FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

all smiles wen i was reading this :)

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

hahahahah.. oh i love this couple!! cupid got them good!!! :) aweee khushi is sooo witty and arnav, the ever jealous, self-made- sex bomb! loved, loved, loved it!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Did u say their lips touched???😳 ahem ahem waiting for next part eagerly

well i really had a smile thru out...😃

Aman n Lavanya😆

oh i so wanted Khushi to walk out like she did... perfect arnav Khushi..

They cant ve oh so perfect date u know.. but there is tremendous beauty in each of their imperfection!❤️

Arnav... u r just gonna get more convinced of ur attraction...

she has alreay made ur life upside down in 24 hours.. wait n watch😉

very cuuute update yaar😊

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Oh my what a mess at the end!! hahahahhaha!!! and wowww cant wait to read whats next!!

awesomeee!!!!

loved ittt

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

lol that was funny.. aman and khushi are an interesting angle
gr8 update continue soon

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Wishing you, your loved ones and everyone involved in this collaboration a Merry Christmas and a Happy, Safe, Peaceful and Prosperous New Year!

really loved this payal who doesn't hesitate to tease khushi... her quip about arnav having quick reflexes and the image of khushi tripping over her sari and dropping milk all over the pandit had me in splits! arnav mesmerised by khushi's beauty made go aww! and then mouthing a string of profanities when she stepped on his foot was just awesome...they wouldn't be arnav and khushi if they don't quarrel... arnav being jealous at aman paying fulsome compliments to khushi and lavanya disliking the whole scenario was another good scene... the cherry on top was, of course, khushi walking off in a huff at arnav's attitude and then falling on him, ending in a kiss!

must say you have a flair for rom-coms... so please do include this genre among your others!

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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

I wrote this huge comment for this and it all got lost because of a stupid power cut!
Anyway I just want to say all of the writers who've written so far have done a wonderful job.

Madmaxine, love that you making Khushi design bikinis of all things, and you did an amazing job of including the falling off the ramp scene I never get tired of that. Meera, "are you saying I'm fat?" 😆 And Rasgulla, you had me rolling on the floor with their arguement, the part where she offers to pay him "increasing" amounts was hilarious! BlueMistique, you gave me a jealous Arnav. And a flirty Aman! Nothing more I could have asked for.

Awesome job all of you. All writers waiting in line for their turn, I haven't had the chance to read all of your works but I've definitely heard great things about you all and I'm sure you all will do a fantastic job! 😃😃

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Res wil comment later but in word jhakaas..

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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

Smile are u kidding us ridz? M freaking laughing lyk maniac a true date vch we want to watch in shw a mental, hillarious khushi nd arrogant raizada luved dis ch wine glass, clinch of glasses, cheap gotta talks , aman, lav nd jealous aman always fun to b read dis ff w8 for nxt