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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you...thank u...thank u all for lovely comments...n thank you jinhone end mein comments kie haI bcoz unko shayad maine individually thank u nahi kaha hai...thanks a lot...I am updating the next part now...hope u guys will like it...n sorry for late update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 11:

Sh goes to her room n gets ready in 20 mins...she searches kr every where..she doesn't finds her..she calls to kr but it gives engage tone...after an hr kr comes back...

Sh : kahan the tum kiddo..?
Kr : oh didz main garden mein thi...accha muje fresh hona tha kya main tumhare room use kar sakti hoon didz? ?
Sh: yeah ofcourse ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai...chalo main bhi chalti hoon...
Kr : swayam??
Sh : wo guest room mein fresh hone gaya hai...come lets go..

They both go to sh's room..kr was getting ready...sh sitting on a bed...

Kr : (combing her hair infront of mirror) waise didu kya cooking chal rahi thi kitchen mein kuch der pehle??(looking at sh in the mirror)

Sh : tumhare lie kuch special bana rahi thi main..??

Kr : accha..?? Banaya mere lie but taste karaya sw ko??(holding her laughter)

Sh : did understand what kr said...actually she almost forgot that kr had seen her n sw so close in the kitchen...so she says - nahi kiddo wo bas acha bana hai ki nai dekh raha tha(remembering her romantic moment with sw in kitchen blushing) ...wait...wait a min...tumhe kaise pata maine sw ko taste karaya?? Did u c anything? I mean tum kitchen mein aayi thi...??

Kr: laughs out loudly...omg didz aap logo ko ye bhi pata nahi chala ke mein kitchen mein aake chali gayi...so much involved ??controls her smile n says waise accha laga finally aap dono ki love story aaghe badh rahi hai...

Sh : hmm (blushes)...waise tumhare love story kahan tak pahuchi?? I mean rey n sw ko tho I think u said about whatever happened ryt?? Unka reaction kaisa tha??

Kr: (goes n sits infront of sh on the bed) han bata dia. Undono ko...as expected sw felt bad...but atleast they understood my situation...

Sh : hmm dont worry baki sab bhi samajenge...

Sw: kya samjenge??(he was standing in the door) kya main andar aasakta hoon...??

Sh : offcourse sw...come in..

Kr :I think muje chalna chahie...kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahti mein..

Sw n sh : shut up kr...then all 3 laughs..

Sw : u know what kr...muje sabse jada kushi tho iss baat se horahi hai ki tum aur sh sisters ho...I mean dono important ppl of my life, sisters hai...n upper se tumhare aur rey ke beech bhi sab kuch teek hogaya abb..matlab meri tho aishh hai...abb life long main mere lady love n dono besties ke sath rahunga..kahi bhi rahe hum future mein, hum charo hammesha milte rahenge touch mein rahenge...

Sh smiles...she understood how much he had missed his bestie kr..

Kr : I hope so...

Sh : what do u mean by hope so..? Ofcourse milte rahenge..infact sath mein ek hi city mein settle hone ki try karenge hum.

Sw : observes pain in kr's eyes...he goes n puts his hand on kr's shoulder n says - waise rey ne kya punishment diya tumhe..? (He just tries to change the topic n succeeds also)

By remembering reys punishment, kria starts to blush...

Sh : look at her ..she is blushing

Sw : whistles- finally aage bad rahi hai aapki ghaadi..

Rey comes there by the time..looking at kriya

Rey : kiski ghaadi kahan bhad rahi hai..?

Kr : kuch nahi...wo bas aise hi...neeche chale sab log agaye honge...saying this she leaves from there..the other 3 gets confused...

Sh : rey aap dono ke beech sab teek hai na abb??

Rey : haan sab teek tho hai

Sw : rey tune usse kya punishment diya hai..?

Rey tells them...

Sh : okay...rey sw, kriyA ne aap sab ko Aaj sab kuch bataya hai na??(confused n serious)

Sw : sab kuch matlab?

Rey : usne sirf ye bataya ki wo hum sab ko chod kar aise q gayi thi achanak se...

Sh : iska mtlb...she didn't tell u guys whatever happened in her life after that...? ? Or how we met??(lost deep in toughts)

Reyam : nahi...

Rey : kya hua tha sh uske life mein..? Tum aise q puch rahe ho?

Sw : han sh kya hua tha uske baad?

Sh : I think aap log ye baat ussi se jaano tho better hai..n not like this..

Rey : mtlb?

Sh : I mean try to make her share everything with u guys slowly...dont force her to tell...n rey plz be nice to her always...she loves u a lot...nahi reh sakti wo tumhare bina...(holding his hand) plz rey...marjayegi wo tumhare bina...plzzz

Rey : wipes her tears...- sh plz...aise mat bolo...kuch nahi hoga usse...n main uske sath hoon na abb...u dont worry..but baat kya hai sh...

Sw : plz sh dont hide anything from us...

Sh : no...I dont want to..but agar kr se jaanenge tho hi better hai...she should throw out everything from her mind n heart...then only wo aaghe bad payegi life mein...(wiping her tears) n lets go guys sab aagaye honge...saying this she to leaves from there..

