SS kriyaansh swaron important check pg112(09/2)

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Zona I am writing ss maine pyaar kiya update...
Itz almost complete...
Within a dayi will update that...
Then will update other ss also...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

amazing update

seriously

wow!!!!

bt rey is actually a looser...

phir kriya ko naraz kar diya...

huh!!!!

swayam i the bestes friend ever

i love him so much...

please kriyaansh ka patch up kara do!!!! 😳

and some swaron scenes too...😳

waiting for the next update

waiting for the pm

do pm me

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Awesome uodate yr...
Urgh...ye rey ..he is such an idiot...he disappointed lriya..
Aur ab tak confess bi kiya nai...poor kriya..always she had to confess..do everything..
Eagerly waiting for the next update to know how rey is going ti make up his fault
Update soon

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Sorry guys for late update...sorry...and one more thing, this ss will end very soon...only couple of updates left...whatever I planned for this ss, I have covered it except one major thing...and that particular episode will be the last grand update of this ss...I think after this update and I will give one update to just shape the story for last scene then the final update...thats it...so I will try my level best to make these couple of updates enjoyable to you guys...lets see...now here is the part 13...enjoy...

recap-

Sw: smiles - bata kya hua

Rey: kuch nahi bas we both were craving for each others love but when I got the chance, I failed to express my love...tho she z upset...itne dino baad mile the...naturally she was expecting u know(he was just staring at her n telling all this to sw)

Sw observes his sadness n guilt...smiles - i know...(its now rey looks at sw) I can understand...dont worry tumhare paas pura night hai sab teek karne ke lie..

Rey : but kaise?

Sw : give her whatever she deserves..

Rey: sabke saamne?

Sw: smiles - well (pause for few secs) pyaar kia tho darna kya?(winks at rey n left from there to join the gang)

Rey smiles n follows sw...

Part 13:

All went to have dinner...rey sat besides kriya...swaron sat opposite to kriyansh...others sat randomly around the dining table...kriya starts avoiding rey though he was sitting next to her...he finds hard to talk to her infront of everyone...she was just eating slowly and chatting with everyone...all were sharing what all happened in her absence...actually she was not in a mood to eat but for her didz sake she was eating...she was really upset after her small clash with rey...to get kriya's attention, rey starts to cough loudly...she immediately stands up from her chair and gave him water to drink...and also starts rubbing his back slightly...the care, concern and affection was clearly visible in her eyes..rey felt really bad for hurting her...though kriya gave him water and treating him all affectionately, she didn't utter a word...once rey's expressions became normal, she sat back...she understood that rey did it purposely but didn't react on it...rey to got from her expression that she understood his trick...but he was expecting some reaction from her...but to his badluck she sat back and starts her chatting with others once again...he can make out that kriya is sad from her tone but he was helpless..she was not giving him any chance to talk to her...and that too infront of everyone, it was impossible...

Rey starts thinking how to get her attention...how to get her reaction...kriya was taking some dish from dining table which was lil bit far from her reach so she was bending her upper body lil bit on table and trying to take...in that process her top moved a bit up revealing her smooth waist as she was wearing low waist jeans...rey's eyes fell on her waist and he immediately gulps...he felt like touching her waist...he looks at her face and finds that she was laughing...actually she was snatching some food bowl from swayam and passing it to others and then snatching some other bowl from neil and passing it to Sharon...she was playing something teasing all and having fun...rey couldn't pay much attention towards all that after seeing her waist...all were enjoying snatching some food from each other and laughing...rey again moves his eyes on her back...this time it was too much for him to resist touching her because this time kriya was leaning lil bit more on table and revealing more tempting waist to rey..(kriya was sitting right side of rey)...without wasting time rey slides his hand on her waist and squeezes slightly...kriya immediately sits back on her chair...she was shocked by his sudden action..but she didn't not dare to look at him...no one looks at her because they were still busy in their teasing each other game...and they were enjoying like hell laughing loudly...rey didn't pay any attention towards their friends kiddish game...kriya tries to move in her chair to make him move his hand away from her waist...but more she tried,his grip on her waist became more strong...kriya was looking here and there lowering her eyes...she was breathing lil bit heavily...rey was observing her each movement and each facial expression closely...kriya feels week as reys grip on her waist was becoming more stiffer...she clutches her both hands tightly making them fists...rey observes this and slowly releases his grip on her waist but he didn't let it go completely...once he feels her body relaxing a bit, he moves her towards him still holding her waist and whispers in her ear(which is audible to only kriya) " tumne tho sirf hummare first kiss tak hi sapne dekhe hai baatcutter, lekin main kiss se bhi bahot aage badh chuka hoon mere sapne mein tumare sath"...saying this he takes his hand back from her waist slowly touching her back...she felt tickling sensation...felt like butterflies are dancing in her stomach...as soon as his hand totally away from her waist, she takes a deep breath calming her soul...rey smirks seeing her reactions...

She was about release her hands from tight fists, but rey's next movement made her to clutch the dining table edge tightly...this time her eyes were wide open and she was completely shocked...because this time rey slides his right hand on her left thigh...looking at her shocked expression, rey slowly taps and caresses her thigh to make her come out of shock lil bit and he succeeds...when she felt light taps, she changes her shocked expression somehow...though it was very difficult for her to become completely normal, she changes her facial expression so that no can doubt them...rey caresses her thigh for some more time and when he feels kriyas body stiffness slowly vanishing, he clutches her thigh...not tightly but enough to make her gulp...once again kriyas breath becomes uneven... fortunately all others were still busy in their stupid food snatching game...no one noticed kriyansh...

Rey was trying to make kriya say something or atleast to make her looks at him but all in vain...though she was reacting strongly to his touch but didn't give what he wanted...so he slides his hand between her thighs this time...kriya gulps immediately...she takes a glass of water and gulps it as fast as she can...she keeps the glass slowly on table taking deep breath...she was about to take her hand away from glass, rey starts stroking his hand between her thighs slowly in up and down movement...kriya clutches the glass with both her hands..she holds her breath this time shutting her eyes tightly...after few seconds of reys torture, she couldn't hold back her breath so she stands up from her chair with a jerk...making a sharp sound of chair...everyone looks at her this time pausing their game...

Sharon : arre kiddo kya hua?

Kriya: nothing...I will just go... and use washroom...

Neha : par hua kya? Itna paseena(sweating) kyun chut rahi hai tumhare chehre se?

Rey chuckles at this nehas question...this makes kriya to feel more nervous...

Kriya :kuch...kuch nahi...main abhi aayi...saying this she left the place in hurry...

Swayam : arre isse kya hua?

Vicky : han suddenly aise kyun chali gayi?

Rey : guys guys relax...u guys carry on ...main dekhta hoon baat kya hai...

Sharon : okay but jaldi aana aap dono...

Rey : i will just check her...saying this rey goes to wash room..

There in washroom kriya was standing infront of mirror...putting her palms on wash basins slab, shutting her eyes tightly...she was still breathing heavily...after few secs she takes deep breath and opens her eyes slowly only to find rey standing leaning on the door crossing his arms...he had a small satisfied smile on his face...kriya can make out it clearly though she was watching him in the mirror...kriya slowly turns towards him...rey takes a step towards kriya but stops n closes the washroom door before proceeding towards her further...kriya was just looking at the floor...she didn't want to look at him...she was already feeling week...after few seconds she felt him standing infront of her...she shuts her eyes once again when she felt reys hands moving upward from their orIgInal position...she was thinking all possible ways that rey can do with her that moment...but to her disappointment she didn't get any touch of him...it was almost a min since she closed her eyes...she slowly opens her eyes to see what is he upto this time...when she opens her eyes completely, she was really surprised to see rey standing infront of her holding his ears with his hands making an innocent face pressing his lips slightly...

Kriya clears her throat to make him react because she was still not in mood to initiate any conversation with him...

Rey : first of all I am sorry...

Kriya raised her eyebrows indicating "why"?

Rey : (still holding his ears) wo abhi jo kuch bhi maine kia bahar dining table pe...uske lie...sor sorry...

Kriya didn't say anything...she just removed his hands from his ears...

Rey: I am really sorry kriya...wo actually I was thinking how to make you talk to me...but suddenly I saw your waist I could not stop myself touching it...first time somehow I controlled but next moment I couldn't...aur maine touch kia...I am really sorry for what I did after that...but muje khud pata nahi chala main kaise wo sab kuch...I am really

Kriya: (cuts his sentence) thats okay rey...I can understand...

