Sia: ha toh maine toh kaha tha didu ke samne zikr bhi mat krna aapne apne shauq se kiya tha daant padi toh main kya karu? Waise wo al bhi wahan tha aur uska naam wahan leo hai '

Arjun: chalo but aage kya karenge'

Sia: karna kya hai wo aap mujh par chod dijiye'aur ha promise me ki main jo krungi aap mera side loge n mujhe bhai n mumma se bachoge'

Arjun: chal theek hai baby doll but nthn dangerous n risky'

Sia(winking): jijaji risk humari job ka inseparable hissa hai! Khair ab sone chalet hain wrna kal late hue toh aap aur bhai daantoge'

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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff ye ldki kya krne vaali hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
She is gonna take part in the race!! Sia..!! Bahut daant paregi!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
sia's mom was so concerned for her
awww riya was taking arjun's side
seems like sia is taking part in the race
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...loved it nivi...you're sooo good... <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊 Omg Sia is going to take part in the race 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just finished reading all the parts of your story..It's really good and I enjoyed reading it hehe all the comic moments and now the serious bit :)
Looking forward to your next update!

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