Raizada and Sons - Thread 4 - Page 14

Kalyaani, I Wish that all your wishes are fulfilled this year. Happy New Year

Merry Christmas to you !:)

The next one showed the concerned husband seeing tears in his beloved wife's eyes. I loved the way Khushi asked her husband to soothe her to love her the way she wanted. There is something in the way you write passion which is highly commendable.

Merry Christmas to you too and have a joyous year ahead.

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I am finally here with my comment K.



Let me start by saying that this story is way better than PoL in terms of details, layers upon layers of emotions, the importance of all the other characters, the many different plots and some really believable but strong/ screwed up characters.



And amidst all this the story of Arnav and Khushi. Khushi's indifference and Arnav's love. Khushi's attempts and Arnav's exhilaration, Khushi's verbal love and Arnav's physical. And their combined dedication and commitment to their relationship and each other. This love is perfection at its best. They are flawed yet love the best they know how to. They know the other is flawed yet accept each other in spite of those.



Their journey! what a journey! You have taken into consideration bloody everything! Their backgrounds, their connect to their and each others' families, their personalities, everything and tackled each issue making them come close. K you are AWESOMEST!



Since the start I was wondering what was so secretive about ArHi marriage and when you made us discover I though Khushi would flip and walk out on him but the way you made "Kunju" (I love the name btw) handle the scene I fell in love with Arnav all over again. That was a different perspective all together.



Full circle, isn't it? She hated Arnav for the way their marriage was forced upon her. And they made the most demonstrative and fulfilling declaration of their love when the reason of her forced marriage was revealed to her.



The way you handle sex it shows the motive is to express love and not titillate the audience. You are a master at intimate scenes.



I know Twiggy, Liya, Choti and am sure there must be others who are fighting over this Arnav. I want PoL ka Arnav. This one is too sexually charged. I tire easily 😉. Tsk tsk gutter. I meant I get tired even when I cook a single dish in the kitchen.



There were so many places I wished I was with the story from the start so that I could share my thoughts. But jo beet gayi woh baat gayi. Now I am on your story and here for good. I will comment away henceforth.



But still I love PoL more, bas bataa rahi hoon 😊

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Both Indira and Bhavna are strong women rendered weak at the hands of the men they love and the family they feel responsibility towards.

I love the silent love, and strong admiration between Arnav and Khushi. But someone please tell Arnav that even with all the physical demonstration of his love, a woman does need words.

btw had a thought today..which one of your stories should we get on screen..PoL or RAS :)