FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

I so laughed out loud. It was awesome.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

The date! :D

Lovely work Rs! :D

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

That was the craziet ever way to ask someone out for a date !

But with you writing and the person who's asking is Arnav, I should have accepted something like this right ?

Oh ! when Khushi said that atleast Arnav doesnt bite, I was almost expecting him to give her a hickey, but he's very decent guy 😉😆 And Khushi didnt have a prob wiht him calling her sweetheart, but feels so irked the way he addresses her Gotas🤣 ... BTw, how is he supposed to give it more respect ? Call it her Goti Jis ? 😛

And oh ! She picked up the newspaper already !
All Id want to say is *Dil to Bacha Hai ji* !

Waiting for the next one !
And this one was fab tooo <3 Love you guys for wriitng this !

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Hilarious!! Khushi choosing to face the wrath of ASR than the DOG. ROFL!!!! ASR is completely smitten by Gota Seamstress LOL. Indeed a date and I am looking forward to it. The oil Conversation is too hilarious

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

fantastic update dear:)

loved it :)😃

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Wohoo...i jus love the way of Asr asking a girl out fr a date...lol
Dog and Asr comparison was hilarious...
Loving their chemistry...
Awesome update...eagerly waiting for their date...

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Hey All , this is shaping up extremely well ...needless to say the different voices are lending spice to the narration while staying true to the spirit of the story ...and I can only imagine how difficult it must be for each succeeding writer to deliver yet stamp her own brand on the whole .Kudos !

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neha

@arshiipkkndluv

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

that was an awesome update..i just loved it...plz update soon

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

wt a collab..:Dall 3 chptrs wer amazin..:)1stly wid d Buaji n Gotas n Swimsuit n ol..dt was funny..bt dn accptd..dn La..ji..PAmjii..n every1 ji..Khushi n her ji part z alwz cute..:Ddn d contest..:Doh i thot its gonna b d same as was in d shw..:Dbt here..Arnav z alrdy attrctd 2 her..has invtd her 4 a date..compensation..:Dlolred..n open hair..:Ddis Arnav z cute..:D n fast frwrdd...soo..ol in ol..Khushi n her Gota wrk made her lyf..:Dloved it..:)thnxx 2 ol who sent d pm 4 dis stry..:)