FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

your mission was totally successful! haha

Ohh a Date!!!!! very nice!! I am excited!

I love how the chapters are flowing together!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Hey!

Back again ... 😆 ... This time with my comments on the third chapter.

Trust Khushi to find a way out. Love her! She's determined to get out of this mess and she does find a way out, though she doesn't expect to see a dog where she would've liked to make a quick exit ... 😕 Ooops! She must've been thinking ... If only ...

Anyway, she chose to face ASR rather than the dog and whether or not this decision will pay off ... well that is yet to be seen.

Khushi's honest. She's admit to Arnav that she was trying to climb out of the window. Another quality of Khushi I like and admire.

I think my favourite part or one of my favourite parts of this update was when Arnav and Khushi had a little bit of banter >>>

"Whoa whoa whoa! Sweetheart! Hang on a moment. I have discovered that you ARE the gota seamstress'"

"Izzat se naam lijiye" Khushi interrupted him.

"You don't like sweetheart? I can pick another endearment for you" He smirked when she blushed.

"I' I meant my gotas. You talk about it in a condescending tone. And no one, NO ONE talks about my babies like that!"

Loved this part! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Shows how passionate and somewhat possessive Khushi is about her gota. Like her baby 😳 Sweeet! Oh and as for the endearment, well I gotta give the guy some credit for trying 😉

As for compensation that Arnav is talking about, its sooo obvious that this is an excuse in order to get to know Khushi more ... what perfect way to do so by going on a date. On top of that he says,

"Let your hair down, no oil and wear red."

I mean woah ... he's only met her this once, for the first time and he's already telling her what to do ... Now I'm wondering what Khushi will do. Will she wear what SHE wants to in terms of the colour, or what HE wants her to wear ... and her hair ... up or down ... maybe half and half ...

Very well written. Looking forward to the next part. 😃😃

Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 12 years ago

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

WOW...So excited about this collaboration. Loved all 3 chapters. Looking forward to 'The Date'.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

A brilliant hilarious update...You did not make me smile, but laugh. I was lolling and rofling at some instances...😃. so just loved the update..

That was unexpected..a date to look forward at the end of the first encounter. Arnav has decided that he wanted to know the gota seamstress more or is there anything else in his mind..

I liked that part when she says 'mind your body language'.

But what made me rofl was she proposing compensatory money, but the higher the amount the hike was a mere Rs.5!!🤣

Backing off with the escape because of a dog. 🤣 I could totally imagine Kushi doing the same in a like situation. Comparing that dog is more dangerous than ASR and saying that to his face. 😆

Looking forward to their date..