SS kriyaansh swaron important check pg112(09/2) - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
😉"Kr : rey agar main sab sach batadungi tho aap muje maarenge...(tears are still there in her eyes)

Rey : what?? Main tumhe q maarunga...? Dont behave childish kr...tell me everything now...plz

Kr : I know u rey...aap pakka muje marenge sab janne ke baad...

Rey : kr plz stop this now...n if u have done something which deserves a slap from me then ...I wont promise u that I vl not slap u...I vl make sure u vl get a nice slap so that u should not repeat the same mistake in future...now stop all this n tell me everything ...plz...

Kr : smiles...n whispers "LOVE YOU"

REY: was unable to believe...he wanted to hear it from her before she left him...n tried a lot to make her confess but she said he z more than best friend to her...she did not say "I love you" to him...nor he got the chance to say those 3 magical words to her...he planned he will propose her on Valentine's day but before that only they got separated ...but today unexpectedly she said those 3 magical words to him...he was on cloud 9...he kept on staring at her for couple of mins...then something strikes him...

Rey : wait agar tum ye sab bol ke mere gusse ko control karogi ya maar khane se bach jaoge tho u r wrong batcutter...if u have done something serious mistake which deserves a tight slap from me, then I vl make sure that u get that slap...so plz stop battering me.."

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME👏👏

SO LOVED IT😳😳

REY AAP MARENGE..Awww😲😲

finally kria's whole truth came infront of him

HAYYEEE was the only fink i chud fink of, the way u explained kria's love fr him

nw SWAYAM is left to knw the whole truth

n den

"Rey : was speechless...he was unable to digest whatever kr told him...he too loved her...he too missed her...he too cried...but not to this extent...he never thought kr loves him to this extent...he was finding unable to hold back his tears...

Kr : rey...plz rey aap mat royiye...plz...I know I did a big mistake by cutting my wrist...tried to suicide but I was not in my senses...plz rey...chahe tho 2 tappad mariye muje...but plz dont cry...plz rey...I am sorry...main fir kabhi aisa nahi karungi... main hoon hi jalli aapko tho pata haI na..plz rey...she was continuously shaking rey n saying sorry...rey was not looking at her..he was looking at other side because he doesn't want to face her n cry...

Kr : plz reyyy...plzzz(starts crying) but suddenly rey senses this n hugs her tightly..."


rey's reaction n everyfink was so amazing

so so so loved it

nw what was the reason of kria hiding frm lousian s aftr coming bak to Mumbai

n wana see sum new bondings like vicky-kria etc😉😉

update soon :)😛😛
Edited by zona_malik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
osum, mindblowing update
but u made me cry,,,
update d nxt part soon .. desperately waiting for it
Edited by divyani.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, how wonderful..👏

i want to cry too ..😭
i can only imagine pain she must carry around with her all the time..😔

lols i'm loving the scene of kriyaansh you set up..😃

simply beautifull in a sadistic kind of way..welldone.

this was awesome! Either way, i
love this sroty..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unresd on page 59 and 67 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it.. awesome post ..
too awesome..
each n every word was brilliant.. u showed kria's every emotions beautifully brilliantly..
kria loved rey to this extent that she tried suicide.. kria went through too much she was into depression n was hospitalized.. her dad n sharon came to c her n sharon slapped her n convinced abt rey.. it was brilliant update.. awesome loved it.. rey feeling sad n kept thinking abt kria's love for him n rey hugged her tight crying awesome update superb..
waiting for d next part update soon:-)

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon...cnt wait fr d nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all updates..they r awesm..i send u req. Plz me too wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
last 2 updates...they r amazing...dam emotional u made me cry...
poor kria hd gone through so much...
loved the updates...
thnx for pms n again sorry for commenting late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i had tears in my eyes while reading this update ... luved it very much ... impressive writing ... do continue and update soon and pm me whenever you update... 😊

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