FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Jst read d whole chapters...awesome is all i acn say... grt wrk guys...keep it up.. n thnqq sooo mch fr d mail lazy leaves... :-)

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

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Yes, I am late. But Im also sorry :'( Vacationing isn't really the best thing with my family :(

GAHHH, I LOVED IT SO MUCH.

This was the most perfect, absolutely amazing first date Arnav and Khushi could have ever had. You stayed true to their characters, and I adored the riposte between the two. Just brilliant! And cliffhanger ending!

I really loved it Ridz! I was laughing all the way through!

PS : I love K and Payal's bonding 😃

Edited by dreamyshadows - 13 years ago

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Good going! You balanced mushy & funny! :)

And stayed true to IPK.

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@boyznaka

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

RIDZYYY!

EFFING BRILLIANT!

The date was so.. so ..SO this. This, IPK2.0

I loved it.

In the end, when the wine fell, I was expecting a "Apke kapdon pe Juice..*sniff*"[2.0] But you gave a kiss! A KISS! I love you!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

This was stellar. There are first dates and then there are first dates

Ridz, honey, you excelled with it and how. Rom-com isn't your forte? Well, maybe you just need to write more with such a fine ability to do so,so well!

I loved the date. Brilliant

And do I love this Khushi or what! Red wine...that's the spirit, girl - Show that Arnav-ji what you are really made of!

And I envy Juhi-ji to no end. That opening...Explelliarmus-ji I can see that you are totally going to disarm some folks - Arnav-ji included :D