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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

i just hope ke virat is fine now dnt want anything worse to happen..
the way virat tried to make her understand what he actually went thru the hurt the guilt the reason the love and everything he tried making her think over it she shud have understood ...
Virat's POV very well written and expressedfelt really bad for him and his dialogue were awesome 👏 👏
the update was just awesome too emotional one and no doubt very well written 👏 👏
update next part soon and do pm me 😊

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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@krystel21

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

One of the most amazingly thought out chapters ever! Its beautiful to see how closely they're connected to each other!

Maanvi well, her senses are clouded, even though she knows and realises that her life is Virat. Its like their heartbeats are one.

The car crash/accident was a bit expected..dunno why! But now I can't wait for Maanvi to understand what he did for her.

Love the update, love you for this Kritiii ❤️

PS: Dill ka rishta I swear. I just woke up and checked IF to see this!

Edited by BalamPichkaari - 12 years ago

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-bonbon-

@-bonbon-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: BalamPichkaari
Res.

Dill ka rishta.

Dil ka rishta. ❤️

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

First for once!!
Oh no what happen to him, hope manvi accepts him, he really regrets and is trying his best hope manvi understands that soon and hope nothing happens to virat.
Update soon.

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nimi00

@nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Heart touching update. I love how you showed their connection. You are really a wonderful writer. ⭐️ Thank you for the update. Will be waiting for the next one. 😊

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-bonbon-

@-bonbon-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: BalamPichkaari
One of the most amazingly thought out chapters ever! Its beautiful to see how closely they're connected to each other!

Maanvi well, her senses are clouded, even though she knows and realises that her life is Virat. Its like their heartbeats are one.

The car crash/accident was a bit expected..dunno why! But now I can't wait for Maanvi to understand what he did for her.

Love the update, love you for this Kritiii ❤️

PS: Dill ka rishta I swear. I just woke up and checked IF to see this!

I'm falling in love with the jodi of my own story 😆 No matter what context they're put in, VirMan are just VirMan <3 the chapter really wasn't that great... too dramatic... but then VirMannn are just sooo It was unexpected for me too ... don't even know why I put it in 🤣 I'll figure out what to do with it next time I write... abhi it's my break from writing 😳

I knowww your always so quick at res-ing it's like dil ka risha guarantee ke saath ❤️

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

nice emtional update
virat still trying to convince manvi dat he has nt done anything wrng
whras manvi still nt listening
I actually liked d way virat tried to convince manvi...it was full of emotions...

ending was shocking...I just hope virat is absolutely fine

update soon...