Rey : thank you for understanding me...and I am sorry for one more thing...mmm..I am sorry for whatever happened between us outside the door...I mean...woo..jo...u know...I mean hummare first kiss...ko leke clash hui hummare bich uske lie...

This time kriya didn't say anything...she just looks at floor...she was very hurt about that incident so she was unable to forgive him so easily...

Rey cups her cheek with his hand...immediately kriya shuts her eyes...his touch has lot of affection this time...she can feel that...rey slowly slightly rubbing his tumb on her cheek

Rey : kriya

Kriya : hmm ?

Rey : I am sorry for our first kiss incident...I am really really very sorry...please baatcutter meri baat tho suno ek bar plz...

Kriya opens her eyes slowly and looks at him..

Rey : kriya please dont think that I am that big idiot that I didn't want a proper kiss at that moment...I am dieing for it...itz just that I dont want to make you uncomfortable...trust me kriya jab tumne confess kia tha apne feelings tabse I wanted to kiss you...I always dreamt about it...par things were not in my favor always...hum dono kitne din tak sath rahe ye janne ke baad ki we both feel for each other? Not even a month...trust me kriya uss din pre valentine night pe jab me tumse milne aaya tha tumhare ghar, that day I planned to propose you...even maine ussi din humare first kiss bhi plan kia tha but ...nahi hua uss din...

Rey : and seriously kriya now not only kiss I have many other plans In my mind to shower my love to you...to express my feelings...but I dont want to do all of that forcefully or by making you uncomfortable...6 months baad mile hai kriya...aur ye 6 months ki gap bhi bahot kuch affect karta hai mere har action pe...u cant imagine baatcutter jab maine tumhe 6 months baad aaj suddenly stage pe dekha tho kaisa laga...sab log tumhe hug kie apne kushi express kie...muje bhi mann tha tab ki main bhi tumhe hug karu...kitna tumhe miss kia batau...but things were not same between us in that moment though we were same... muje bhi tumhe hug karne ka, kiss karne ka bahot mann hai but...but(taking deep breath)...dartha hoon kriya...ke tumhare reaction kya hoga if I hug you or kiss you...I am scared that my actions may make you uncomfortable...

And wo outside the door, uss waqt be I really really wanted to give you a passionate kiss jisse mere sare feelings tumhe realise ho...situation bhI tha...but as I said I really didn't have a slightest idea whether you ready for it or not...you dont know kriya how I controlled my self...but I was sure that butterfly kiss would not hurt you in any way so gave you that...I am sorry kriya...

Kriya hugs him immediately without wasting a second...

Kriya : no rey aap sorry mat bolo...I am sorry I was unable to understand you...

Rey : (cups her face with his phands...) no kriya...that's okay...I think humme acche se mauka nahi mila hai na abb tak to spend some time with each other and understand our feelings for one another...tho It happened...thats okay...

Kriya : I love you rey(looking into his eyes...she was still in his arms hugging him...looking at his face)

Rey moves lil bit away from the hug...

Rey : kriya I am really sorry for not expressing my feelings to you...I know since morning you tried many times to hear what I feel for you...but I was purposely not expressing anything just to annoy you...I am sorry...now I understood how much it had hurt you...aur uske lie tum jo saja dogi main karunga...but please no more misunderstandings or no more staying away from each other...please...tum jo kahoge wo main karunga...but please forgive me this time...you can give me any kind of punishment...I am ready to face it...

Kriya : 3 tasks...(showing middle 3 fingers...she had mischievous smile on her face)

Done...hope you guys like it...first time I wrote something like that...I am too poor in writing romantic scenes...please adjust with it...and please don't forget to give your reviews...specially on this update...please please please...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Suprised by sudden update...hadn't expected it...so Thanx!

WONDERFUL

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

ROCKING

LOVELY update

Juxt loved KRIYAANSH as always..LOVED WHATEVE REY SAID TO KRIA

NOW WANA SEE SWAYAM'S REACTION TO KNW ABT KRIA'S PAST

UPDATE SOON :)

Edited by zona_malik - 12 years ago