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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Zahara ! woman, I'm loving this. I love how there's a suprise update waiting for me to be read

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Ch7 was Fantastic, really ! The story is deff. getting interesting .. with Fahmida's fam .. it's a bit lighthearted and sweet .. which I'm loving. The bonding is amazing between the fam, the couples.. Rehan and Faiza.. and how I can forget the adorable little kiddies.
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I'm wanting to believe that somehow Raina ending the night with a little interaction with Rehan..ended up in a peaceful slumber. I'm liking how you are opening up bits and pieces of her past .. starting off with her sister. It's quite suspenseful as I'm so eager to know !

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arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I'm really really sorry for the late reply Zahara.....Actually I was terribly busy studying for my physics and chemistry exams...Coming to the update...It was Superb..👏..Fantastic...👏..I'm getting more and more addicted with each and every chapter...I love each and every small thing about the story...Though you have made each character extremely lovable including the children still I can't help being drawn towards "RehIna"..😳😳...Be it the ordering of the same pasta or the coffee session at 2 in the night I Love the two like anything...Waiting really eagerly to know Raina's past... It's quite evident that she was betrayed by the one she was to marry yet the full story is not known... Please please Zahara do continue soon... It's just next to impossible for me to wait for the next part... and please do pm me...(Even if you don't it doesn't really matter because I keep refreshing the page every alternate minute...😛)

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: hilly
Zahara ! woman, I'm loving this. I love how there's a suprise update waiting for me to be read
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Ch7 was Fantastic, really ! The story is deff. getting interesting .. with Fahmida's fam .. it's a bit lighthearted and sweet .. which I'm loving. The bonding is amazing between the fam, the couples.. Rehan and Faiza.. and how I can forget the adorable little kiddies.
...
I'm wanting to believe that somehow Raina ending the night with a little interaction with Rehan..ended up in a peaceful slumber. I'm liking how you are opening up bits and pieces of her past .. starting off with her sister. It's quite suspenseful as I'm so eager to know !

AH! Glad you're liking it! I guess it's lighthearted but drama as well, because on one hand there's Fahmida and her children who potentially have the best family even without the dad and then there's Raina who is alone except for her Aunt - who is not really her aunt but like an aunt... 😳

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: arhifandebi
I'm really really sorry for the late reply Zahara.....Actually I was terribly busy studying for my physics and chemistry exams...Coming to the update...It was Superb..👏..Fantastic...👏..I'm getting more and more addicted with each and every chapter...I love each and every small thing about the story...Though you have made each character extremely lovable including the children still I can't help being drawn towards "RehIna"..😳😳...Be it the ordering of the same pasta or the coffee session at 2 in the night I Love the two like anything...Waiting really eagerly to know Raina's past... It's quite evident that she was betrayed by the one she was to marry yet the full story is not known... Please please Zahara do continue soon... It's just next to impossible for me to wait for the next part... and please do pm me...(Even if you don't it doesn't really matter because I keep refreshing the page every alternate minute...😛)

Hello D!! It's okay! Don't worry, hope you did fine in your exams! Mine had just started today, really angry at how hard it was. Anyway... Hehehe RehIna!

It's quite evident that she was betrayed by the one she was to marry yet the full story is not known..

^^ Heheheheh...

Don't worry, I'll update as soon as I can.

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arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

I'm waiting like anything for you to update this... Please Please do update it whenever you can...😃

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

^ D, you'll have to give me a week :( Exam in two days!

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Hey Zahara! :)

I'm Aanya, I just came across this story and finished reading it. It's absolutely amazing <3

I love the characterization, especially Rehaan because not only does he have an amazing name (Rehaan is one of my favorite boy names 😆) but he's shy and I love shy guys LOL. Jokes apart he's a great, I relate to him because I'm like him, quiet :)

Raina is intriguing, I love her work ethic but I'm incredibly curious about her past, I hope it comes to light soon! I like the way the change in her life because of Rehaan (and family!) is gradual and slow, it makes for an interesting read.

Rehaan's family is lovely too, it's close knit and I love all of them :D Faiza is refreshing with her childlike enthusiasm, she reminds me of my cousin who is boy crazy :P

Update soon :)

xoxo

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

So, when are you planning to update, huh???

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Hey guys! How are you?

I haven't forgotten about this - honest! Just things been pretty hectic lately... Though I got an offer(s) from University, it doesn't mean I have a place yet. I have to get my grades and meet my targets so they accept me. There is also this scholarship thing, if you can call it that, where you apply for a course and if they accept you...the university will lower your boundaries. So if I need an A for a subject, they'll accept a B. That will help me so much but only if I get accepted.

I'll try to update here and there but for the next few weeks, I may not be able to.

Sorry.