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shamin1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

beautiful chapter kalyani...u r writing is mesmerising and u knw exactly what to write and when o write...i still think u should turn it into a book...u are exceptional😃

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shagun05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

congratulations on reaching the 50 mark!!!

awesome chapter :)

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__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

That was beautiful!
Sigh! That waa truely amazing!
Loved it!

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naina50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thanks for the update ..Khushi seems to seek redemption for the way she behaved with Arnav for the first 8 months of their marriage ..I would have thought that in the light of the fact that she is a progressive woman, she would take into account the fact that the circumstances leading to her marriage was anything but normal ..she was entitled to feel let down by her father and she let the steam out by being brusque towards Arnav ..thanks again for the update

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oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Romantic.

Congratulations for a new thread.Hope you get many more threads.😊

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wonderful chapter. They both have given in to each other completely.

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preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

hey that was a beautiful update. finally everything is out in the open. when arnav refused to tell khushi the reason he married her, i thought there would be new hurdles to be crossed in their relationship. i thought the truth would hurt khushi and so he was keeping it from her. but i never dreamed arnav would turn out to be such a selfless person. khushi 's way of expressing her love and her words were sweet and touching 😊

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Arnav and Kushi communicate the way they are best at. To me this isn't about sex anymore, this is 'lovemaking'. (Although I abhor the use of the word)
My main gripe while reading such scenes is that a lot of people write just for the heck of it, very few are able to extend their characters into such scenes when they write it.

You my dear friend are on of the latter.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago