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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

wow amazing chapter
loved rathore nd shreetu
fell bad about arjuns past it was painfull
loved the flashback of ariya
thanks for pm and for the long update
hope arjun find riya very soon
cotinue soon

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iluvrainaarti

@iluvrainaarti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

That was amazing. The flashback that told us Roshni's story was very emotional but I loved the lines "Roshni's eyes widened and the way she looked at me, I can't forget her eyes, they were loving, caring, sacrificing! She smiled at him for the first time and said, "I would die a hundred deaths to save Arjun from one!" It made me smile seeing her love for Arjun. Loved how the ETF team consoled and assured Arjun that nothing would happen to Riya. The flashback that showed Riya's feelings after the rain incident was great. I was really awed when I read how easily Riya trusted him after everything. Thanks for the pm.

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Its just wooww...
Wah wah kia baat hai...
Again the bestest update...
Liked th e convo of Rathore-Arjun..love the way they were trying to Samjhe Ya Samjhao to each other
The way Arjun confessed his love infront of them...haaayee.. 👏 😉
The flashback scenes were awexome too...
😆..
Great update..
Thnx for adding me...
Plzz update soon...but now enough of torture to our love birds..nw they shud b togather na...so plz cath Sik fast...welll its a request...lol...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Wow! Thank you for the amazingly long update! I loved it! It was great seeing Arjun's past and what made him so harsh and mean. I can't wait to read more!

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aptl123

@aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

a really wonderful update...

poor Riya... really feel bad for her

and that stupid sik. had already killed Roshni...

now he is behind the Riya...

hope Arjun would save her ... would show his love to Riya...

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Thank you for the PM. This update was absolutely amazing! You are an amazing writer! 👏

I loved the flashback where Riya trusted him so easily even after what Arjun did to him and I loved how he says good night to her.

Poor Arjun and Roshni went through so much cuz of that Sikandar!

I can't wait to read when Arjun will find Riya and shower her with love! 😊

Keep up the amazing work!

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anwesha bhattacharyya

@Bleedingheart.

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

read it all in one go loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

guys i'm a new user , pls help me out...😕

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

awww u didn't pm chalo koi ni...!!!!😃

amazing update...!!!!👏

lvd it...!!!!!😊

poor arjun dat is y he behaved so rudely with riya...!!!!😭

n poor roshni...!!!!

hope riya and arjun will meet soon..!!!😳

n arjun will kill dat sikander..!!!🤢

continue soon...!!!! 😳

n pm me wen u update..!!!😳

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

awesome update :) i am speechless after reading the update... you have written everything so beautifully... the way you have explained arjun's pain is just amazing :) and now we finally know that why he was behaving like that with riya

feeling so bad for roshni :( the way sikander killed her was horrible...

i was literally crying while reading the whole update :) it was so emotional...loved the conversation between rathore and arjun

and the flashback was amazing :) awww they both love choclate cake :) arjun eating choclate cake like a baby :) how sweet

feeling bad for riya she couldn't even sleep on the bed after that incident..

she was so scared of arjun but the good thing was that she still trusted him :) loved the way you have explained each and every emotion

the lines by unknown were really good :)

hope arjun kills sikander soon and get his riya back

happy new year to you too :)

precap seems awesome

can't wait to read more

thanks for the PM :)

update soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

😆 you said it was a very long update, par mujhe to bahut chota laga😆

so ek chota sa comment hi milega🤣

Hmmm finally you have told us why Arjun has been treating Riya so badly dear

though i shudder at what he went through, seeing Roshni die in that way, i guess like Rathore said, Sikander managed to scare him since Arjun had been running away from love

but i like the way Rathore gave courage to him and finally the whole ETF team is now with him to save Riya

surely this time they'll succeed and Sikander will have to die( your Sikander - the photo you gave us before, kafi cute hein😉)

and now let's come to the Ariya scenes, like always they were very sweet and innocent😆

Liked the way Arjun looked after her, was funny imagining Arjun eat the choco cake😃

and finally the bed scene was beautifully written, i'm glad that despite how much Riya love Arjun and will always trust him, the way Arjun has treated her is bound to scar anyone, and you havent made Riya forget that at all...

Finally when will our hero save the heroine and then some lovey-dovey scenes, Arjun asking for forgiveness and begging and redemption😳 haye...

Lovely update as usual, please continue soon our Dhumki Queen😆

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago