Originally posted by: smileysmi
wo sab tho teek hai zona par epilogue likhu tho kya likhu???sab kuch tho maine last update mein cover kardi hai...present and future...ab usse jyada aur kya likh sakti hu...kuch bhi idea nahi araha hai dimaag mein epilogue ke lie dear...
Originally posted by: zona_malik
Kuch funn likh do
ussi ko relate kar ke jo future plans likhen hain n all
hilarious sa
or anythng
try try n koi idea ata toh discuss kar lo..me ko bhe aya toh bata dun ge 😉
Originally posted by: smileysmi
ab iss ss mein tho mera dimaag nahi chal raha..tumhare paas koi idea ho tho batado...if it suits the track then will sure execute it...😉
Originally posted by: kreya204
It was just sooo awesome!!!!
I read it all on a go!! N at d end wen i read d last part...i was lyk it was worth it!!! Completely worth it!!! To read a story on d whole d3 gang!! Fat too completing it in a single day! Putting aside my work!!! I did have a thot dat wat if it wasnt worth d continuos tym i put into it?! Bt at d end i was highly satisfied wid d end!!
It was seriously a beautiful story!!!
N also der was no misconceptions in btwn taani n kriya!!!
N u also showed d cute romantic banters of kriyansh!! N also swayam's take on dat! 😉
It was in sm 8th part i think! D whole part i was waiting gor kriya to get done wid d truth!! Bt instead dey were playing around cracking jokes...telling each oder der pains in d simplest possible way!!! N dat was wat touched me!!!
It was lyk...if such a thing has happened den dey need to get back der comfort level wid each oder!! Though dey were ol d more comfortable being wid both of dem...bt it wasnt d same as wen she left dem!!
Der was a space created btwn dem...dey knew...n ol of dem together filled it wid der love n concern for each oder!!
N d talks,d teasing,d smiles,d tears...ol of it filled d space!!!
N den wen kriya felt at ease as b4... She stated d whole truth!!! D fact!!!
N d punishment thingie was v much cute!!!
Also d punishments dey provided to swayam!!!
N wen reyam were away...dey got a whole new version of kriya!!!
Of course dey were irritated cz of dis! Bt ol of dem had it beneath d core...dat dey have got kriya back! N dey didnt wanna hurt her or lose her in any case!!!
Kriya became d love guru!!!
She held a different seriousness behind her childish acts!!!
N d last part was amazing!!! I mean a guy lyk rey!!! Who was just living in his present...had ol of his future planned wid HER!!!!
Dat certainly was huge thing to do from his side!!!
I just loved it!!! I was literally feeling everything u wrote!!
I even had tears in sm of d scenes!!! N getting to d fact dat i dnt cry wenever possible!!! It was really a touching one!!!
It was grt, fantastic,mindblowing,emotional,awesome...bt overol touching!!!
I just simply loved it!!!!
From d start till d end!!!!
Plz do keep writing!! N pm me for ol of ur works n updates!! Plz!!!
Originally posted by: don girls
i am so excited to read your kriyam OS and i know it is going to be amazing like all your other work...! also can't wait for the kriyanch OS as i am in love with all the OS you have written so far for it...!
Please PM me when you have uploaded the OS, would love to read them, thanks
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