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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 😊
love it... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...loved it..

continue soon...waiting.. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey that was really nice..
Sia sticking up with sree..cute..
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Avigyan n sunaina come there'

Avigyan: kya chal raha hai?

Sia(messing his hair as well): ye chal raha hai'

Avigyan: ho gaya ya aur khrab karna hai?

Sia: nahi ho gaya'but tum ye toh kehne nahi aaye ho'

Sunanina: hum..wo ..actually tumhe compliment karne aaye hai u both look stunning together'(lookin at shree) I hope ki tum dono hamesha aise hi raho'

Avigyan: ha smiling n together'

Shree-sia(together): thank you' hum koshish zarur karenge'

After the dinner everyone starts leaving one by one'

Rolisha: bye didu'

Sia: bye jaldi jao kal office nahi jana hai kya dono ko'aur ha maine parso dates li hui hai court mein time pe aa jana pls'

Rolisha: yes didu'

Sia: bhai-jiju aap logon ko kal commisner sir se milne jaana hai'n super hero n aashi kal school jaana hai'

Aashi-agastya (together to their moms): pls kal bunk karne do na pls pls'

Sia: no kal dono ki maths test hai isiliye drame kar rahe ho' lessons learn karvaye the maine so no bunking'

Samjun(with sad faces): theek hai baccha party lets go'.raste mein ice-cream kaun kaun khayega?

Aashi-agastya: hum'

Tanvi: mujhe bhi ice-cream khani hai'

They all leave now sonali samar kavya chotu riya shree-sia's mom n shriya r left'

Sonali-smar: ab hum bhi chalte hai'

Sonali:kal meri meeting hai toh have to go'

Samar: meri bhi'dnt worry sia I'll drop sona on my way home'

Sia(smirking): I wasn't worrying samar I knew it'

Chotu: main bhi chalta hu kal office mein milte hai'.

Sia:ok chotu bye'

After they leave'

Sia: team we have a big mess to deal with'kavya bata sabko'

Kavya: problem aisi hai ki amma-appa ne mere liye ek ladka pasnd kiya hai aur aap sab toh jante ho ki mujhe koi aur hi pasand hai'.ab main kya karu? Sia ne kaha hai ki wo mere jagah jayegi but fir bhi mujhe darr lag raha hai'

Sia: ha aur mujhe bhi koi idea nahi dikh raha hai'

Riya: fake boyfriend ye trick hamesha kaam karti hai'

Sia: ha but wo kahan se layenge?

Riya: ha yaar ye toh maine socha hi nahi'

Mom's: shree hai na'.

Shree: maa main matlab main kyun agar kc ko pata chal gaya na toh mujhe kaccha kha jayenge'

Riya: nahi khayenge'

Sia: atleast bhai toh nahi coz bhabhs humari side pe hai n unh eek week tak sirf bhabhs ki ha mein ha milani hai'

Riya: perfect timing na?

Sia: wo toh hai but issi week mein hume atleast sagaai karvani padegi warna do-do live bombs ko handle karna impossible hoga'

Mom's: ha ye toh hai'

Shree: wo sab toh theek hai but' agar arjun sir ko pata chala toh?

Sia: toh ree handle kregi unhe'

Everyone: toh decided kal se humara mission kavya-chotu begins'

Sia: ab aap sab ghar jao main yahan ka cleaning work supervise karke aati hu'

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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwhhh mission kavya chotu awsome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update :) loved it
glad that sunaina complimented them :)
awww kids want to bunk school :)
wow they are making shree kavya's fake boyfriend
and they are starting their mission from next day nice :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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After everyone leaves'.

Suddenly sia sees a shadow in the garden'

Sia(aiming her gun at the shadow): kaun hai wahan?

Shadow: tune mujhe pehchana nahi' jaana main koi anjana nahi' aashiq hu main tere naam ka dewana hu main dewaana nahi'

Sia: bakwass band karo apni ' kaun ho tum?

Shadow: sunshine apne cupcake ko itne jaldi bhul gayi' (Sia is shocked hearing cupcake from the shadow') ha ha cupcake toh ab purana ho gaya na' ab toh wo chashmish aa gaya hai'

Sia(turning the shadow, dropping her gun): tum?

Onir: ha main tumhe kya laga main apni sunshine ke liye kabhi wapas nahi aaunga' but yahan toh sunshine na sirf mujhe bhul gayi hai balki has rahi hai kisi aur k saath'(clenching her tightly) tum meri ho aur meri hi rahogi'

Sia: cup cake chale jao yahan se isime tumhari bhalayi hai warna zabardasti mujhe tum par goli chalani hogi'

Onir: chalao goli' come on waise bhi tumhare bina rehna marne ke barabar hai toh kyun na mar hi jau'

Sia(shooting him in his leg): sorry onir but u r under arrest ab apna maksad bata rahe ho ya main apne tareeke se ugalwau'

Onir: ugalwane ki koshsish zarur kar sakti ho jaane man main yahan tumhare liye hi toh aay hu'

Sia(calling rathore): sir aap jaldi aa jayiye mujhe kuch intresting mila hai'

Rathore arrives'..

