FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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Ayaat

@Ayaat1216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Haga great chapter! I could not stop laughing! 😆
You know what the ironic part was? I would've done exactly the same as khushi. I would've chosen the wrath of a scary man then a dog 😆 😆
I know in real life it's a stupid idea but what can be done, I'm shit scared of dogs 😭
Also the body language part was hilarious!!! 😆
Woohoo date time 👏
Can't wait for the next update 😊 4 days to go 😉

Edited by Ayaat1216 - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

did we laugh you ask hell yes
are ya kidding me dear😊😊😊😊
we would all be rolling cause of laughter😆😆😆😆
our jaws would be hurting 😃😃😃😃
and water would be coming out of our eyes due to laughing too much🤣🤣🤣🤣
and you were worrying how you would be able to follow up from the previous writer huh
that was all in vain as you followed brialliantly from the previous writer⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
gosh we could have died laughing for sure after reading this👏👏👏👏
good lord what was that man
so she amost escaped but then she saw the dog and all the thoughts of escaping escaped her mind
i cant believe she thought that taking on the LG was less scarier than taking the dog well she is hell scared of them so i guess LG was a better option for her
and she even told him that didnt she
and he was like really are you sure you chose the right decision
and wasnt it funny when she said at least you dont bite well i wouldnt bet on that dear
cant believe they were having this conversation
and what was that all that with the gotas being her baby and all
this girl sure cracked me and arnie up both and the rest of the readers too
wow this khushi i love she is nothing like the show one and thats the best thing about it👏👏👏👏
cant believe he mentioned about her hair and her answer to it was even more ridiculously funny
so they are going on a date huh this should be intriguing
cant wait for the next person to take the mantle now
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Great update love how feisty Khushi is and her comebacks

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

🤣 Khushi is truly...a piece!

And ASR is bewitched, bothered and bewildered!!! Love the way he bribed her to go out on a date!!

That should be hilarious!! I hope ASR's ego is bashed again by Khushi's innocent ways, Lord knows he needs it!!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

😆

Yes , I laughed all through the update.

The best line was: "no one, NO ONE, talks about my babies like that!"

😆😆

I loved the update. And thank you for the PM too!

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urm21

@urm21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

it was funny, loved it, i have not laught as much with anyother FF, keep it up.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Thanks a lot for making me laugh so much... The comparison between Arnav and the dog was hilarious... The icing on the cake was when Arnav ordered her how to dress up for the date, can't wait to see what's actually gonna happen on the date... Loved the update.

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Well you made me smile for sure LOL I just love it when they converse.

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#439

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FABULOUS update Saiyu. Thoroughly enjoyed (re-read it in fact). I loved your usage of farce while explaining the deeds of the dupatta from Sarojini market; was watching a few old epis when I witnessed some and was just thinking about it.

Believe me if I had to choose between ASR and a black dog I would choose the former to deal with just like Khushi.

The hurt ego directed to anger and confusion to more anger; totally ASR, digging for reasons to get angry. Khushi doesn't mind an endearment but sure does get affected when Izzat is not given to her gotas.

"I am scared of dogs. It is easier to face you than a dog"

"You chose to fear a pariah dog more than ASR?" 🤣

There were quite a few lines that cracked me up in your update. You are good with Satire Saiyu; Meri Baat Maan. I want more of it in future, Bas.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#440

lol!! pat urself on the back!! i did laugh..and that too heartily!!😆
loved it man!!
this is amazing!!

it is better to face ASR than the dog!! ROFL!!! lol i agree with that though...i m mightily scared of dogs too lol!

nd dinner??? so soon?? might as well right?
after all this is the Doing it Right part!!!😉😆