FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Woww... loved it... Mind your your body language... lol...

Thank you for the PM dearr...

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

that was awesome...loved it...

evrything about this chapter was to smile..seriously great work...

plus next chapter...date...huhh???

awesome...

i am imagining her in a red churidar open hair and cute looking exp and he being most handsome and awesome...

update soon

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raina

@Girlabouttown

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

really enjoyed reading the updates.

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

kushi is right!
arnav's bark is worse than his bite! 😉
he is actually a likeable guy...
and i LOVE their easy banter...

tks for making me smile...

looking forward to the red hot date!

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Vicks

@Vicks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Wohh...I didn't know about this FF till I got the update from lazyleaves and you, rasgulla_sp...

I must say - I am impressed with the story so far...

Keeping in tune with the story in the serial, as well as having your own twist to it!!!

BTW - a curious question - do the authors discuss between each other on why you left the story where you left it and then leave it to the next author to continue it as they deem fit???

Looking forward to reading more of this!!!

-Vicks

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

ryt from the 1st line i couldn't stop grinning like a fool 😃

loved the update

plzzz do cont. soon

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Read all the three parts...and they all were amazing...

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Fleur_de_Lis

@Fleur_de_Lis

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

kudos to you guys for a fab job...please keep sending me updates...

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

jus read chapter 2 now i loved it :)

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

It was a fabulous update,Rasgulla_sp.

These sentences were utterly funny,

Arnav entered the office to the sight of Khushi's cute posterior strategically protruding out of the window. Cute? He questioned himself.

"You mind your… your body language!" (awesome)😆

"Is the oil that you are wearing the raaz behind your long, thick,
black, hair?" (this question was hilarious as it came from ASR's side)

I love Khushi of this FF more than that of the serial's.This Khushi is more fun and has
a most unique profession in the world.

Waiting for the next fabulous update.