Rathore: baby doll ye kya hai?

Sia: wrong question bhai' ye rana hai u knw who ka right hand ab main toh iska muhh khulwa nahi payi soch maar hi du but usme loss zyada tha isiliye aapko bula liya'

Rathore: ruko main puri teamn ko office bulata hu'

In the etf interrogation room'

Arjun: batao jaldi' is waqt hum sab ke jhoot bardasth krne ki shakti apne minimum level pe hai'

Onir: acp arjun suryakant rawte aap jo krna chahte hai kijiye main kuch nahi kahunga bas yahan se baith k apni sia ko dekhta rahunga(staring at sia)'

Sia(angrily entering the interrogation room & pointing her gun at him): jaan se maar dungi'

Onir: wo toh kabka maar chuki ho soniyo'

Arjun: sia go jao yahan se isse sach kaise ugalwana hai I know'riya le jao isse'

Sia(relasing the safety trigger): jiju ye kuch bolega nahi behtar yahi hai isse yahin khatam kar diya jaye'

Arjun: sia calm down'riya shree le jao isse'

Riya: chal sia pls'

Shree: sia chalo pls'

Sia leaves the room angrily n enters her cubicle in the lab n starts throwing everything'n hurts her hands in the process

Just then her phone rings'

Caller: tu tu tu itna gussa sehat k liye accha nahi hai.. itni garmi itni akad ..khair tumse yahi kehna tha ki humare bhai ko jab tak khairiyat se rakhogi tab tak tumhare apno ki sansien chalengi'

Sia: kaun bol rahe ho? Ye number kahan se mila tumhe'

Caller: hum kaun hai isse tumhe fark nahi panda chahiye hum kya kar sakte hai wo tumhara concern ho toh behtar hai' filhaal toh hum sirf tumhe call kar rahe hai kya pata kal tumhare ghar pahunch jaye hum'

Saying this the line goes dead'

Sia now starts fearing for the well-being of her mom n aashi'

Sia( hyperventillatingly to rathore):bhai kisi ne mujhe dhamki di hai ki wo maa maa aur aashi'

Rathore: shh shant ho jao '(handing her a glass of water n calling everyone there) theek se batao kya hua hai'

Sia: bhai wo kisi ne call karke kaha hai ki agar rana ko kuch kiya toh wo maa aur aashi'

Arjun: shree sia ke call records se uss no. ka pata karo'rathore iss rana ka muhh khole kaise'

Sia: jiju main try karu'

Rathore: nahi bahut risky hai hum koshish karte hai'

Now arjun has turned red with anger & rathore has turned into rowdy rathore'

Rathore: ek sawal aur jawab mein sirf sach sunna chahte hai hum' kyun aaye ho yahan?

Onir: kya baat hai acp sameer damsingh rathore aap toh gusse se lal ho gaye ho' kaha toh kisi se milne ka mann kiya toh aa gaya'(looking at sia)

Arjun: yeh aise nahi manega sam'(removing his gun & inserting in his mouth) bol kyun aaya tha?

Onir(scared):wo wo aashi ke liye'sikander bhai ko wo chahiye bhai ki beti hai wo'

Sia(angrily): wo meri beti hai naam mat lo uska apni zubaan se'

Onir: huh tumhari nahi wo roshni aur bhai ki beti hai jiske karan bhai ko tumhari pyaari roshni didu ne chod diya tha manhoos hai wo uske karan ye sab ho raha hai'

Sia: wo meri beti hai uske bare mein kuch kehne ka tumhe koi haq nahi hai'

Onir: aisa hai toh dna test kar lo abhi saari sacchai samne aa jayegi'

After everyone leaves'.

Suddenly sia sees a shadow in the garden'

Sia(aiming her gun at the shadow): kaun hai wahan?

Shadow: tune mujhe pehchana nahi' jaana main koi anjana nahi' aashiq hu main tere naam ka dewana hu main dewaana nahi'

Sia: bakwass band karo apni ' kaun ho tum?

Shadow: sunshine apne cupcake ko itne jaldi bhul gayi' (Sia is shocked hearing cupcake from the shadow') ha ha cupcake toh ab purana ho gaya na' ab toh wo chashmish aa gaya hai'

Sia(turning the shadow, dropping her gun): tum?

