FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

"She looked at the window and then at his picture on the newspaper. She contemplated and made her decision. The window had just lost some of its charm."

"I am scared of dogs. It is easier to face you than a dog"

"Is the oil that you are wearing the raaz behind your long, thick, black, hair?"

OMG... Saiyu... Hilarious update... This ASR is really driving me crazy...👏...

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Beautiful. Thanks for the pm.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

I absolutely loved it! I was laughing indeed! Thnks for the pm.

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Hiii...Awesome updates...Loved them both...enjoyed ArHi nok jhok...good 2 c Khushi not scares of ASR...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Your aim was definitely successful. It certainly had a smile on my face as I was reading. Looking forward to how "the date" plays out.

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

This update was hilarious, enough said! You managed to make me laugh all through it. I loved your description of a saucy Khushi marking her exit from the window and then retracting at the last moment. 😆😆 She is indeed very brave to face ASR rather than a dog. I probably would have done the same! The best part of this update was Khushi getting angry at Arnav for disrespecting her Gota's more than him calling her sweetheart. 🤣 This shows her dedication towards her profession. It's a tough niche to carve!

A line that absolutely stole this update was - '' mind your language...body language'' 🤣🤣🤣

Wonderfully Done :) Eagerly waiting for the next update.
-Shiza

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 12 years ago

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

M laughing while reading... My colleagues thought m going mad
awsome part
luved it
khushi choose ASR over dog... Nd think window a taj mahal gud humour mst say
anyways w8 for their date
cheers for pm

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Frida

@Frida

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Superb update!!

Khushi is so funny here & I adore her.

Can't wait for their dinner date...

I am sure the great ASR is going to get bowled over by our sanka devi's beauty.

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Oooh Mr Raizada, moved in for the kill and asked the lady out on a date 😉 and demanded how she dresses too 😆 that was so ASR !
Waiting to see how Khushi gets gota into the date- waiting for the date and its after effects!