Mohini ff:Life: It's Not a Journey - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys help me out...ek picture doongi...uspe Princess ka sorry yahan Doctor cum Mamma ka face dalna hai...Please Foram, Ria kar do na yaar.


Hey Foramdi and Ria...please see this...yahan jo girl hai uspe Mouni ki face paste karna hai...please I need this for my next updates. Please help me out.
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Five: Thoughts

Why my thoughts '.don't let you go?

What should I do?

I still feel for you''

It seems'.

Every second I miss you,

Every minute I need you,

Every hour I care for you'..

And forever I love you.

In my deepest point of Heart,

Darkest portion of my Head'

And in my every Breathe '

You still reside'..

I can't subside

Your Thoughts.

Today , after 10 years..

You have come.

You stared at me '

You smiled at me'

You shouted at me'.

Everything of your remain same at me.

When you walked towards me'

Touched my face and grazed the water drops,

Every molecule of mine was waiting for that time.

When you picked me in your arm'.

I was assured and relaxed,

Because that is the only place I know'

The most safest and wanted for me.

When you tightly hugged me'.

That almost choked me'

At a time gave the desired comfort

Which I always longed for.

Your passionate kisses and caresses,

Your warm breathe '

Made me melt.

I feel what I exactly felt'..

Remember our first love confession??

To fetch your attention'

Having high fever, on the day of Puja'.

I bathed early, kept fasting.

Decorated myself in a traditionally worn saree,

And all kind of jewellery '.

I came in front of yours.

You were busy with your friends'

Never paid a glance'kept your talking.

But in the evening when I was talking,

Actually chirping nothing ''

(Sorry all I wanted your attention.

So that was only to fulfill my mission)

You dragged me from my friends,

Grabbing my arm.

Your strong hold gave me pain'

As well as the pleasure to have you with me.

And then you shouted me''.

"How dare you to bathe in early morning?

Why don't you want listening?

And why do you stay in cold ?

Without any warm clothes?"

Saying this you draped me yours'.

I said" Why do you care ?"

But I too wanted your concern and care.

You stopped for a moment'.

Took a long breathe ..

Then announced "I love you."

What I wanted to say''

You said for me.

"You Love me"- its meant and means a lot for me.

You paused and continued'..

" I Love you ,Piu.

Want to be with you.

I care for you'

You are my only concern.

I don't know what do you think about me?

I don't know do you trust me?

All I want to say'.

I won't call you Piu, Pragyaparamita..

To respect your long time wish..

I will never scold you..

And do whatever will be your wish.

Please Be with me."

My eyes were heavy and teary.

My breathe was stopped.

My heart missed some beat '

And I was lost.

I replied'"I always listen to you.

Always follow you.

I will do my best,

With my all affection, love and care,

To make you happy .

Please call me always Piu'

From now my only shelter is you."

Listening this you hugged me tightly close your Heart.

Resting my head on your chest I heard my name in your Heart.

You kissed my forehead

And glided from there to my lips

Passing my cheeks and reached my neck.

Then you put a ring on my finger.

And said" Ma's gift for her DIL".

Announced " from now I am yours.

You are mine.

We are courting each other ..

And you are my fiance."

I was overjoyed and overwhelmed..

Beause What I wanted I got more.

Nothing was desired from this life more.

Or You remembered our wedding night?

I was tired and scared'

Thinking about my new life.

I was sitting on the bed (bed 'decorated with flowers)

Down my Head .

You came and lifted my face '

Cupping in your palm.

Just looked at my eyes'

You smiled .

And took me in your embrace'

You cuddled me and laid me on the bed.

Then you grazed your palms on my forehead.

And said " You are tired Piu.

You need some rest.

So close your eyes and rest."

I slept'

And the next morning

When I opened my eyes..

You were still gazing at me,

With a sweet smile.

I never felt so secure '.

Yet comfortable..

Your care and affection '

And your smiling attention'

Are my exact needs.

Today'when I was leaning on you.

Resting my head on your chest'

I heard my name in your beating Heart again.

You are still my most secured and desired shelter.

''''''''''''''''''''..

"DI'..DI'." Mitin awakes up on Sreeja's call. She asked " What happened? Aap bheege saree mein floor pe baithe sho gayi? Kyun"( her voice shows her concern)

"Kuch nahin. Tu fresh ho le. Main Puja khatma kar ke aati hoon" She leaves without giving a chance to speak to Sreeja.After Mitin's departure Sreeja looks at the floor and picks up a little note book. The note book remained open and on it was headed "Thoughts". Sreeja strts reading''

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wow wow wow so superb update.

the poem you wrote is so lovely

awww the way he proposed her

and she all needed was to hear this from him


and there first night

kash sab aise hote ya koi aisa mil jaaye

haaye mere mr's kitne ache dikhenge iss story mein


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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Guys help me out...ek picture doongi...uspe Princess ka sorry yahan Doctor cum Mamma ka face dalna hai...Please Foram, Ria kar do na yaar.


Hey Foramdi and Ria...please see this...yahan jo girl hai uspe Mouni ki face paste karna hai...please I need this for my next updates. Please help me out.


mujhe edit kane nahi aayga but tujhe aisa hi kuch new de sakti hn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: foram.


mujhe edit kane nahi aayga but tujhe aisa hi kuch new de sakti hn


pLEASE di dijiye...I need badly.
DeewaniRimi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Thanks Foramdi...
Guys this is her exact attire when she got Sid's proposal.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
😃my god rimi, tu itne acche thoughts kaiselikh sakti hai yaaar, its so beautifully written, i got lost in your words, it was just lovely, you are so so talented, a big applause for you👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
awww...superb lovely upd rimi!!😃❤️
nd bout tht pic, foru ne bana diya na? agar koi hlp chahiye hogi, toh bata dena😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Hehe ria par vo pic phunny lag raha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
lovely poem..you are great poet

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