Onir: ha main tumhe kya laga main apni sunshine ke liye kabhi wapas nahi aaunga' but yahan toh sunshine na sirf mujhe bhul gayi hai balki has rahi hai kisi aur k saath'(clenching her tightly) tum meri ho aur meri hi rahogi'

Sia: cup cake chale jao yahan se isime tumhari bhalayi hai warna zabardasti mujhe tum par goli chalani hogi'

Onir: chalao goli' come on waise bhi tumhare bina rehna marne ke barabar hai toh kyun na mar hi jau'

Sia(shooting him in his leg): sorry onir but u r under arrest ab apna maksad bata rahe ho ya main apne tareeke se ugalwau'

Onir: ugalwane ki koshsish zarur kar sakti ho jaane man main yahan tumhare liye hi toh aay hu'

Sia(calling rathore): sir aap jaldi aa jayiye mujhe kuch intresting mila hai'

Rathore arrives'..

Rathore: baby doll ye kya hai?

Sia: wrong question bhai' ye rana hai u knw who ka right hand ab main toh iska muhh khulwa nahi payi soch maar hi du but usme loss zyada tha isiliye aapko bula liya'

Rathore: ruko main puri teamn ko office bulata hu'

In the etf interrogation room'

Arjun: batao jaldi' is waqt hum sab ke jhoot bardasth krne ki shakti apne minimum level pe hai'

Onir: acp arjun suryakant rawte aap jo krna chahte hai kijiye main kuch nahi kahunga bas yahan se baith k apni sia ko dekhta rahunga(staring at sia)'

Sia(angrily entering the interrogation room & pointing her gun at him): jaan se maar dungi'

Onir: wo toh kabka maar chuki ho soniyo'

Arjun: sia go jao yahan se isse sach kaise ugalwana hai I know'riya le jao isse'

Sia(relasing the safety trigger): jiju ye kuch bolega nahi behtar yahi hai isse yahin khatam kar diya jaye'

Arjun: sia calm down'riya shree le jao isse'

Riya: chal sia pls'

Shree: sia chalo pls'

Sia leaves the room angrily n enters her cubicle in the lab n starts throwing everything'n hurts her hands in the process

Just then her phone rings'

Caller: tu tu tu itna gussa sehat k liye accha nahi hai.. itni garmi itni akad ..khair tumse yahi kehna tha ki humare bhai ko jab tak khairiyat se rakhogi tab tak tumhare apno ki sansien chalengi'

Sia: kaun bol rahe ho? Ye number kahan se mila tumhe'

Caller: hum kaun hai isse tumhe fark nahi panda chahiye hum kya kar sakte hai wo tumhara concern ho toh behtar hai' filhaal toh hum sirf tumhe call kar rahe hai kya pata kal tumhare ghar pahunch jaye hum'

Saying this the line goes dead'

Sia now starts fearing for the well-being of her mom n aashi'

Sia( hyperventillatingly to rathore):bhai kisi ne mujhe dhamki di hai ki wo maa maa aur aashi'

Rathore: shh shant ho jao '(handing her a glass of water n calling everyone there) theek se batao kya hua hai'

Sia: bhai wo kisi ne call karke kaha hai ki agar rana ko kuch kiya toh wo maa aur aashi'

Arjun: shree sia ke call records se uss no. ka pata karo'rathore iss rana ka muhh khole kaise'

Sia: jiju main try karu'

Rathore: nahi bahut risky hai hum koshish karte hai'

Now arjun has turned red with anger & rathore has turned into rowdy rathore'

Rathore: ek sawal aur jawab mein sirf sach sunna chahte hai hum' kyun aaye ho yahan?

Onir: kya baat hai acp sameer damsingh rathore aap toh gusse se lal ho gaye ho' kaha toh kisi se milne ka mann kiya toh aa gaya'(looking at sia)

Arjun: yeh aise nahi manega sam'(removing his gun & inserting in his mouth) bol kyun aaya tha?

Onir(scared):wo wo aashi ke liye'sikander bhai ko wo chahiye bhai ki beti hai wo'

Sia(angrily): wo meri beti hai naam mat lo uska apni zubaan se'

Onir: huh tumhari nahi wo roshni aur bhai ki beti hai jiske karan bhai ko tumhari pyaari roshni didu ne chod diya tha manhoos hai wo uske karan ye sab ho raha hai'

Sia: wo meri beti hai uske bare mein kuch kehne ka tumhe koi haq nahi hai'

Onir: aisa hai toh dna test kar lo abhi saari sacchai samne aa jayegi'

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENTS LOVE U ALL❤️😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Super awesome loveit cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
super agge kya hoga...
omg sikander is coming back to take aashi away from her...
poor girl...
awesome update. .
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aashi is Roshni and SIKANDER'S daughter??! Oh HELL!


Awesome part!! Waiting 4 more!!

PS.. Feel like killing this Onir!!!!!!!!!!

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