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Posted: 12 years ago
Want to kil onir uff
awesum update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ufff... Ye rana peetega and nice going
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Posted: 12 years ago
uff... Rana ki entry uff... And nice going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
good going...story aur bhi interesting ho gayi hai...
waiting to see what happens next...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
that onir is back 😡
glad that sia shot him in leg and
he is arrested now
omg someone called sia and threatened her
omg aashi is sikander and roshni's daughter
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sia: mujhe tumhe kuch sabit karne ki zarurat nahi hai'mere aur aashi ke rishte ko toh bilkul nahi'

Onir: ha sab ko toh jhoot bol sakti ho par khud se kaise chupaogi tum bhi janti ho aur main bhi ki who roshni aur bhai ki beti hai jisse tumne ab tak chipa rakha tha'

She leaves the room'shocking all'

Sia(calling her mom): maa ab sabko sacchai batani padegi'onir ne sabko bata diya ahi ab hume sabse baat karni hogi'

Arjun n rathore follow her'

Arjun(holding her hand tightly): kya wo jo keh raha hai wo sach hai bolo baby doll bolo'

Rathore: jun dheere usse chot lagi hai'

Arjun: sam nahi aaj isse bolna hi hoga kya wo roshni ki beti hai bolo baby doll bolo'

Sia(closing her eyes): haa who didu ki hi beti hai'

Arjun: aur tumne hume batana zaruri nahi samjha' mujhe bhi nahi ki meri roshni ki koi beti hai ki uski shaadi ho chuki thi'

Sia:ha nahi samjha kyunki aap unka future the unke past ko main aapke aur unke beech nahi aane dena chahti thi' (she tells the whole story about her plan & her reasons to the team)

Arjun: wah wah baby doll(sarcastic claps) tumse ye umeed nahi thi'

He takes his SUV keys & leaves'riya follows him'

Arjun: riya chali jao yahan se'

Riay: nahi jaungi aap bahut gusse mein ho pls main gaadi chalati hu'(taking the keys from his hand)

Arjun: riya mujhe vishwas nahi hota ki roshni aisa kar sakti hai aur baby doll usne aisa kiya'

Riya: jo hua usme roshni ji ki koi galti nahi hai aur jahan tak sia ki baat hai toh uske aisa karne ke peech koi wajah hogi usne jo kiya wo shayad humare nazariye se galat ho but uske nazariye se wahi sahi hoga'

Rathore: baby doll ye tumne accha nahi kiya'bilkul accha nahi kiya'

Sia(with tears in her eyes): bhai aap ya jiju ya koi aur hota meri jagah toh wo bhi yahi karta'

She leaves & rathore asks shree to go along with her'

In shree's car'

Sia: pata nahi meri aashi ne uska kya bigada hai kyun uske peeche pada hai'(in her mind) roshni didu ye mera promise hai agar aashi ki jaan bachane k liye khudh marna pada toh bhi peeeche nahi jaungi' wo aapki aur meri beti hai usse sikander chub hi nahi sakta' agar aap uske liye itna bada balidan de sakte ho toh main bhi de dungi'.

Shree: sia hum sab hai na aashi ko kuch nahi hoga'

They reach sia's home' getting down from the car sia hugs shree very tightly'

Sia: shree agar iss case mein mujhe kuch ho jaye toh tum aashi ka dhyan rakhoge na?

Shree: tumhe kuch nahi hoga sia' aisa fir kabhi kehna bhi mat'(hugging her tightly) tum aisa sochogi toh aashi ka kya hoga'

Sia: kya karu shree pata nahi kyun itne negative khyal aa rahe hai mann mein'kahin sab khatam na ho jaye itni mushkil se sab saath aaye the aur ek hawa ke jhoke se sab bikhar gaya shree sab khatam ho gaya'

Shree: aisa kuch nahi hai sab samjh jayenge tumne jo kiya wo kyun kiya'

Meanwhile at the beach ariya'

Riya: baby doll ne jo kiya roshni ji aur aapko safe rakhne ke liye kiya aap hi sochiye agar aashi aapke pass rehti toh aap dono ke jaan ko kitna khtra hota aur fir wo yahi toh chati thi uske didu ko unke hisse ki khushiyaan mile isme kya galat maanga usne? Aur aap thande dimaag se sochiye arjun agar aap uski jagah hote toh shayad aap bhi yahi karte'

Arjun: shayad main bhi aisa karta par dukh mujhe is baat ka hai ki roshni usne bhi kabhi mujhe iss bare mein batana zaruri nahi samjha'baby doll ka bachpana tha yeh baat main samjh sakta hu par roshni uska kya?

Riya: ho sakta hai unhone batane ki koshish ki ho par aapne unsuna kar diya ho'ab chaliye yahan se sia ko humari zarurat hai'

Arjun: nahi hai woe k baar sorry nahi bol sakti ek baar nahi keh sakti ki jiju pls bhul jao sab nahi usse toh Jhansi ki rani banna hai hamesha dusron ki baton se khudh ko dard dena fav.hobby hai uski'dekha na uss criminal uss rana ki wajah se madam ne kitni topd-fod maccha di machai toh chodo saare kanch k tukde sab laga kisse usse hai na khoon baha wo alag dard hua wo ala gab doctor k pass nahi gayi hogi'

Riya: itna jante hai usse toh kuch samjhate kyun nahi puri duniya ko samjha skte hai aap bas apni salisahiba ko nahi samjha skte.. kya karu main aapka?

Arjun(grinning): shaadi karlo sudharne ki koshish krunga uske baad'

Riya(playfully hitting him): very funny arjun filhaal ghar chalen maa ko fikr ho rahi hogi'

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aw... So CUTE... LOVED the Shriya and Ariya scenes...!!

Care-free Arjun is AWESOME..!!

Riya: itna jante hai usse toh kuch samjhate kyun nahi puri duniya ko samjha skte hai aap bas apni salisahiba ko nahi samjha skte.. kya karu main aapka?

Arjun(grinning): shaadi karlo sudharne ki koshish krunga uske baad'


Was my FAVORITE part!!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
finally arjun knows the truth about aashi being roshni's daughter
and now he is upset with sia again :(
sia and shree scenes were lovely
glad that shree is there for sia
loved arjun and riya's conversaiton
and last part was cute :)
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwhieee... Arjun itna romantic ahaaa... Shaadi kar lo mujse sudhrne ki koshish karunga... Awhiee...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice loveit thanks for pm cont soon

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