Arshi ff : GUILT OR LOVE? [V. Imp Author's NOTE, Pg 51, 12th Feb] - Page 28

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Welcome back Dee, it is so good to see an update for this story after such a long time! :P hehe.:D Let's hope I never get this late..;)

I was anticipating the confrontation between Khushi and Arnav and Arnav's apology at that too but you quite cleverly avoided it in this update! *sniff *sniff Dun worry... You will get to see that confrontation soon...😉 But you'll have to see if he's going to get that chance to apologize or not..

I couldn't help but feel shattered for Khushi yet again, while other people have moved on with their lives she never really got the chance to move on. She is still as hurt as she was a long time ago. And Arnav is responsible for her condition. You showcased her emotions with such conviction that I can't help but commend you for it. So much so that my whole focus was on her and her deteriorating emotional state that I couldn't concentrate on anything else that transpired within the chapter. The happy moment in the chapter was I guess Annie singing praises of Ms Gupta. Here is to brighter chapters! Just the response I wanted to see..:) That was really a tough job and I'm glad that effect came out strong. Thank you for the detailed comment..:) Really appreciate that..:)

Appreciate the PM! :-) 🤗

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Me:D

Welcome back Deepti. I am glad ur continuing this🤗 I guess that's because of you...😉

the chapter was lovely, I am actually waiting to know ASR's reaction when he will come to know that Ms Gupta is Khushi:D haha..:D I'm glad you liked it..:) And I'm waiting to update that part...:D Just a couple more updates left for that part... Or I might make it happen soon too...;)

Poor Khushi, I feel bad for her:(

Continue soon:)

Originally posted by: juliet7dead

reserved.
didi kuch din ke baad review dungi.. abhi tym nahi hai bilkul.. :P
pakka promise!

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haan to meri pyaari DIDI 😆 Sweet bhool gayi?? :P :P
ITNAA CHHOTAAA UPDATE!!!!!!😲
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ek to itne dino baad update karte ho... uske baad itna sa nanha munha saa update dete hue sharam naa aayi chhorii thaare ko!🥱 Arre main badi besharam hu. :D Toh chhori manne sharam aawe koni..:P :D

aur na mujhe bohot curiosity ho rahi hai gift mein kya hai ye jaanane ko!! lekin ab mujhe to ye 2 years baad hi pata chal paaega jab aap update karoge tab... haina??😡😡😡 Gift me kya hai maine chapter 9 me mention kia tha..😛 Ja ke phir se padho PUTRI..:D Haan lekin, it has a great significance in this story.. That you will find out before 2 yrs gets ovr..:P :D

haan to... update was super duper dhaansu!! i loved the way u changed the scenes and how beautifully emotions in each scene was quite different from the other. like khushi bechaariii ujdey haal me.. fir annie ki happiness, payal ka concern, arnav ka sad sad rehna fir Nk ki entry. aap please apna haaath mujhe de do na. Awww itne cute cute comments degi to main sharam se laal ho jaungi..😳 Glad you liked it so much...:D And hope you like the next one too..☺️ I'm going to update very soon..;)
nahi??
acha koi baat nahi. Haath chahiye?? To Thakur se ja ke maan na..:P Basanti ki jaan kyu lena chahti hai?? :D :P
chalo ab ye bataao ki story ko kab tak sad chalaaoge? i want pehle waali khushi back. jaldi karo jaldi jaldi!!! Errr... I don't know!! This story is a sad one.. But there will be happy moments too.. I assure you...😃
aur na.. please aapko bhagwan ka vaasta- NEXT UPDATE JALDI DE DENA varna itna tang karungi msg kar kar ke enggineeringg bhul jaaoge saari!😆 Tu pagal hai...😆 Kisine bataya ni tujhe...? :D :D
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Thodi pagal par cute...🤗

i luv u.. miss me. ☺️ I lub you too...Muaahh And I do miss you Putri...:*
main bohot achi hu.😳 Haha...😆 woh to hai...😉