Raizada and Sons - Thread 4 - Page 5

love in the air!!!
so finally...khushi has gotten over the past n now loving arnav without any doubt,any hard feeling!!
n their love making was hot!😉
love the update!!!

Loved the update, K.
and especially this -
He lifted his face to look into her eyes and saw the love shine through; he felt like he was looking in the mirror, seeing the love he held for her reflected back to him.

It's a great feeling getting your love reciprocated and I am glad they feel for each other.

On the other hand, this Arnav is really GOD of virility! Both Arnav and Khushi are fortunate that she is his match in that aspect as well. Just feelings are not enough for relationship to survive. It takes lot more than that. Physical compatibility is also very important, less understood and often neglected aspect of it. It can also make or break the relationship.

With the marriage secret out I hope it just gets better and better. I hope Khushi would soon talk to Arnav about Suraj.

Came back again -
Arnav expresses through actions. He emotes physically.(I dont know if this sentence makes sense) I am glad that Khushi understands his way of expression.
The subtle action of Khushi choosing a fully covering dress.. was touching. And Arnav not buying her reason of Sun and checking her.. was even more so.

Beautiful K, Just beautiful.. muah. Now waiting for PoL.

This chapter is filled with such raw intensity...Arnav is not quite vocal with professing his love...he shows everything with his actions...after all actions do speak louder than words...there is no doubt in my mind that Khushi and Arnav love each other dearly...but correct me if I am wrong...I think Khushi's guilt ridden mind is causing her to over compensate for her past mistakes. Otherwise, it would not have been quite so easy for her to accept the circumstances under which Arnav married her. Also, it is understandable if their love making gets a little rough sometimes. But Khushi's complete subservience makes me a little apprehensive...she accepts the pain inflicted as a kind of punishment. In fact, she considers herself fortunate that Arnav loves her with such unmitigated passion. Maybe, I am getting unnecessarily perturbed, but I find the dynamics of their relationship a little unusual. I am confident that Arnav will never knowingly hurt her, but its Khushi's attitude that confuses me. I think Arnav goes a little overboard sometimes and he realizes it and feels guilty too. But I find Khushi's extreme compliance with it a little unnerving!

Congratulations on the new thread ... 🥳 Party time for an early next update ... 😆

congrats for new thread!!!!!!!!
loved it!!!
the update was☺️

Originally posted by: vgedin

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Wow! Okay Arnav has some stamina! Jesus :D

I read the whole thing several times - and now I see the beauty in that complete devotion that Khushi now feels for Arnav. She has surrendered to her love, not submitted herself to Arnav.

There is something so raw in the way you write - you write as the narrator, and the narration is precise, and to the point - no ambiguity, no innuendos, no metaphors. I don't even remember you using terms like "mounds" for breasts, for example. But the narrator's voice is passive, so honest yet dispassionate - it does not betray anything, it does not tell us what to feel or make of it in the end. I think that is wonderful, it allows every reader to form his/her own opinion, makes that process very independent and unbiased.

That you thought of writing this chapter - a physical expression of an emotion so deep and passionate, is brilliant Kalyaani. And you've really done justice to it. The whole pain-pleasure thing kind of mirrors Khushi's state of being pained with guilt yet blissfully in love at the same time. Khushi's confession that she enjoyed it as much as he did was important, because otherwise it would mean she has become submissive, and that would mean Khushi has lost a part of herself - never a good thing.

I enjoyed this chapter every time I read it - gets better each time. Very well written Kalyaani, and it is not easy to write something like this. Several people write about a couple in love having sex, but to write about souls mating like this is very difficult, and this update was flawless.

Super hot update, haha. But the emotions were shown very well.

Damn Arnav he literally doesnt get tired. I felt like their relationship is now perfect. They aren't hiding anything between them. I have a nagging feeling this stupid Suraj guy is going to mess things up thanks for the update kalyaani:)

congrats on the new post!

wow chap 50...new thread n wat a chapter this was...kalyani u seem to infuse such a realistic bend to the story that one forgets its just fiction...the lovemaking was hottt...and something to be cherished😳...loved khushi total acceptance of arnav...she loves him n completely...its feels great to read of such a relationship n seriously you inspire me to dream of having such a relationship with my future soulmate...ohhh how i wished i had this ARNAV😉