FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 67

They always end up fightin...😆

aahh... u had to stop ther... woww.. brilliant.. thyre convo n A's jealousyy was overwhelming...

I am commenting on the 20th pg of your update. Sorry.

Now what I liked:

The bonding you showed between Payal and Khushi.

Payal didn't throw a fit just coz Khushi was going on a date and in fact helped her in choosing an outfit. God should bless everyone with such sisters.

Hayieee red sareee!

I like this Khushi who thinks on her toes, especially in deflecting her Buaji 😃

You showed the attraction between Arnav and Khushi beautifully, realistically.

Arnav's internal turmoil about asking Khushi out on a date, again was perfectly written. No one could have thought better.

I liked they spoke with each other and got to know a little something.

Arnav bitwa is already jealous? 😲 I like it 😊

The fight was sooo cute.

And you made her fall over him! And their lips touched!

Gutter altert. Yes, I am desperate!!!!

it awesome

hey great update yar nice 😊 😊

going better and better everypasing minute hahahh love it

i had imagined their date to be a romantic one with kushi acting all filmy,
but wow...their fight is even better!
kushi gives as good as it gets! i love it!



i can replay this scene over and over again, and still laugh...


tks for the PM

"Looks like you don't have a choice, Khushi. All you can do is pray that Aranvji has quick reflexes

Oh my god the most awaited date I had been waiting for. ^_^ You have no Idea how happy I felt when I saw your Pm. This update was SUPER DUPER ZUPER AMAZING. :D