FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 77

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

241.8k

Users

375

Likes

5.9k

Frequent Posters

Rasgulla_sp thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
r

Edited:

Lady you didn't disappoint. You got me all smiling, awwing, "O"ing, blushing and then finally freaking out.

Firstly, the way you described the thought processes of Arnav and Khushi it was so seamless from what Ridz wrote.

Both can't really help getting affected by each other, can they?

Thanks for finally bringing Anjali and Shyam. Now the family angle can be explored too.

Imagine to be caught under a beautiful woman in such a public place by your sister. Main ho ti toh sharam ke maare mar jaati but then it is ASR. He can just walk off with Khushi in tow.

ArHi stranded on the road, Khushi pinned against the car by Arnav, then it rains, ek kiss to banti hain and what a kiss! But next time I want Khushi to be more participative 😳

And then Chulbul Panday? Like really??? 😆
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
Anarocksick thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
res
----------
Sorry for commenting this late... but I was so busy and I really wanted to read this chapter aaram se!

Btw, super fun this update was.
So many things happened, like my god! The almost kiss, entry of Anjali-Aakash, puncture, rainfall, the wet red saari and then the final kiss. My my my...heavy update. 😉

Loved each bit of it... but the last bit, that was plain epic! 😆

""Step back, Arnavji. Chulbul Pandey ki kasam, I'll handle this!"

I mean... where do you people come up with such hilarious stuff?

So must I add, that it was a wonderful update? This story is rocking my dull world!
Edited by blahblah16 - 12 years ago
-memorable- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
He mentally face palmed himself.

"Step back, Arnavji. Chulbul Pandey ki kasam, I'll handle this!"


these two lines stole the show for me 🤣
aarrsshhii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update... d last line ws simply superb... jst love d way thy cnt resist each other...
reshmimohan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
👏 Loved it. You had me laughing through all the chapters. What on earth is Khushi gonna do to them?
applesauce. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the chapter!
This FF is blessed by an amazing Writers..Each chapter is enjoyable!:D
Edited by GrumpyBee - 12 years ago
infiresmayn thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
I KNEW that if I slept, I wouldn't get onto a decent enough page to Res for the update :P

But chalo koi nai! 😆

RES-ing for now, will be back soon :D
samster03 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow !! Their first kiss !! Khushi is really very crazy and poor arnav..first he got caught by anjali and next he got trapped in the middle of no where..waiting for khushi to fight back the goons in her way Excellent update buddy !! :)
oceanssea thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
The last line.🤣I was expecting something like "lets ignore them".

Ah,and Khushi drenched in red saree,that has never happened
in IPK.

Anjali did her job of interrupting in the wrong time quite well.But
because of her we also got a perfect ArHi kiss later ,and a
drenched and dabangg Khushi.😆

Fabulous update,Juhiji.As always : )

swat.g thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Reswa
Unreswa: loved the update sorry was on hol so cudnt comment properly will make up for it!1👏
Edited by swat.g - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

7 months ago

When is the right time???

Everything happens at the right time, but we can't always recognize that right time. Don't wait for the perfect moment, because the perfect...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".