EHMMBH FF: *||SSP #2: Update ~ pg. 134||*

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Aliyah

@.aliyah.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Kriti, as usual you have left me speechless. This update was so beautiful, I can't even put in words.

The way you showed Manvi being able to feel Virat's pain ... it just seems so mesmerizing.

The dialogue and the way you are write the story are always commendable and this time round I loved it even more.

I honestly, really love this story and can't wait to read on.

Hope Virat's OK

👏⭐️

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Superb updt manvi hv to understand virat n his situation...omg accident? Hope he is alriight n manu realise her mistake n accept him whole heartedly...cont soon

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

omggg kriti i saw it just now and litrerally ran to read it

this was wayyy tooo beautiful even to describe

their bond is rare...precious i would say

the way u wrote the part where virat made her cut him was soo damm perfect that i feel soo low commenting that i wont be able to do justice to ur writing with my silly comment...lovely it was

hope virat will be fine and this incident will make manvi understand virat's side of story and his pain too

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

AWESOME.👏👏👏
IT WAS VERY EMOTIONAL UPDATE😭😭😭

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Krupaa

@forever_young

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Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Damn.

That was just freaking amazing mayn!

It was one of the best, heart-felt updatee!

Gosh, they need to except they are one. One heartbeat, One soul..just in two bodies.

Hope Maanvi comes across soon!

Virat's accident, i ha though that would happen..hopefully everything is alright soon! :D

Loved the updatee as always girl! xD

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Swagata

@FantasyFreak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Hi 🤔

Stranger here. yeah, its my first post .but I'm not a new reader. I've been following your story since like ages when I was not a member in the forum and you were Preeti_Shadia then, not Kriti 😆.. Its my 'favorite story' you know , not 'one of my favorites' ..I adore your writing skill.. The way you project yourself into the mind of your creations and lay bare their inner feelings got me glued to it at the very first time I started reading it..

Now Virat and Manvi have come a long way..Two broken hearts are slowly coming close to reunite..Nice going !!

Saath Samandar Paar ❤️