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Posted: 12 years ago
elevator wala love ...hmmm exciting
enjoi u r outing sweetie
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
ariya got stuck in the elevator <3
even the lights went out
awww riya was scared and was hugging him
awww she is scared to lose him <3
loved their converstion
finally the lights came and even the lift started working :)
we want a long update
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome loved it. Ariya's converstion was so cute 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome.
Loved it love ariya conversation..
And thanx for giving a long update on ariya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
as usual..bohot accha tha nivi...

continue soon...

and enjoy your day out...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice part ,
I hope in next update we find more ariya scene,
love elevator romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello everyone thank u for all the likes n comments Ms.Rawte (Arjunkibehen) i hope itni badi update chalegi?😉

really sorry i know m not able to give equal ariya & shriya moments but as i promised i m trying to i hope you enjoy this part & forgive the mistakes...😉



Suddenly the lights come n the lift starts moving'

Riya: dekha sach kaha maine'

Arjun: ha dekh liya ab chalen 1 ghanta aur yahan fase-fase bita diya ab jaldi se kaam karke office jaate hai warna sam sochega ki hum bhaag gaye ETF se'

On the other hand shriya'

Sia: shree all the best agar kuch na samjh mein aaye toh chup rehna pls koi gadbad mat karna warna ammu n chotu dono tumhara bhrata bana denge'

Shree: ha na nahi karunga tum mujhe nervous mat karo toh'

Sia:ok ok bye jao aur apna headset on rakho I'll prompt u guys kya karna hai' jao'

Shree: tum?

Sia: meri bike bhi toh theek karvani hai jao jao I'll be fine'

In the coffee shop kavya is making stories about her boyfriend n shree enters... the guy seeing their closeness gets ready to backout'

Sia: chalo great party time!!!

Shree: baad mein pehle lets rush back'

Kavya: sia love you thanx a lot'

Sia(winking): what are friends for ammu!!

Shree: sia chalo rathore sir hume fry kar denge'

Sia: shree chill kyun hyper ho rahe ho bhul gaye hume yahan arjun sir ne bheja hai'

Shree: wo job hi ho abhi chalo yahan se'

Kavya: arey sia wo tujhe isiliye leke jaana chahta hai kyunki andar uss bande ko tu pasand aa gayi humari baatien sunne ki jagah tujhe dekhe ja raha tha wo'

Sia: oh toh yeh baat hai seedhe seedhe nahi bata sakte the kya?chalo lets go'

They leave for the ETF office'

On the other hand ariya are struggling to get information about the decased lady'

Riya: sir wo jewellary shop lets try there kyunki uss lady ke bag mein ring ka empty box mila tha hume'

Arjun: ok lets see'(to the shopkeeper) excuse me kya aapne inhe yahan dekha hai?

Shopkeeper: ha sir kal hi aayi thi kisi ring ke bare mein puch rahi thi jo mr.Rudra ne khradi ho'

Arjun: aur aapne kya kaha'

Shopkeeper: sir mujhe ring acchese yaad thi toh maine unhe bata diya afterall wo humari best ring thi' single piece kyun aapko bhi apni biwi ke liye banwani hai?

Riya starts blushing at this comment'

Arjun(leaving the shop holding riya's hand): ji abhi toh nahi but agar kabhi banana hogi toh aap hi ke paas aayenge'

Riya: sir yahan bhi rudra aakhir ye rudra hai kaun?

Arjun: riya wo secondary question hai pehle ye toh pata chale ki ye ladki kaun hai?

Riya: sir wo toh simple hai hum sabhi jagah ko missing fir le aate hai jo ladkiyon ki ho jis ladki ka description humari victim se match karta ho wahi hai ye'

Arjun(smirking): riyu not bad ha'

Riya(blushing): aapke saath rehne ka effect hai' ab chale ACP sahib?

Arjun: lets go'

Shriya have reached the office n sia is shouting on rajbeer'

Sia: rajbeer ye kya kiya hai tumne pls explain? Training mein nahi seekhaya notes safai se likte hai aur tumne kya kiya dono cases ki evidences ko mix up kar diya? How can you be so careless' meri puri mehnat pe paani fer diya'

Hearing the noise rathore & shree enter the lab'

Rathore: kya ho raha hai yahan ye ETF office hai koi fish market nahi kyun chilla rahi ho?

Sia: sir isne rana ke case ki aur iss case ki evidences ko mix kar diya aur itna hi nahi notes bhi koi proper order mein nahi hai' iski laparwahi ki wajah se sabko double work karna padega'

Rajbeer: sir I m sorry who ghbrahat mein galti se ho gaya'

Sia: ghrabra ke galti karne ka haq nahi hai hume ghrabarna hume nahi unn criminals ko chahiye itni carelessness nahi chalegi rajbeer'

Shree: its ok sia uska first day hai let it be hum log double work kar lenge' stop shouting on him bechare ko pehle hi din daant daant ke bukhar chadhana hai kya?

Rathore: rajbeer ye tumhari pehli aur aakhri galti hai DIG sir ne tumhe yahan tumhari kabiliyat ko badhane ke liye bheja hai aur sia tum itna mat chillao uspe u were supposed to guide him tum office mein nahi thi usse zyada tumhari galti hai'

Sia: asorry for that sir but main rana case ke ek imp.informer se milne gayi thi maine arjun sir ko inform kiya tha kyunki aapka cell not reachable aa raha tha sir'

Rathore: next time atleast usse phone pe hi guide kar dena ab get back to work all of you'

Sia,shree& rajbeer:yes sir'

Sia(in annoyed tone): rajbeer ab ye blood sample aur footprints analyse karo yahan ki mess main clean kar dungi'

Rajbeer: yes ma'am'

Shree: chod na sia new hai galti ho jaati hai sabse'

Sia(irritatedly): ha toh maine kab kuch kaha'

Shree: ok chill itna kytun pareshaan ho rahi ho hum sab manage kar lenge chill' I'll

Neha(entering the room, blushing): sir wo aapki help chhiye thi'

Sia(sarcastically):lo aa gayi tumhari bhakt shree jao help her'

Shree(winking): ok madam uske baad I'll help you promise'

Sia(with fake smile): no thank you I'll manage'

Ariya have collected almost all trhe missing FIR's'

Riya: ab tak toh kuch nahi mila sir'

Arjun: riya its ok we still have 2 more stations wahan dekhte hai kuch mil jaye shayad'

Riya: sir dono alag directions mein hai yahan se lets slipt aap uss station mein jayiye main idhar jaati hu'

Arjun(protectively): no riya saath hi chalet hai na pehle idhar jaate hai den udhar'

Riya immeditately understands his concern'

Riya(flashing her dimpled smile): arjun 5 min bhi mere bina nahi reh sakte na?

Arjun(lovingly): ab itne din reh liya aur nahi'

Riya: I love you arjun'

Arjun: I love you too riyu'

Riya(blushing): bas bas ab chaliye '(looking upward) hey maa durga kaash hume yahan se kuch information mil jaaye'

Arjun(shaking his head): chalo'

In the police station'

Inspector: ji sir yahan kuch 4 ladkiyon ke missing hone kit report darj ki gayi hai unme se 1 kal hi gayab hui hai'(to the halwadar) aye chinku file aand bare ti'

Riya: sir ye shayad humari wali ladki ho'

Arjun: dekhte hai riya'

The file is brought'

Inspector: hi ti mulgi aahe' kaira naav aahe complaint kona kriyaansh ni keli aahe bhau mahnto swata la ticha'

Arjun: hichi photo kuthe aahe ti dakva mala'

Inspector(showing the phote): hi aahe sahib '

Riya: ye toh wahi hai sir'

Inspector: kaun hai madam'

Arjun: iss ladki ki laash hume subah highway pe mili hai'

Inspector: sir fir toh mujhe iske bhai ko khabar kar deni chahiye'

Ariya (together): nahi hum bata denge usse '.

The look at each other for a sec'

Arjun: aap bas uski details de dijiye'

Riya: sir mujhe toh puri story hi kuch gadbad lag rahi hai wo ladki ki laash hume highway pe mili aur wo body dekh k lagta nahi hai ki death FIR likhane ke pehle hui hogi?

