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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wow!!!! their love-making was absolutely gorgeous and beautiful and adorable!!
true love is sooo beautiful right?
loved the update!!!😃

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow

I had just realized i missed this one

Amazing update

I like the less talking part :p

But ya the way she gave herself to him with so much love was a delight to read

Now we can easily deal with suraj!

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Amazing update...this update made khushi and Arnav closer to each other...Hope this new found love and trust would help them to withstand the hurricanes which are fast approaching.

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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sias2

@sias2

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

K,I have no words to explain..i can just say it was a masterpiece!you have written their love making before but this chapter you have shown us their soul mating! and that's commendable:-)Its said for a writer its v difficult to convey his thoughts to the reader but trust me K all of us who have read this chapter understood how you wanted to convey us about Khushi emotions.She has devoted Arnav and surrendered herself to him.she has let go herself just to satisfy their want for each other.A brilliant update!-S

Edited by sias2 - 12 years ago

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

so beautifully narrated.

finally Kushi gives herself completely to him and Arnav takes her all too willingly and over and over again...such passionate surrender, which man would refuse? and such punishment will drive any woman insane!!

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Finally Khushi has accepted the only language he is ever good at to express his love and she asked him to do just that. But is this is the calmness before or after the storm?

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

wow! arnav has tons of stamina and so does khushi loll i was surprised how arnav didn't say I love you back to her...i guess you are going to write a whole chapter on arnav's declaration on his undying love for khushi😉 can't wait for the next one!

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latekate

@latekate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Congratulations for the new thread

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

the update was just too good..Arnav Khushi's relationship is really too good...it makes me happy seeing the bond Arnav Khushi share..they both have surely come a long long way... from being married in a half-hearted relationship, today seeing their relation it is so good to read..it is as though the characters of Arnav Khushi have grown in front of my eyes, with each update & you are the creator...simply beautiful, wonderful, brilliant, fabulous, fantastic, superb, amazing, awesome, well written, expressed to the 'T' of perfect...keep up the good work going...i simply adore Arnav Khushi in this fanfic & i feel like saying 'Kissi Ki Nazar Na Lage Dono Ko'...hehe... loved the update...waise i'am wondering what file is which Arnav has hidden from his family..what destruction could this file now get...i hope nothing can break Arnav Khushi's relationship, no file, no truth, no third person, nothing, can break Arnav Khushi apart, that's my belief.. anyway good good...the fanfic is progressing very well...please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 years ago

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Khushi's acceptance of her love, her husband and her demonstrating her trust was done so wonderfully. She also respects this man now.

The secrets are slowly but surely revealed and Khushi is getting her answers regarding choices that had been made for her and her embracing the result. the line about her saying Arnav's name like a prayer conveyed such devotion.

Arnav also realizes that he needs to reassure her regarding the depth of his love...and he does it in his own style.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago