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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

res😆😉

i'll read it again and then comment😆

but still you are torturing us😭

Arjun kab bachayega Riya ko😭

unres😃

hmmm wow Arjun and the others actually sank so many boats😆, that wasnt something i had expected😆

but that sikander, he cheated and now he's taking Riya away😭

So now the story will move to Arjun's hometown and wow what a precap you gave us😉

Now for the Ariya scenes, 😳

Arjun couldnt control himself, he actually lost control and kissed her... or you plan to give us more spicy details in next update😆

The kisses were so ☺️, i'm still blushing thinking of them😆

But Muskaan this is not done, when will Arjun really save our princess????

You said very quickly😭, but till now Arjun doesnt even know where Riya really is😭

And finally thankfully Sikander is not touching Riya and more🤢...

So now our dear dhumki queen, dont take too much time to update again😆

you see i'm also turning evil due to your influence😈...

WE need more updates...

😉

And yep me first to comment😉

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

RES

hey Muskaan,

firstly my apologies for not writng much on previous chapter ..i was busy sumwhere...

n i expect u will accept it ...😆😉

...

Coming to Chapter 7 ka part 1 ...

I m liking sikander ...first imagining Vidyut n den those tasks

they r so much fun to read...

its like i m playing a video game ...WOW

thanks for writing it so beautifully

the way arjun n rest team were firing d boats ...amazingly written 👏

I liked d way Arjun n Sikander conversation took place

n den finally ...ETF guessing sikander's wherabouts

Liked Arjun's urge of finding her at all costs...

~~~~

Now coming to Romantic part ...

me blushing n smiling n Happy

Arjun lost control for d first tym

dere first Romantic kiss...earlier it was forced

OMG How can sum1 care for ny1 like dat...Ria working so silently so dat his sleep is not disturbed ...SO sweet of her

Ria is such a sweetheart ...😊

I m in a dreamy trance ...Ariya Rocks!!!!

n 1 more thing ...how will i sleep tonite ...i was abt to go to sleep after reading d update ...par now i m dreaming abt Ariya ...😆

PURVA

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

I completely loved the update...

So ACP Arjun Rawte is back in action...i completely agree with shree,that when they will catch that silly and sick fellow Sikander they are gonna shoot him the same way the way they are shooting those boats...
i hope they catch him soon...
ARIYA flashback was very good...and what to say about RIYA,she is a sweetheart...

Thanks for the PM...
Post Soon!

Edited by rajvi20 - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

arjun kab dundega riya ko😭
bechari riya kitna tadap rahi hogi😭
sikender cheated arjun,he is taking her😭
riya mrng wiyhout any noice work so sweet that to for arjun
oh god arjun couldnt control and kissed riya,
firstly he left her,after watching her face he again kissed her
she too responed him...
finially they broke the kiss and riya was standing on arjuns legs😳
comings to precap now
sikender went to arjuns old house
so he is doing something fishy right

Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

argh!!!!!!!! all that was a prank?? feeling seriously frustrated with this sikender!!! now what he wants.. he isnt playing fair.. n now he wants to got to arjun's hometown.. what is he planning?? i seriously hate this man!!

poor riya!! she is in hell now...

she is so sweet.. really cared for him!! n so great arjun rawte lost his control after all!! 😆 update soon!!

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

hai...

just read it.

it was beautifully written.

so now u have taken the story 2 arjun's hometown

waiting 4 more interesting parts 4m ur part.

arjun is so determind 2 find riya.the way he was fighting with the boats 2 fing riya...gosh we can see hw much he cared for her and love her.

sik why r u doing all this

and again i m afraid that he will harm arjun's father.eager 2 know why he s going 2 solapur(chakkar kya hai)

riya s also with him

hope arjun will soon find riya and make sik pay 4 all his deeds

the past was presented so beautifully.

riya cared 4 and loved arjun so much.

waiting 4 the next part

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athira

@shruti-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

awesome update

poor riya she is suffering so much ,really wanted to kill that sikender

i am happy that atleast arjun & team knows where he is going

really cant wait now for next part

plss cont soon

once again brilliant update ,loved it.

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

big hugs & kisses 🤗

first i felt really bad for arjun when he could not find her

but you made it with the last part

please jaldi se aage barho coz i want to see arjun mend his mistakes of keeping riya away from him😆

and will be eagerly waiting for the changes you mentioned

you just be prepared for writing long nice & passionate updates

i we all are already addicted to this ffs👍🏼

wonderful update but

super awesome and romantic arjun😳

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Hey. ...

Mindblowing update 👏

I just loveeed the way the team were at the extremeness to find their Riya back !!!! 😲

Yayyy !!!! We got to see a prince Arjun as well as a romantic one in this update 😉

Hate that sikander ... Creep again tricked them 😡

I really hope that Ariya meet soon ... can't wait for their reunion ... 😛

I'm really in awe and deeply touched after reading Riya's selflessness n her unconditional love for Arjun ... 😲

N omg the kiss was blissful ... Whooo Arjun kissed Riya thrice 😉 ... This really can't get better 😳 😉

Yayyy !!!!! they finally got a lead against against that sikander ... N even the commissioner gave him a permission to do whatever he wanted ... I can't wait for Arjun to beat the living daylights out of that filthy Sikander

Edited by Gurmeet4Drashti - 12 years ago