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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

nice update both are incomplete each other
he getting hurt when she saying him to go way from her
now he will make release her that he also going pain loosing child
update soon

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

it was an awesum update...I have no words left

u described the whole situation Vry nicely

update soon

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Edited on page 100. Was the first to comment again, khoon ka rishta toh pata nahi, but definitely dill ka rishta hai 😆 ❤️

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

wow kriti
loved the update
now its interesting to see what virat will done
Waiting 4 next part... Update soon

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

fab update buddy
u stoped at the wrng time *cries*
plz cntine soon plz

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

awesome..~!!! Loved how Maanvi responses to his touch subconsciously...but isn't ready to accept it and now Virat's outburst for her denial..Eager for next!!!

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

yep that's right its time to make manvi realise hw much she actually does love himI feel really sorry for virat- here he is doing everythin possible for her n shes jus giving him hatred poor thing virat hope virat succeedsshort bt very nice update thank u for that- continue soon 😉

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

Awesome updt...manvis behaviour towards virats is really sad...but yes its time to tell her a truth...cont soon

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Aliyah

@.aliyah.

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

Iss baar jaldi update kar diya 😉.

What can I say Kriti as usual it was so beautiful, the way you write is so perfect and it leaves me speechless everytime. This update was so intense, VirMan's tanhai and dard... 😭awww.

I hope Manvi get's over it soon and they both end up happy together. It's still kind of difficult because he left her first and now he wants her back so it's going to be so hard for her.

Please do continue soon. I can't wait. 😊

👏

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

Brilliant update 👍🏼👍🏼i really loved it❤️!!!Awesomely written👏👏👏loved how manvi respond to virat touch ❤️Emotions of both viman were beautifully portrayed!!Virat outburst was superb...par manvi denies it:((( now wat is vriat gonaa do??waiting for the next update!!~~will be waiting...thanx for the upcoming pm :D