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Itne chote chote updates de k kyun maar rahi ho!! JALDi se BADA wala update!!!
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cute ariya n sia shree. ..
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thanks yaar mai wait kar rahi thi update ke liye
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
rajbeer didn't let sia drive the bike fastly 😆
poor rajbeer 😆
sia was so mad at him
ariya going together for the investigation
and riya is already thinking about food 😆
love the way sia was talking to roshni :)
ariya car scenes were lovely :)
awww they are stuck in traffic
awww riya pecked arjun on his cheek <3
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read both the parts together...

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Awesome update.
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Ab bada wala ariya part hi diya hai mastmegha di n all ariya pankha's i hope you like it pls pls chappals mat marna pura collection ho gaya hai mere paas 😆 pls pls do gimme ur valuable feedbacks




Sia n shree leave for the coffee shop n ariya have reached the mall'

Riya: finally hum pahunch gaye pure 2 ghante lage yahan tak pahuchne me bas ab aage sab jaldi jaldi ho jaye'

Arjun: ho gaya bolke shubh shubh toh chale hume top floor pe jaana hai last recipt wahin ki hai'

They take the elevator to the 8th floor

(hehe arrey mall nahi super mall hai ab distance zyada hoga tabhi toh ariya zyada tym saath mein spend krenge na?😉😆)

To their bad luck the elevator encounter's a problem n they r stuck on the 5th floor'

Riya: aaj ka din hi khrab hai pehle traffic fir ye elevator' durga maa kyun maine kya bigada hai?

Arjun: main invisible ho gaya hu ya jaanbujh k mujhe avoid kar rahi ho?

Riya: aisa kuch nahi hai sotti'

*Poof* the lights go out

Riya immediately clings to arjun

Arjun: jhoot dekho light bhi chali gayi ab toh tumhare jhoot bolne se'

Riya: arjun aisa nahi hai pls kuch karo mujhe andhere se bahut darr lagta hai'

Arjun: riya hum ghar pe nahi hai jo main candle jalau (making her sit down with him) ab baith jao yahin pata nahi kitna tym lagega'

Riya: aisa mat boliye na mujhe darr lag raha hai (hugging him tightly)'

Arjun(enjoying riya's antics): riya tum kitni cheezon se darti ho? Goli chalane se,andhere se, ghum hone se' aur kuch baaki hai kya?

Riya( innocently): ha hai an aapko khone se'

Arjun( smirking): accha '

Ariya share an eyelock(ab zahir si baat hai dono ne apne mobile ki backlite use ki hai ek dusre ko dekhne k liye😉😆) n arjun is admiring the innocent look riya's face is radiating'

Riya: aise kya dekh rahe hai aap?

Arjun: yehi ki darr mein bhi tum utni hi khoobsurat lagti ho'(removing her flick that r hanging on her forehead) jitni tab lagti thi jab pehle baar mujhse takrayi thi'

Riya: takrayi? Maine aap pe attack kiya tha aur aap kuch bolne ki jagah mujhse lad rahe the aapki wajah se rathore sir ne mujhe aapko car se dur nahi jaane k liye tainat kiya tha'

Arjun: ha toh mujhe bhi toh sunaya tha tumhare chief ne? hamesha hi sunate the'

Riya: sia k aane se pehle aap dono kitna ladte the na? pata hai hume lagta tha ki aap kabhi eksaath kaam nahi kar sakte aur ek nahi ho sakte sivaye jung k maidan me'

Arjun: hmm ab kya lagta hai tumhe?

Riya(pouting): yehi ki aap bahut gussa karte ho'

Arjun(with fake anger): gussa ha sirf mera gussa hi nazar aata hai'

Riya(smiling n coming close to him): ha pehle nazar aata tha ab uske neeche chipi hui care n pyaar ki jhalakiya mil jaati hai kabhi kabhi'

Suddenly the lights come n the lift starts moving'

Riya: dekha sach kaha maine'


P.s ab jaldi update shayad nahi de paungi going out 2mmrw wid friends!!

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