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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Oh god!!!!this was such a hilarious date...i wish sum1 wud entertain me like that ,i wud love to watch a couple like arshi in real,of course as an outside party n not being a part of it!😉😉

the handsome rakshash didnt anticipate a thing coming like khushi kumari gupta ever in his wildest dreams n he is left speechless not knowing wat to do...poor guy!😃

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

I'm here ... finally! 😆

Since I didn't comment on Saiyu-ji's update, this is a double comment for both of you guize 😃

OK, so Chapter 3:

This has to be one of the funniest things I've read - I started off giggling, then chortling, then ended up with full-on ROFLMAO Syndrome, honestly. 🤣

The way Khushi preferred to face him over the dog! Completely unexpected, yet so Khushi-like! Although, to be perfectly honest - I'm also terrified of dogs; I'd take 'strange-and-angry-young-man' over dogs, any day. *shudders*

But seriously - with every update, there is a monumental build-up of that amazingly sizzling chemistry that the two share. Absolutely brilliant :')

And that bit right at the end was just ... 👏

The way in which he asked ... no, the way he demanded she meet him for a date was fantastic - date toh hogi ... lekin pure ASR style main hogi! 😉😆

And oh, how I love shell-shocked Khushi and the way she simply couldn't comprehend what on earth had just happened 😆

GAAHH. There's no more I can say. It was amazing. Bas. 😆

Now, on to Ridz-ji's update! 😃

Let me just start with: 🤣🤣🤣

Phew. Now that's outta my system;

Everything was brilliant.

I'm really admiring the transitions from each chapter - there is always continuity and it's all nice and smooth and stuff (at a quarter to 2 AM, m'fraid that's the best of my coherence 😆)

The date perfectly embodied exactly what an A&K date would be like - a little bit of flirting, followed by their infamous quarrels, which are always a treat to read! 😆

And oh gravity! Thou art a heartless bitch when it comes to Khushi Kumari Gupta! Bechaari, ya toh khud gir jaati hai, ya phir cheezo ko giraa deti hai! 🤣

Ooh! Emergence of the green-eyed monster already? Bitwa eej toh phisling already! 😆

And gosh what an ending!

Dates generally end in a kiss, I've heard that cliche.

But, dude. You took that cliche, turned it on its head, fried it and added some chutney because that was unexpected! 🤣

You've done a great job and I can't wait for the next one to see where it all goes! 😃

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Smile? I think I just died laughing.. Oh my! That was just WOW.. lol Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Oh my god.

SO many excellent writers coming up with fantastic updates.

The update was SO 'Arnav and Khushi'.

TOO adorable. Loved it :)

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

First and foremost, thank you Zehra for the link...🤗.would have missed a pulchritudinous FF, otherwise...

Read all the three chapters in one go, ...just loved each of them...You guys are talented..I kowtow to all of you...

Gota embellishments on swimwear...an innovative thought...

I loved Khushi's inner monologue...ecstatic on perceiving a window, but , dampened on descrying a canine...and prefers ASR to it...Also does not mind bestowed with endearments, but, her gotas should not be besmirched...this girl is unique..and, Arnav-Khushi badinage was refreshing..

I adored Arnav...you have etched his character with a slight disparity,without deviating much from the original...this Arnav is far less convoluted, ...I loved the date suggestion...cannot wait for his rendezvous at The Palms with the lady in red and her hair coiffured, differently...

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Great update
Der date cudnt have gone any worse lol
They got interupted,khushi spilled wine on arnav,she stepped on his foot n to top it dey had a arguement
Looking forward to read the next chapter
Will dey kiss or not
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

omg..i read through all the updates..khushi n swimwear...n gota's...n date with ASR😉am loving this story😃fantastic update👏update the next one soon dear😃

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

omg!!!! lol!!! they kissed while falling!!😆
thats a first!!!😆😆
awesome update Ridz!!
loved it!!
and man!! khushi has way too much guts lol!! 😆😆

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Oh the date was absolutely PERFECT...wouldn't have it any other way...khushi stayed true to her character and gave as good as she got!!!! Loved it

Poor poor Aman...hitting on ASR's Date.??? Dude you are sooo dead

Loved her reasoning for the wine.😃

And ofcourse where khushi is concerned a fall is must...epic!!!!

Awesome update

Thanks for the PM

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

I love this sassy khushi ⭐️
What a lovely ending desperately waiting for the new beginning 😳
Excellent update ,all of you writers are so good everytime I read a new chapter I feel ok this one is the best and I have felt this for all the updates . 👏