Sw n rey looks at each other n understood that something went wrong or something big has happened in kr's life..they need to handle the situation carefully now...n they too goes n join the others..

In living area, vi nil kr ne ri si bh am were singing n dancing...actually they were not singing they were shouting the song "yaaro dosti(shaan)" n not dancing they were standing on the couch holding each others hand n moving left to right n right to left...n sh tani aashi were enjoying the scene infront of them..rey n sw too join sh...once the song ends...nil starts singing dil dosti dance track n this time even sh reyum aashi also join them...

Tani felt left out...she was about to go from there,

Sw : kahan ja rahe ho tani..??

Tani : holding back her tears, nahi bas garden mein jarahi thi...ek call karna tha..

Rey n kr looks at each other..n understands tanis situation...

Kr : okay lets go tani..main bhi tumhare sath chalti hoon..

Tani : aap??(confused n shocked)

Kr : haan..issi bahane hum baat bhi karenge n dost bhi ban jayenge..

Tani : smiles n just nods...n they leave from there...

GARDEN:

Both tani n kr were silent...both were not getting what to speak..how to start the conversation..then kr takes the initiative.

Kr : tumne bahana banaya tha na call ka...??
Tani : smiles...- tho aapko pata chal gaya tha..(they sit on a bench)
Kr : haan..n reason bhi samaj gayi thi main..
Tani: looks at kr with wet eyes..
Kr : rey ne sabkuch bataya muje..pause for few secs then- aap dono ke beech jo b incidents hue hai aaj tak sab bataya unhone...
Tani : wipes her tears - sorry...wo bas hogaye...usme rey ki koi galti nahi hai...meri galti thi sab kuch..unhone tho hammesha aap hi se...(she could not complete the sentence)
Kr : tani galti aap dono ki nahi thi..pyaar affection chees hi aisi hai..but tani I just want to share my part of story to u...pause for few secs...it will help u to decide about what u want...
Tani: just nods
Kr tells her each n everything...kaise rey n uski story start hui n q usse sab chodke jana pada...n uske baad uske life kaise badal gayi(jo sw n rey bhi nahi jante hai abb tak)..tani could not control her tears she starts crying hugging kr tightly...both cry for few mins..then wiping her tears,
Kr : tani tum ye jante hue bhi ke rey jisse tum pyar karte ho wo kissi aur se pyar karta hai, u r so strong..tum thuti nahi ho..but main rey ke bina nahi reh sakti..mar jaungi ..try b nahi kar sakti unse bichdne ki...try tho door ki baat main tho soch bhi nahi sakti meri life without rey..so plz folding her hand infront of tani...
Tani : kr plz...kya kar rahe ho ap ye...u know kr, tumhare story sunne ke baad muje lag raha hai main tho kabhi rey se pyar hi nahi ki thi...it was just an attraction...infatuation...asli pyaar tho aapka hai...
Kr : thank you tani..
Tani : wiping kr's tears - tho aaj se aap aur rey couple ho mere lie...but mera kya hoga? ( making fake sad face)
Kr : smiles n says koi baat nahi dhoond lenge koi handsome tumhare lie...
Tani : pakka??
Kr : pakka ...they hug each other...



Done...I know its a boring update...sorry..


Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...pls change the blue colour to black...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rhu90

awesome update...pls change the blue colour to black...


changed font color...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi


changed font color...😊

thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
But wat happened in kriya's life...
Pls update next part fast...
Isme bhi kriyaansh nahi tha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum part
kriyaansh part was not der
wat is d part of kriya story
update soon
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
she has not yet revealed the whole truth except to taani...
continue soon wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome chappy
kria teasing sharon abt her romantic moment with swayam in kitchen
sharon blushing remenbering the moment
kriya hide one more part of her life from reyam nd later on share with taani
lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reswa. .
Unress. .
As usual awsome-dowsome update. . .
KriSha bond is realy cute and strong. .i realy-realy loved it. . .
Heheheh. . .humari kriya madam teasing swaron on that kitchen scene. . .
Hehehe:-D. . .
Superb. . . . . .
Kriya ne reyam se apni life ke baare mai kuch chupaaya hai. .bt,kya??
Ohh god.ek aur mistry. .
God knws,abb yeh kab solve hoga. . . .
Hehehe.:-D:-D . . .
Kriya and gang doing masti. . .singing songs. . .
Hehehe. .how cute. . .
I liked kriya and taani's part. . .
Thank god taani yaha koi drama nahi kerne waali and humare KR ke beech nahi aa rahi. . . .
Mumny. . .mummy. .;-(

,phir se No KR Scenes. . .;-(;-(





. . .
Smi. . . .
Tell me frankly,
do u have any prob with KR???
No naaa. . .
Toh jab bhi mai KR ke scenes ki demand kerti hu toh y dnt u give some?? . . . .
Pls yaar. . .nxt time,
bhagwaan ke liye KR scenes daal dena. . .
Pls. . . . . . .
Werna i swear. . .
Mai tere pure ss mai aansu ki nadi<river> bahaa dungi. . . .


So,pls maate. . .
Hum bacho pe apni kripa karo aur kuch KR scenes do. . . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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