FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 59

Chap 1

gotas? swimsuits? you're serious? my imagination isnt working with that combo... perfect entrance for chamkili... gota + swimsuits.. haha

how did aman know jhumki's were from palika bazaar? do men notice that ever??? him being an asshole and all...

bhagwan jab deta hai to chhapar phad ke deta hai... that was classic... what a dialogue coming from ASR.. brilliant...

loving it.. absolutely hilarious... what a chamkila chapter...

Chap 2

haha... she ran away... this is sooo good... i guess now she will have time to bask in the glory of her brilliance.. hahaha

Chap 3

measuring the size of the window?? hahah stupid question... stupid answer.. hahaaa

laugh??? i couldnt stop.. she prefered him over a dog??? that was cannon sized... what a hit!!!

hahah... he is asking her about her hair?? oh god that was hilarious... my stomach hurts... and she is ranting about buaji... oh my good lord... this is numbing my mind funny...

Chap 4

was that really a date??? i am laughing my guts out... reading 4 hilarious chapters at one shot... not a good idea...

dont walk away from me... well watch me... she is too good... gutsy and damn u attitude... suits her...

annnddd we have lip lock... fireworksss

loving this ff... cant wait for the next chapter...

seriously ladies.. u all are fabulous writers.. i wish if i had even an iota of your talent.. i wud be blessed... its truly a pleasure to read each and everyone of you...

now a days i prefer reading your stories rather than the published books...

superb... keep it coming.

This is a very nice concepts. Looking forward to reading others as well. The story is very good so far

Lovely,lovely update ...

Very funny😆

Will sooon be back to read 😊

OMG this is Superb.. and they kissed.. hayaa me very happy.. this ff is DAMN good!! Can't wait for the next one

Smile?!...That I did on the very first line of the update when you used plural form
of laadgovernor 😆

Loved the date and the interruption by Aman and Lavanya.And Arnav was throwing
murderous looks during Aman-Khushi interaction,so he is already a little jealous.

A wonderful update.😊

I think its the era of cliff hangers! All you talented authors stop at the right so not according to a reader place!

That was so much fun! Frm Payals teasing to a tad bit of jealousy showcased by Arnav when Aman Mathur was flirting and ofcourse our accident prone khushi spilling wine all over Armani n walking off and not to forget the PDA! Is it jus a brush or will it actually turn into a kiss oly Part 5 n sweet author can tell!

Cheers n Zeh thankies for the Pm

Awesome awesome...loved ur idea of spilling milk on Panditji...that was amazing...loved the entire date...waiting for next update :))

I definitely loled at the dog part!!!