Arjun: ha shree ko wo number send karo aur uslki call detail nikalne ko kahao n loction bhi trace karne ko kaho abhi

Riya: already bol diya sir'

Arjun: kya baat hai riya aaj kal hamesh mujhse ek kadam aage rehti ho'

Riya: aapse hi seekh hai sir'

Arjun(ruffling her hair): arrey wah bacchi badi ho gayi'

Riya(irritatedly): arjun kya kar rahe ho baal khrab kar diye na saare'

Just then riya's mobile beeps'

Riya(putting the phone on loudspeaker): ha bolo shree'

Shree: riya ye mobile kisi fake address proof pe registered hai aur ha abhi tracker start kiya hai thoda time lagega location trace hone mein'

Riya: theek hai' wait a minute tumhe kaise pata address fake hai?

Shree: kyunki main aur chotu wahan jaake aa rahe hai pucho mat kaise jaan bachayi wahan se'

Riya: firse shaadi wala ghar'

Shree: exactly'kuch aur pata chalta hai toh batata hu'

Arjun(after riya has cut the call): firse matlab'

Riya(controlling her laugh): sir wo actually aapko yaad hai wo car mein dead body mili thi hume '

Arjun: ha yaad hai na'

Riya: tab wo address pe bhi yahi hua tha' dono ko pasand kar diya tha wahan ladki ne' bechare kaise bhaag ke aaye the' sia ko call karke puchti hu usse kya mila'(calling sia) whatsup baby doll'

Sia: ree puch mat is rajbeer ne mera kaam double kar diya dono cases ki file mix kardi ab tak toh m on square one dekhte hai aage kya hota hai'tujhe kya mila madam?

Riya: mila hai kuch aake batati hu'

Sia: chal theek hai phone rakh main yahan sab khtam krke nikalti hu 11 baje tak location pe bhi toh pahuchna hai'

Arjun: sia dhyan se jaana chaho toh apne saath kisi ek member ko le jao'

Sia: no sir m at my best when m alone koi hoga toh wo meri kamzori bhi ban sakta hai akele koi problem nahi hogi'

Ariya: all the best sia'

Sia:thanx jiju n ree'

Shree overhears only a part of the conversation'

Shree(entering in angry young man mode): kya karne ja rahi ho tum?

Sia: robo shaant itna gussa tumhari circuits k liye accha nahi hai'

Shree: sia just answer me aisa kaunsa tir maarne ja rahi ho jo koi saath hoga toh tumhari weakness ban jayega?

Sia: robo shant baitho yahan (making shree sit) main al ke peeche ja rahi hu'

Shree:pagal ho gayi ho kya?sher ke area mein gus ke usko challenge karne ki sochna bahaduri hai but actually waise karna is pagalpan'

Sia: apne area mein chuha bhi sher hota hai robo aur ye pehli baar nahi hai ki m gng in his area so chill kuch nahi hoga'

Shree(holding her tightly): just because pehle kuch nahi hua doesn't mean ab bhi nahi hoga atb humare pass rana nahi tha ab hai sia its madness main rathore sir ko bata rah hu u r not going anywhere without the team'

Sia(runs to the door): pls shree aisa mat karo bhai mujhe kaccha kha jayenge pls pls'

Shree: specimen darwaze se haat jao'

Sia: pls nahi tum hi socho agar wo bahar raha toh aashi,mumma, ree, bhabhi sabke liye khtra hai usse pakadne k liye itna risk toh hum le hi sakte hai na pls shree pls '

Shree: sia hato mujhe kuch nahi sunna'

Sia: pls shree pls'

Shree(removing her forcefully): haat jao sia u r not going anywhere ab main bhi dekhta hut um kaise jaati ho'

Sia: theek hai shree ab toh main bhi jaake hi rahungi ye mission sabse zyada mere liye imp hai maine apne dad aur sis ko khoya hai in logon ki wajah se I can't let them take aashi away from me' tumhe jo karna hai shauk se karo protocol todke bhi aaj main wahan jaake hi rahungi'u just wait n watch'

Saying this sia grabs her loaded gun n keys n storms out of the office leaving her phone & every other device that can trace her location'

DesiiiDivaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
yayyy that guy backed out
fry kardenge 😆
awww riya was blushing hearing that wife wala comment
poor rajbeer again getting scolded by sia 😆
how sweet arjun is so concerned for riya :)
awww they said i love you to each other <3
can literally imagine arjun ruffling riya's hair
robot spiceman 😆
shree is so worried about sia
omg sia went alone and also left her phone in office
hope nothing happens to sia
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i lovete concern shree has for sia and arjun for riya so sweet
fab update yaar
Thanx for PM and pls pls continue soon

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