FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

😆"I am scared of dogs. It is easier to face you than a dog"🤣

CLASSIc

I so wish i was there to see ASR's face

Hugs dear😆

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@boyznaka

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Kya bolu ab?

Rasgullaji this was sooo sweet. Arnav is such a badmash!

And the dog part! LOOOL I am a dog lover yaaras I will always call anyobe afraid of dogs silly. But, then again, it was me and not KKG brought up with ferocious German Shepherds. 😆 No kidding.

Anywho, whattay sweet updates yougaiz. My day is made everytime I read a chapter.

Meeraji, there's something about the dialogues that makes me giggle and feel so.. good.

And Maxuji you genius writer you! Gotas! Jahapana, tussi great ho! Mere take a bow ka tohfa qubool karo! 👏

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

smile? I am smiling, laughing, sn0rting, smirking and everything that expresses h0w much I am liking y0ur update!!

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Cay you PM me, when you guys gonna update the next chapter?

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Loved d update
Thanx for pm 😊 😊 😊
continue soon

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Mahrin17478

@Mahrin17478

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

I'm so glad that Lazyleaves has sent me this link...i really enjoyed every part of this FF...you guys are really talented...i always wondered how two guys write a novel or a script?? hmmm,now you guys are showing me how it's done 👏.coming to this update-Ha ha ha...i really had fun reading it specially this part "To decide which one of the two was a lesser evil; the dog or Arnav Singh Raizada"...wonderful...will wait for the next part for sure

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

I really enjoyed this update and I love the concept. I really like this khushi cause she actually talks instead of crying and Arnav cause he took action per his attraction. Lets see what's next.

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LIKEDMG

@LIKEDMG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

I loved it...sp;;y the twist...date wid ASR..I love ur MID...bcoz rasgulla is my fav sweet..

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Hey!

Looks like our poor Arnav is bewitched by the beauty of a local girl. For Arnav, that seems outright foolishness and madness ... because ofcourse HE wouldn't fall for someone like her ... what with trying to keep up the image of being ASR and she was from what he'd usually go for. Yet he couldn't stop gazing at her eyes and lips in particular. Yes Khushi is stunning. A natural beauty. Non of that fake stuff, but Arnav couldn't help but be enchanted by her. I wouldn't blame him if he thought she'd cast a spell on him 😆

Khushi is pretty damn brave. Oh yes she is. She's in a room, alone, with a stranger who has already manhandled her yet she is pretty adamant on giving as good as she gets verbally. Its not all bad. Atleast she used her sense and talked about what she was doing at the fashion event and how she came to be on stage. This gave ASR the opportunity to verify this information with whom it concerned and Khushi being well ... Khushi was right. 😊

Written well. 😛