FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG - This FF is coming along STUPENDOUSLY!! Loved all the updates so far especially the last one.. I cant believe I signed up to join this crew... hope I can live up to it when the time comes...

But Seriously folks... its the heights of absurdity and I am just loving it!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god !!! Amazing update !! Filled wid such intensity !!!
The KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA is bak wid a bang !!!

"Step back, Arnavji. Chulbul Pandey ki kasam, I'll handle this!"

Only one word ''UNBELIEVABLE''
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Posted: 12 years ago
R

Edit: Kya baat hai Juhiji! You never fail to surprise me👏

This was an amalgam of some of the best A-K scenes❤️ From the 'tum theek ho' to the rain scene that remained a figment of our imagination.

Loved how beautifully simple the first kiss was.

'And once again, she chose the Laad Governor.
Or as she reasoned with herself, she chose her jalebis.'

^This is SO Khushi's thought process.

'But all she could remember right now was the fact that this was also the man who made her feel like a woman, for the first time ever.
His lips promised and demanded, all at once, and she never wanted it to end.'

People always write about the effect she had on Arnav and totally overlook the fact that even Khushi was never the 'ek Rajkumaar ayega' kinda girl. She too was equally perplexed about her feelings for this guy. So thank you for addressing that.


This FF is shaping up really well! Well done all of you!





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Posted: 12 years ago
A fantabulous update!!! I will articulate once more...you guys are very creative...those gray cells concoct such wonderful ideas...tumultuous applause to all of you..👏.
I loved Arnav's annoyance ..when Khushi pulled away...he felt that it was anomalous ...And, Anjali-Shyam are doctors..thank heavens for the novel thought...scalpel/stethoscope for a pooja thal..
So the gods were benevolent enough to invoke the earlier partial kiss thanks to the sudden downpour ..a catharsis...and Khushi does not have any qualms to be kissed by someone whom she terms loutish and pugnacious..I love this baffled duo...
And, the last line took the cake... 😆
The wait for the next update seems worth it...always!!! 😊
Edited by Aanchal15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. The last line was fab! :) Have a great year ahead :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chulbul Pandey ki kasam? The killer heeled sari clad tripping Khushi?? R0FL. Ja Khush ja apni Arnavji ki izzat bachale!! :D :D :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAHAHAHA!!! This is freaking HILARIOUS!
LOVE IT!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys... Fab idea... I wish u all d best... Will surely take out time to read it out...
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Posted: 12 years ago
last was line made me laugh...surprising...
i can surely imagine him raise and eyebrow at khushi saying..
excuse me...🤣

awesome update..
there kiss was sensual...

and anjali nd shyam docs...that was awesome again
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Arnav is about to be shocked yet again! The man has had so many shocks today, God knows how he'll survive, lol! Waiting to see his reaction on this one!! Little does he know that b4 the evening is over he'll be more involved than he's ever been!

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