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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

it was reallly an emotional one.😭

it was well written👏virat's helplessness and love for manvi 👏

but manvi is not ready to accept him😒

the way virat hurted himself to show his love to manvi wow it reminds me of virat who shaved his hair for manvi in serial👏

virat car crash please continue soon😊

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

u made me cry yaar..
It was a mind blowing update...loved it to core.
Plz cntinue soon

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tara_vm

@tara_vm

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

very nce story... i like the way u write... pls continue soon... and hpe virat will be ok and maanvi forgves him...

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

awesum update!!!! omg virat met wit an accident !!hop he's fi9

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Sumana123

@Sumana123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Yeeeksss New Updatee

Wow ..cool ..exactly what was needed ...Its time for Maanvi to realize that Viraat is not wrong and she needs to move on...She needs to realize that even she would have done the same thing if kept in same situation...

Awesome update ...I pray Viraat comes back fine ..to Maanvi :)

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

awesome update dear
Like it very much
Waiting 4 ur next part
Update soon

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

oowww virats pov was just great, well written..
they love each other so much but they cant show it,
virat tries it but manvi dont want to accept it..

hope nothing happens to virat, and this will be make manvi understand her feelings that she cant life withouth virat...

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

you portrayed the love, the pain n everythin between virman so well especially the scene wen he givs himself pain jus to make manvi realise the importance of each other n hw they r 1 soulomg virat's car crash hope he is fine - bt maybe at the same tym this will make manvi realise her mistake n by feeling guilty herself she will also realise the guilt virat has been going throughthanx for the fabulous update - continue soon 😉

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Amazing..!!! Virat actually harmed himself to know the pain that he had gone through when he had t choose between his daughter n wife..very nicey potrayed...but Maanvi was being Abdamant...Virat met with an accident...hope this brings in sense in Maanvi for the decision he had to take..Waiting for next..!!

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Omg omg virat kaa car crush😲 hope woh theek hoe😭😭 this was soo intense~~~ awesome awesome👏👏👏when virat put the knife on his neck with manvi hand...gosh i was like haww...it was soo heart wrenching moment😭😭 manvi was feeling more hurt than virat:((par she is not understanding...hope she understand soon tat virat can't live without her...virat feeling was superbly portrayed👍🏼 his dialogues were superb ~~the way u have presented everything brilliant ~~~excited for next update...will be eagerly waiting !!!